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Flower Power: Chapter 7
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“That’s my girl right there.” Alice proclaimed while grinning at Kit’s disappearing tail lights with glee.
“And here’s my girl, right here.” Bette said softly. She kissed the back of Alice’s hand as they started the short walk to Bette’s car.
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“So, was she sad because of the way you were treating her, or was she sad because of something else?”
“I think it was because of something else. She just didn’t seem like herself Bette. It’s like other stuff is going on with her but she didn’t talk about it.”
“Well, are you going to have lunch with her?”
“For what? We are fucking over. O-V-E-R. Alice spelled the word in case her girlfriend needed a little help understanding. Look Baby, nothing Gabby says at fucking lunch is going to change the fact that I saw her cheating on me. Nothing.”
Bette winced silently. “You may have a point there.”
“I’m just glad she’s out of my life. And I’m so glad you’re in it.” Alice quietly admitted. Her words were almost a whisper, but they were extremely loud to the one driving.
The short ride back to Alice’s was more than Bette could stand. She needed to get her head together because it felt like it was going to explode.
Suddenly feeling trapped inside her car, Bette cracked her window so a sliver of night air could seep in. What am I doing? What am I doing? What the fuck am I doing? Bette’s feelings for Alice were so much more than she ever thought they would be. Alice was a one woman show full of amazing little surprises. She was incredibly interesting, so intelligent and so damn cool. Bette had never intended for her heart to become as involved as it had. The whole deal with Alice was so very hard to explain, but so very easy to adore. And Bette did.
The minute the couple set foot in Alice’s condo, Bette slowly pulled her girlfriend into a meaningful hug. “I’m sorry your day was so insane Al.” Alice responded by burying her face further into her girlfriends shoulder. She felt safe now. Bette’s embrace was just what she needed after Gabby’s surprise visit earlier. The brunette could tell from the way Alice was positioned that she was a blink away from breakdown. She quickly tried to remember the last time she had seen Alice cry and couldn’t. It had been awhile.
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You know I was just going to pm you and bust your chops for another chapter, and then I read your opener. My god how terribly terribly sad, you’ll have a special prayer tonight….
T, god bless your sister!is there a blonde lady appearing soon? p.p.s.
***doing a happy dance***A huge smiled spread across my face when I saw your post tonight. It must be tough for Bette to have to decide between two beautiful women…yeah, let me get my violin out, LOL! No, seriously, Bette needs to decide if she wants to be the next Gabby in Alice’s life. I hope she will do the right thing and end it with one of her blonde beauties….but who will it be? Hmmmmm….whatcha got up your sleeve, greentea? And don’t tell me it’s just your arm! LOL! PS
GT always miss ur writing!!
sorry al u going to be hurt but tina is the one
as always angel my thoughts are with you. my 2nd 4 dan is on sunday. *sigh* but on with you show. your writing is beautiful. the convo is always spot on. i love how you have everyone interacting. decisions decisions. thanks.
Damn this is so good and Im with tylo!
Always a pleasure, greenie. Thank You.
Hey Greenie great to see another post from you. Always intrigued by your writing, but like B&TF I’m also confused by how I feel after reading this……poor Alice, but still I hope Bette will tell her the truth and choose Tina!!! I’m so sorry to hear about your sister.
Wow. Great chappy Greantea! Bette needs to decide soon.So sorry to hear about your sister :(
Glad your back. Please be gentle with Alice’s heart!!
Wow this really could go either way. It would be a unique ending if Bette chose Alice. However, I wouldn’t want Bette to make that choice out of guilt.
hey there- from your comment, it would appear that writing stories is not the only thing that we have in common. thoughts are with you.
Ooo, Bette is in too deep and she needs to cut loose someone. I hope it’s AL , cause I just really can’t get with this pairing, but you do make them kinda cute together. LOL, Post soon and sorry about your sis! *sending hugs your way*
Hey G! Thanks for another great chapter. Bette needs to be honest with herself and with Alice. Bette isn’t in love with Alice, and Alice is looking for a monogamous relationship. Bette needs to let Alice go before she really hurts her. And after Alice told Bette “And if ….well, if you’re seeing someone else then…I just…I don’t think I could deal with being crushed like that again…I don’t think I could survive it Bette…” Bette is very lucky that Al fell asleep – give her some time to think about how to let her down gently. Thanks Greentea!
the name of the chapter was perfect, i felt confused LOL well, not so much about the chapter but about my own emotions while reading it…and of course i can understand bette’s confusion…she has to chose ad i’m thinking it would be alice…i wanted it to be tina but i always want them together so i won’t beg (maybe once: please, let bette chose tina though i love alice too)…okay, i promise this will be the only time i beg (for this chapter i mean) ;) your writing is always a delight, it’s like a getting a phone call from a certain florist…….sorry about your sister, i too know the pain of loss
Greentea, That was another blinder of an episode. Full of hurt and solace. Bette is in a hard place but one of her own making. ALice is a soul given the fallout from her relationship with Gabby. I do know that you can love two people completely at the same time however when one of them doesn’t know about the other there is deceit and duplicity. These can and will destroy even the strongest love affair. Remeber that the heart can be a fragile organ. Bette really needs to sort things out in her head. WHo doe she want exclusively and what can she live with doing. Awesome and tortured storytelling. Many thanks for continuing this masterpiece. Your Loyal Fan.