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Flowers
Tina: Bette, dont do this
Bette: Dont do what? I cant give you compliments anymore now?
Tina: You know what I mean.
Bette: What? Helena can have ***** with you, but I cant tell you, the woman I love, that I think youre beautiful. I cant say I blame her for not wasting a minute before wanting to have you all to herself for not wanting to touch you everywhere she could
Bette places her hand on Tinas face. Tina feels warmth all over her body at her touch. A feeling that is completely different that what she felt with Helena, with Helena it was new, exciting, exhilarating, hot, but after Tina was left with was a feeling of emptiness. With Bettes touch she felt her heart skip a beat, her body sensed this familiar feeling, she knew this feeling, and it felt like.home.
Tina walks away from Bette, before the moment could take her away and went to occupy herself with the flowers, she goes to reach for the vase, then adds some water, while she is moving around the kitchen, Bettes eyes are still glued on her.
Tina: Bette, stop looking at me like that.
Bette makes a devilish grin.
Bette: How am I looking at you?
Tina makes the same grin back at her.
Tina: You know how.
Bette: Im sorry, its out of habit. I cant help myself.
Tina: Well, try.
Tina then moves back over to the couch and Bette follows.
Bette now turns the moment more serious.
Bette: So looks like Im not youre last after all.
Tina: Thats not fair, I didnt do this to spite you.
Bette: Then why?
Tina: Come on Bette, you should know better than anyone, sometimes you just need *****, pure ***** *****.
Bette is at a loss on what to say now, wishing she didnt say anything about that in the first place.
Bette: Im sorry, that wasnt fair of me to ask.
Tina: No, It wasnt.
After a long awkward silence, Bette speaks.
Bette: Tina, theres something else I need to say to youabout the baby.
Tina: About our baby.
Bette: What?
The biggest smile spreads across Bettes mouth as she heard the word our.
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Let me know what you guys think, this is my first time, I’m a fanfic virgin.
yes enjoyed very much please continue with hopefully Tina kicking that bitch Helena Ass into touch keep up the good work
Really enjoyed your story, please continue, but get Helena out the way, so we can have a bit more bonding between Bette and Tina.
Well twitty What do I think? Awesome my friend. I wish that is how the show went last night. It would have been beautiful. Thanks for taking the time, and writing a cheer up story to us all
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I love the dialogue, thank you for making them talk about what the TPTB won’t. I really enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to write it :)
i love it really love it looking forward to next chapter soon thanks
Thank you Twitty; congratulations on losing your fanfic viginity – we’ll be gentle with you! A lovely and satisfying read – I love these type of “what if” and “missing scene” type pieces. Thanks again.
WHY DIDN’T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW! AHHHHH! Thanks for writing this, maybe someday the’ll be together again. I hate Helena. . .
You certainly did yourself proud. Great take on what might have been. Hope you continue.
I wish this happened on the show! Grr! This is wonderful please continue!
EXCELLENT
I loved your story ! I mean every single word. I wish last night’s episode was like your story. So full of love and wanting. Please write more !
Just lovely. Thank you.
You have done an excellent job for your first time! I love this point of view and wish so very much that this is what we all SHOULD have seen on Sundays show. Thank you for taking the time to share your creative writing with us. 5 bright stars to you!
Nicely written. I thought Tina was giving in a little quickly at the start, and I was glad to see that she didn’t. Also, from my point of view, I don’t think Helena gets embarassed.
great start..really great..please post soon i loved your story
That was great. Love your writing.
I loved this. Hopefully, the show will take a hint from you. Please continue.
This is beautiful. Please continue
At first I was scared when I realized Tina was home, but after the whole pool thing had already happened. It was a great turn of events. Thanks for making us feel better after last night! please continue
that was awesome
well, if you’re a fanfic virgin then I suggest you get in on regularly on this site!! that was stellar! I think the last paragraph clinched it for me, the flower metaphor is so so right, I hope you continue with this. It’s amazing!
Loved this story, especially the last line…how very sweet. Looking forward to reading more from you.
If only you had been writing for the show. OMG that was wonderful. They have certainly ruined the show for me. But reading this give my heart hope. Thank you for writing this.
This story was wonderful!!! Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
Wow!! 1st fic. I think u did great. I could actually see that scene playing out in my head. I hope u write more soon.
excellent job!
I think Ilene Chaiken should hire you to write for the show as I like your version much better!
This was so good. You write like a pro.
Wow good start, I really like it. This is interesting and awesome, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Beautifully written.. i just had 5 mionutes on the computer so it was kinda hard which fanfic to read and i chose to read this fanfic since i just saw the episode.. (boy am i glad i chose this!) God yea i wish it turned out like this! Brilliant!
Welcome, twitty10!! Glad the show leaves such holes and incompleteness, it allows fanfic writers like you to make us feel good from the altered world of B&T!! Keep your imagination flowing . . .
Loved it- wish this had happened last night!
Bette should walk away and let Tina have Helena I mean she already slept with her and never should Bette be the woman on the side no matter how much it hurts to be without her.