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Flames of Passion Chapter 56
At 7 pm on the dot there was a loud knock at the front door of Bette and Tinas residence.
Low and behold Bette and Tina were actually ready; they had showered earlier in the afternoon and eventually, after some heated discussion, exploration and advice from each other, they had decided on their attire for the evening.
Both women dressed in fitted black jeans and their respective shirts, neat casual, as Alice had requested, and they were sitting on their sofa, wrapped contently in each others arms, their limbs entwined, chatting about the upcoming evening, when they heard the knock
Tina: (playfully) Here we go babe! Are we really ready for this?
Bette: (grinning amusedly) As ready as we will ever be I suppose Tee! Tina extracted herself from Bettes embrace giving her lover a tender kiss before swiftly approaching their front door.
Tina opened the front door and was met with an eager, grinning Alice, standing in front of her; dressed in what appeared to be .her old high school uniform? Alices attire consisted of a blue plaid skirt that could only be described as a mini, a white fitted shirt unbuttoned at the very top with a loose fitting blue tie around her neck, white socks pulled right up to her knees and plats, Alice Piersecki had her hair in plats.
Tina couldnt help but smirk, looking back over her shoulder at Bette whose face bore the exact same look, (amused and perplexed) Hi Al, whats going on? Why are you dressed like that?
Alice walked excitedly past Tina into her home, full of anticipation for the night ahead, her arms overflowing with clothing and bags of god knows what, Hey you two!
Bette: (smiling) Hi Al! Tina went over and sat back down next to Bette, snuggling into her loving arms, waiting in expectation for Alices response.
Alice: (maintaining a straight face) Tonights bacholorette party, your bacholorette party, happens to be. dress up Bette, Tina. There will be consequences for any participant that is not prepared to play along! I have taken the liberty to acquire costumes for you two! You both are prepared to play along arent you? raising her eyebrows in jest.
It was then Tina and Bette noticed what Alice was carrying in her arms. Throwing everything else onto the armchair, Alice placed the two garments on the two womens laps; the heavy black and yellow fire coat in Tinas lap and what appeared to be a LAPD uniform in Bettes.
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(55 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
YIPPIE-KI-YAY-MOTHERF*CKER! About damn time!! (There’s about ten writers on this site, that I get so excited when I see them post a new chapter or story, you are definately one of them). Wow, today is like the return of the oldies….oldies, but definately a goodie. First, IMLOVINIT returned with a new chapter, and now you. I ‘m so glad I’m stuck at home today (I have a ten page papers to finish by tuesday for English Lit).
About a month ago, I found you story, and was immediately hooked (read the entire 55 chapters that day), and I love how you changed Tina’s occupation, a woman in uniform is so sexy!
Anyway, a-slap-on-your-ass-and-a-kick-in-your-shin-for returning. AWESOME!!
Can’t wait this should be interesting…I love Alice and her plans…(that never seem to work out like she wants them to.. ;-)
Glad this story is back. Great job!
Very good. Can’t wait for more. please continue soon.
Hey Mates! I was so excited to see a new post on this story! It lived up to all of my expectations and then some. And congrats on the award. You really deserve it!
Hey Mates, once again you made my day!! Congratulations on the award, you totally deserve coz both your stories are absolutly AMAZING!!!! I’m sitting here with the biggest, goofiest, silliest grin on my face lol…. Can’t wait to see what Alice has in store for B&T, it sounds like a whole load of fun! ;) Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait for more =0)
Congratulations on the award Mates.
Looking forward to what Alice and the girls have in store for B&T, i’m sure it will be smokin!!!
Thank you.
Wow, I was so happy to see an update on this story. It has been missed greatly. Can’t wait to see what Alice has planned. Congrats on the award. Both your stories are brilliant!
O.K. I need a smoke after the Shane and Sarah love scene (and I don’t even smoke). And this is going to be one wild time with Alice and gang – LOL. Hurry back!
Hei !! where you are going to continue?????
love the story, I hope you will continue some day :)
YAAY! We’ve been waiting FOREVER! Haha, great chapter! I’d love to see Bette in an LAPD uniform! Please post again soon!
First of all Welcome back…I can’t wait to see where this story is going to head…When i first started reading this chapter it actually reminded me of a song… It’s by blur….
Anyway…~wicked grin~ I sense this Party is going to be some awesome fun!!!
dont leave me hangin to long….
Congrats on the award too…
Hey great way to have some fun. I love Shane and Sarah, Shane is so ready for love. Thanks for giving it to her. Congrates on your award it’s right on appropriate for all your great stories. Thanks
i almost fell off my chair when i saw rhis chapter,yeh mates, this sounds like a fun night in the making,, can you pick me up on the way?
Great story Mates. Congrats on your award, so well deserved. Thank you for every twist and turn.
Mates always a pleasor….I like your bacholor party dess up code. Nice one. Can´t wait to see what happens when the night starts. Great update Mates on a fantastic story. Post soon
Mates, congrats on your award. I always look forward to one of your chapters. Both stories are great. I can’t wait to see what Alice has cooked up for Bette and Tina.
great update! I can’t wait to see what happens on the pub crawl, it’s going to be great I’m sure! Excellent choice for Bette’s costume, I can see it now, Officer Porter, laying down the law!
Welcome back Mates, U have no idea how happy this story coming back makes me. Please continue your wonderful writing.