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First year-Chapter 33
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I’m not sure how she broke away from the watchful eyes of Vanessa but she did meet me in the ladies room. Before I could make a statement she cut me off, “Don’t say anything. I know. She’s very clingy. I thought she would be okay but I can feel the daggers she is throwing your way.”
I was going to ask why she didn’t bring her to my birthday party but I realized from Vanessa’s behavior I already knew why. I asked Carmen, “What does she know about our history?”
Carmen sighed deeply, “Practically everything.”
I stared disapprovingly at Carmen. How could she dare tell a prospective lover “everything” about a past lover? “Why? Why would you do that? You should know you can’t tell a possible lover ‘everything’ about an ex.”
“Helena we were just friends. We were just talking and I told her about you. She was getting over her boyfriend and she would tell me about it. In support, I shared with her some of the pain and disappointment I felt with us. I didn’t think she was a future lover at all. But we got close and an attraction grew and she began to explore that side of her sexuality.”
I shook my head and smiled at Carmen, “You love being someone’s first don’t you.”
“Helena it wasn’t like that. It just developed. Then I began to see the jealous, possessive side of her. She knew you would be here tonight and she said she was looking forward to meeting you. I thought she would be okay.” She began to pace anxiously, “I’m sure by now she is stewing knowing you and I are in here together. I know I will have hell to pay and a lot of explaining to do.”
I agreed with her, “I’m sure she wanted to meet and try to kill me with her visual darts. I was going to ask why you didn’t invite her to my birthday party but now I’m glad you didn’t. She is quite, for lack of better words, unfriendly.”
Carmen laughed at my statement. “She really isn’t unfriendly. She is insecure. We are just getting to know each other. You are a bit intimidating to come after as a lover. You are wealthy, beautiful and really just sex on legs. It’s difficult enough for me to be your ex, so I just can imagine how she must feel knowing you are my ex.”
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Haven’t gotten a chance to read it yet, but just wanted to say welcome back!!!! Missed ya!
Hey Squirl, you posted it twice. :) I wonder where Hel and Mel will eventually fall relationship-wise. I’m still on the Belena ship for this one though. Thanks for posting. That was a treat!
oh Squirl i have soooooo missed this story – really glad you’re posting again! i’m always rooting for Tibette but you’re stories seem to get me craving belena…never thought it possible!!! Im with the others as well, we love a jealous Bette, surely she’s gonna have to do something about all these women vying for Helenas attention, pps!
Niiiice! And she’s back in the saddle! Indeed, we have truly missed this story and look forward to where you take it and our lovely Helena. You know we are all thinking Belena but there is so much great potential for lots of drama as things continue to develop so we will just buckle up and enjoy the ride. Again, welcome back! Giddy up! lol!
Oh S, I coming to comment I really really am sorry but I just havent’t had the time to read it all yet, but am really, really excited to see you back. be back soooooooooooooooon and I can. Thank you so much, Md aka Oma
Again, welcome back. Excellent post as always. :)
So Helena is back w/her hodgepodge of options, so good to be Helena. Ya know sometimes I wonder Dr. Squir if your truly a Belena or not or just like to have lots of fun on the way. Waiting to find out. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Squirl, are you teasing us or what, I thought we were going to get another chapter. I guess I’ll have to start my week-end bumping again. Bump-Bump.
loved the update…what’s up with mel…hmmm…interesting???
Well, what can I say, except so glad you posted again. What will Bette think or have to say to Helena about Mel, because you know how hospitals are, before Helena gets back to work everyone will know about Papi’s date night with her and Mel.
Thanks bombasticbully on the heads up that it was posted twice. I normallly read through it when I post but I was so exhausted last night and I just wanted to get it out. I did fix the duplication. I should have suspected something was up when I noticed it was 13 pages long. I didn’t think I had written that much.
I am so happy you are back! Just last week I was thinking about this story last week and wondering if you would finish it. I love the new character and the complications it brings. I also love the offhand references to Tina, who is (at least so far) merely a background character. I have absolutely no idea where you are going with this. I am looking forward to the ride. .
S, I am so happy that you posted this story, was wondering what happened,LOL. I too am with bombastically band wagon,,Belena but enjoyed this chapter!
Great update Squirl! Loved it. Helena has so many beautiful women to choose from, but I’m hoping Bette will come around in a jealous fashion and fight for her. PPS!!
Sounds like the evening has provided a little something to fuel Bette’s jealousy. That might be a good thing.
would love to see an update i love this story!