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First year-Chapter 33
Tasha offered, “We ordered some Sangria, Margueritas and chips and salsa for the table while we were waiting. I believe there might be some Tequila shots on the way. Is there anything else you’d like to have?”
I indicated no and sat down to enjoy what was already on the table. Surprisingly I found myself drawn to Mel. I was not sure if it was simply her face or her personality. She was beautiful to say the least, but she was outgoing, funny, sharp and had an air of confidence about her that you some might interpret as arrogance. Given the tongue lashing she gave me over Mr. Vargas, arrogance seemed a fair assessment. But she turned out to be a very appealing person to know. Despite the way we initially met, I found myself drawn to her and wanting to know more about her. As we all began to loosen up with the Tequila coursing through our bodies I found myself entirely captivated by her. It was the middle of the week and despite the initially voiced plans to be careful with what we were drinking, as the evening went on, and the inhibitions were loosened, we found those attempts to be cautious were lost. My date Papi, was busy being Papi and was distracted by the myriad ex or would be lovers who paraded by to greet her. I actually was quite happy with her distraction and did not discourage any of her need to speak to anyone else in the restaurant.
I was curious as to the relationship between Tasha and Mel. Tasha never spoke of anyone in her life but it was clear she was close to Mel. I did not get the sense this was romantic but clearly it was close relationship. Perhaps they had been together for awhile and now were beyond the star-crossed portion of their relationship. I listened carefully to their conversation and found there were no “us” or “we” mentioned. In the end I concluded correctly, they were nothing more than good friends. The noise level in the restaurant was very high. Voices competed with the mariachi band so it made it difficult to have conversation across the table with Mel. I focused my attention on Carmen, who I realized as we spoke, I really missed seeing and interacting with. Her date certainly gave me several stare downs which made me assume Carmen told her about our past. From Vanessa’s cold shoulder to me, I assumed this might be the reason she did not attend my birthday party with Carmen. She was certainly attractive but her coldness to me and the rest at the table left me feeling she was absolutely not right for Carmen. I was anxious to talk to Carmen alone and hinted I wanted her to come with me to the ladies room.
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Haven’t gotten a chance to read it yet, but just wanted to say welcome back!!!! Missed ya!
Hey Squirl, you posted it twice. :) I wonder where Hel and Mel will eventually fall relationship-wise. I’m still on the Belena ship for this one though. Thanks for posting. That was a treat!
oh Squirl i have soooooo missed this story – really glad you’re posting again! i’m always rooting for Tibette but you’re stories seem to get me craving belena…never thought it possible!!! Im with the others as well, we love a jealous Bette, surely she’s gonna have to do something about all these women vying for Helenas attention, pps!
Niiiice! And she’s back in the saddle! Indeed, we have truly missed this story and look forward to where you take it and our lovely Helena. You know we are all thinking Belena but there is so much great potential for lots of drama as things continue to develop so we will just buckle up and enjoy the ride. Again, welcome back! Giddy up! lol!
Oh S, I coming to comment I really really am sorry but I just havent’t had the time to read it all yet, but am really, really excited to see you back. be back soooooooooooooooon and I can. Thank you so much, Md aka Oma
Again, welcome back. Excellent post as always. :)
So Helena is back w/her hodgepodge of options, so good to be Helena. Ya know sometimes I wonder Dr. Squir if your truly a Belena or not or just like to have lots of fun on the way. Waiting to find out. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Squirl, are you teasing us or what, I thought we were going to get another chapter. I guess I’ll have to start my week-end bumping again. Bump-Bump.
loved the update…what’s up with mel…hmmm…interesting???
Well, what can I say, except so glad you posted again. What will Bette think or have to say to Helena about Mel, because you know how hospitals are, before Helena gets back to work everyone will know about Papi’s date night with her and Mel.
Thanks bombasticbully on the heads up that it was posted twice. I normallly read through it when I post but I was so exhausted last night and I just wanted to get it out. I did fix the duplication. I should have suspected something was up when I noticed it was 13 pages long. I didn’t think I had written that much.
I am so happy you are back! Just last week I was thinking about this story last week and wondering if you would finish it. I love the new character and the complications it brings. I also love the offhand references to Tina, who is (at least so far) merely a background character. I have absolutely no idea where you are going with this. I am looking forward to the ride. .
S, I am so happy that you posted this story, was wondering what happened,LOL. I too am with bombastically band wagon,,Belena but enjoyed this chapter!
Great update Squirl! Loved it. Helena has so many beautiful women to choose from, but I’m hoping Bette will come around in a jealous fashion and fight for her. PPS!!
Sounds like the evening has provided a little something to fuel Bette’s jealousy. That might be a good thing.
would love to see an update i love this story!