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Flower Power: Chapter 7
“So Kit, you’re saying that it was love at first sight between Gerald and Lakmé?”
“That’s exactly what I’m saying.” Kit stated flatly. “I had to school Alice on this the other day.”
“But, wasn’t Gerald engaged?” Annette queried. Bette was right; there was a striking resemblance to Olive Oil.
Alice had something to say. “Yep, he was engaged. But being engaged doesn’t prevent you from being attracted to other people. Just ask Gabby.”
“And an attraction to other people doesn’t prevent you from becoming engaged either. Just ask me.” Jenny added as visions of her former fiancé Tim flashed through her mind. “Perhaps it should though, then I would have ….” She didn’t complete her thought before beginning a new one. Her next sentence was mumbled at the lowest possible volume, but understandable nonetheless. “People do what they fucking want.” Alice thought that was the smartest thing she’d ever heard Jenny say.
“Sounds like you’re both speaking from experience.” Annette quietly added.
“Yeah, well….” Jenny and Alice replied at the same time.
Jenny stared into space for a few seconds before rejoining the conversation. “Yeah, back to Lakmé…I kind of like the whole love-at-first-sight deal you know? That’s pretty powerful.”
“Maybe that’s because you can relate Miz. Schechter.” Annette snickered as she emphasized ‘Miz’.
“Yeah…Marina was definitely something. You know, I was just so fucking dismantled by the whole ordeal.” Jenny quietly confessed. Her owl-like eyes didn’t blink again for an eternity.
“Marina was fucking hot alright.” Annette blurted out before taking a big swig of beer. “I must admit that she has entered a few of my dreams.”
Alice smiled an unending smile. “Only a few? You can do better than that Annette. Come on in, the water’s fine.”
A tight smile stretched to its limit. “You know I can’t get down with the puss Alice.”
“What-the-fuck-ever…” Alice sang.
A nervous giggle escaped while Annette’s eyes darted around the room. She wondered if everyone could see what she was feeling. She wondered if her face was now the deepest color of crimson possible. She wondered if her secret was finally out. So many times she had fantasized about what it would be like to kiss another woman, to be desired by another woman, and to love another woman. Now, those thoughts and others quickly bubbled to the surface. She continued to laugh out loud.
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You know I was just going to pm you and bust your chops for another chapter, and then I read your opener. My god how terribly terribly sad, you’ll have a special prayer tonight….
T, god bless your sister!is there a blonde lady appearing soon? p.p.s.
***doing a happy dance***A huge smiled spread across my face when I saw your post tonight. It must be tough for Bette to have to decide between two beautiful women…yeah, let me get my violin out, LOL! No, seriously, Bette needs to decide if she wants to be the next Gabby in Alice’s life. I hope she will do the right thing and end it with one of her blonde beauties….but who will it be? Hmmmmm….whatcha got up your sleeve, greentea? And don’t tell me it’s just your arm! LOL! PS
GT always miss ur writing!!
sorry al u going to be hurt but tina is the one
as always angel my thoughts are with you. my 2nd 4 dan is on sunday. *sigh* but on with you show. your writing is beautiful. the convo is always spot on. i love how you have everyone interacting. decisions decisions. thanks.
Damn this is so good and Im with tylo!
Always a pleasure, greenie. Thank You.
Hey Greenie great to see another post from you. Always intrigued by your writing, but like B&TF I’m also confused by how I feel after reading this……poor Alice, but still I hope Bette will tell her the truth and choose Tina!!! I’m so sorry to hear about your sister.
Wow. Great chappy Greantea! Bette needs to decide soon.So sorry to hear about your sister :(
Glad your back. Please be gentle with Alice’s heart!!
Wow this really could go either way. It would be a unique ending if Bette chose Alice. However, I wouldn’t want Bette to make that choice out of guilt.
hey there- from your comment, it would appear that writing stories is not the only thing that we have in common. thoughts are with you.
Ooo, Bette is in too deep and she needs to cut loose someone. I hope it’s AL , cause I just really can’t get with this pairing, but you do make them kinda cute together. LOL, Post soon and sorry about your sis! *sending hugs your way*
Hey G! Thanks for another great chapter. Bette needs to be honest with herself and with Alice. Bette isn’t in love with Alice, and Alice is looking for a monogamous relationship. Bette needs to let Alice go before she really hurts her. And after Alice told Bette “And if ….well, if you’re seeing someone else then…I just…I don’t think I could deal with being crushed like that again…I don’t think I could survive it Bette…” Bette is very lucky that Al fell asleep – give her some time to think about how to let her down gently. Thanks Greentea!
the name of the chapter was perfect, i felt confused LOL well, not so much about the chapter but about my own emotions while reading it…and of course i can understand bette’s confusion…she has to chose ad i’m thinking it would be alice…i wanted it to be tina but i always want them together so i won’t beg (maybe once: please, let bette chose tina though i love alice too)…okay, i promise this will be the only time i beg (for this chapter i mean) ;) your writing is always a delight, it’s like a getting a phone call from a certain florist…….sorry about your sister, i too know the pain of loss
Greentea, That was another blinder of an episode. Full of hurt and solace. Bette is in a hard place but one of her own making. ALice is a soul given the fallout from her relationship with Gabby. I do know that you can love two people completely at the same time however when one of them doesn’t know about the other there is deceit and duplicity. These can and will destroy even the strongest love affair. Remeber that the heart can be a fragile organ. Bette really needs to sort things out in her head. WHo doe she want exclusively and what can she live with doing. Awesome and tortured storytelling. Many thanks for continuing this masterpiece. Your Loyal Fan.