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Flower Power: Chapter 7
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“And just where do you think you’re going?” Bette demanded as Kit whizzed by.
“Y’all are tryin’ to make me late for my date, BabySis.”
“Hey Kit, What’s up with the rhyming words?” Alice giggled. “Late for my date…”
Bette laughed before becoming serious again. “I’m not trying to make you late for anything. I just got here and now I’m leaving.” Bette proudly announced.
“You’re right, BabySis. You bounced in to pick up your woman and now poof, you’re out.” Kit agreed.
Alice was confused. “Hey Kit, I thought you had to leave like an hour ago or something.”
“I was supposed to, but when I went to the restroom to make sure my hair was cool, Annette was in there crying so I hung out with her for a few.”
“Olive Oil”? Bette asked innocently.
Alice whispered, “Yeah.” Baby, you probably won’t believe it, but her eyes were glued to your ass when you waltzed in. Don’t worry, I unglued them.
“So, is she okay now?” Alice asked sincerely.
“I think she’s better, but I’m not sure. She has a lot of stuff to figure out and let’s just leave it at that.” They started walking in the direction of Kit’s ride.
Bette felt her cell vibrate in the pocket of her leather jacket. Answering it wasn’t an option because she wasn’t about to let go of Alice’s hand. She liked feeling Alice trace designs on the inside of her palm while they walked. Her other hand was holding her girlfriend’s leftovers from dinner. Whoever was calling could leave a message.
The talking trio arrived at Kit’s car quickly, or so it seemed. Bette smiled to herself knowing it was time for the ritualistic shit-talking session between her girlfriend and her sister. A silent countdown occurred in Bette’s head. 3, 2, 1…Blast-off! “Alright sister-in-law, have a good time, don’t give him none, and have your ass home by midnight,” Alice warned. “And fucking call me when you get home so I know you’re okay. You hear me Kit?”
“Hell to the fucking no. Look, I’m giving this man whatever the fuck he wants. If he wants me on top of the table singing Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star with a glass of iced tea in my hand, then dammit that’s what he’s gonna get. Listen, my pal Al, I ain’t hearing that curfew noise you’re talking. I’ll see you when I see you….I’m out!” Kit got in her car, revved her engine and sped away.
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You know I was just going to pm you and bust your chops for another chapter, and then I read your opener. My god how terribly terribly sad, you’ll have a special prayer tonight….
T, god bless your sister!is there a blonde lady appearing soon? p.p.s.
***doing a happy dance***A huge smiled spread across my face when I saw your post tonight. It must be tough for Bette to have to decide between two beautiful women…yeah, let me get my violin out, LOL! No, seriously, Bette needs to decide if she wants to be the next Gabby in Alice’s life. I hope she will do the right thing and end it with one of her blonde beauties….but who will it be? Hmmmmm….whatcha got up your sleeve, greentea? And don’t tell me it’s just your arm! LOL! PS
GT always miss ur writing!!
sorry al u going to be hurt but tina is the one
as always angel my thoughts are with you. my 2nd 4 dan is on sunday. *sigh* but on with you show. your writing is beautiful. the convo is always spot on. i love how you have everyone interacting. decisions decisions. thanks.
Damn this is so good and Im with tylo!
Always a pleasure, greenie. Thank You.
Hey Greenie great to see another post from you. Always intrigued by your writing, but like B&TF I’m also confused by how I feel after reading this……poor Alice, but still I hope Bette will tell her the truth and choose Tina!!! I’m so sorry to hear about your sister.
Wow. Great chappy Greantea! Bette needs to decide soon.So sorry to hear about your sister :(
Glad your back. Please be gentle with Alice’s heart!!
Wow this really could go either way. It would be a unique ending if Bette chose Alice. However, I wouldn’t want Bette to make that choice out of guilt.
hey there- from your comment, it would appear that writing stories is not the only thing that we have in common. thoughts are with you.
Ooo, Bette is in too deep and she needs to cut loose someone. I hope it’s AL , cause I just really can’t get with this pairing, but you do make them kinda cute together. LOL, Post soon and sorry about your sis! *sending hugs your way*
Hey G! Thanks for another great chapter. Bette needs to be honest with herself and with Alice. Bette isn’t in love with Alice, and Alice is looking for a monogamous relationship. Bette needs to let Alice go before she really hurts her. And after Alice told Bette “And if ….well, if you’re seeing someone else then…I just…I don’t think I could deal with being crushed like that again…I don’t think I could survive it Bette…” Bette is very lucky that Al fell asleep – give her some time to think about how to let her down gently. Thanks Greentea!
the name of the chapter was perfect, i felt confused LOL well, not so much about the chapter but about my own emotions while reading it…and of course i can understand bette’s confusion…she has to chose ad i’m thinking it would be alice…i wanted it to be tina but i always want them together so i won’t beg (maybe once: please, let bette chose tina though i love alice too)…okay, i promise this will be the only time i beg (for this chapter i mean) ;) your writing is always a delight, it’s like a getting a phone call from a certain florist…….sorry about your sister, i too know the pain of loss
Greentea, That was another blinder of an episode. Full of hurt and solace. Bette is in a hard place but one of her own making. ALice is a soul given the fallout from her relationship with Gabby. I do know that you can love two people completely at the same time however when one of them doesn’t know about the other there is deceit and duplicity. These can and will destroy even the strongest love affair. Remeber that the heart can be a fragile organ. Bette really needs to sort things out in her head. WHo doe she want exclusively and what can she live with doing. Awesome and tortured storytelling. Many thanks for continuing this masterpiece. Your Loyal Fan.