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Flowers
Bette: What I happened with her was never intimacy. I didnt love her. I love you and only you.
Tina: You fucked her Bette! You were with another womensomeone else held you and kissed you and touched in ways that only I should be able to do. Do you know how much it hurts? That every time I look at you I see images of you with her I look at your hands and think of where they have been I look at your face and know that someone else woke up to that face in the morning. I look at that ring on your hand, and think to myself you were supposed to be my firstmy last and my forever.. and believe me I know I wasnt your firstbut god did I believe I would be your last.
Bette: .youre my forever.
Tina: How can you say that?
Bette: Because you will be the only woman I will forever be in love with, but Tee I need to know before I say anything else, please answer me this one question.Do you still love? I never got that answer from you the last time I asked and its scares me, so please tell me.., do you? Do you still love me?
Tina: You know the answer.
Tina says this sternly, Bette puts head down as tears begin to form, she is thinking the worst. Tina sees this and takes her hand, puts in under Bettes chin and raises her head to see her eyes.
Tina: I never stopped.
Bette takes a moment to register what she just heard.
Tina: Ive been loving you for seven years, a love like that doesnt just go away.
Bette: Then if you still love me, why? Why are we doing this?
Tina: Because Bette, things need to be different. I cant forget what you did, and it will still take me a while to be able to forgive you and to be able to trust you again. That doesnt mean I dont want there to be a chance for us. I think there still is a chance for us, but its not going to be that easy. I need this time to figure things out, my life has been thrown upside down and I need time to straighten myself out before anything can move forward with us.
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Let me know what you guys think, this is my first time, I’m a fanfic virgin.
yes enjoyed very much please continue with hopefully Tina kicking that bitch Helena Ass into touch keep up the good work
Really enjoyed your story, please continue, but get Helena out the way, so we can have a bit more bonding between Bette and Tina.
Well twitty What do I think? Awesome my friend. I wish that is how the show went last night. It would have been beautiful. Thanks for taking the time, and writing a cheer up story to us all
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I love the dialogue, thank you for making them talk about what the TPTB won’t. I really enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to write it :)
i love it really love it looking forward to next chapter soon thanks
Thank you Twitty; congratulations on losing your fanfic viginity – we’ll be gentle with you! A lovely and satisfying read – I love these type of “what if” and “missing scene” type pieces. Thanks again.
WHY DIDN’T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW! AHHHHH! Thanks for writing this, maybe someday the’ll be together again. I hate Helena. . .
You certainly did yourself proud. Great take on what might have been. Hope you continue.
I wish this happened on the show! Grr! This is wonderful please continue!
EXCELLENT
I loved your story ! I mean every single word. I wish last night’s episode was like your story. So full of love and wanting. Please write more !
Just lovely. Thank you.
You have done an excellent job for your first time! I love this point of view and wish so very much that this is what we all SHOULD have seen on Sundays show. Thank you for taking the time to share your creative writing with us. 5 bright stars to you!
Nicely written. I thought Tina was giving in a little quickly at the start, and I was glad to see that she didn’t. Also, from my point of view, I don’t think Helena gets embarassed.
great start..really great..please post soon i loved your story
That was great. Love your writing.
I loved this. Hopefully, the show will take a hint from you. Please continue.
This is beautiful. Please continue
At first I was scared when I realized Tina was home, but after the whole pool thing had already happened. It was a great turn of events. Thanks for making us feel better after last night! please continue
that was awesome
well, if you’re a fanfic virgin then I suggest you get in on regularly on this site!! that was stellar! I think the last paragraph clinched it for me, the flower metaphor is so so right, I hope you continue with this. It’s amazing!
Loved this story, especially the last line…how very sweet. Looking forward to reading more from you.
If only you had been writing for the show. OMG that was wonderful. They have certainly ruined the show for me. But reading this give my heart hope. Thank you for writing this.
This story was wonderful!!! Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
Wow!! 1st fic. I think u did great. I could actually see that scene playing out in my head. I hope u write more soon.
excellent job!
I think Ilene Chaiken should hire you to write for the show as I like your version much better!
This was so good. You write like a pro.
Wow good start, I really like it. This is interesting and awesome, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Beautifully written.. i just had 5 mionutes on the computer so it was kinda hard which fanfic to read and i chose to read this fanfic since i just saw the episode.. (boy am i glad i chose this!) God yea i wish it turned out like this! Brilliant!
Welcome, twitty10!! Glad the show leaves such holes and incompleteness, it allows fanfic writers like you to make us feel good from the altered world of B&T!! Keep your imagination flowing . . .
Loved it- wish this had happened last night!
Bette should walk away and let Tina have Helena I mean she already slept with her and never should Bette be the woman on the side no matter how much it hurts to be without her.