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Flowers
Bette: I understand. But-
Before Bette can get out another word theres another knock on Tinas door.
Bette throws a questioning glare at Tina as Tina goes to answer the door.
She opens it to find- Helena Peabody.
Tina: Helena.
Helena smiles as she takes Tina and kisses her.
Helena: I just wanted to say I had an absolutely wonderful time tonight. You were utterly amazing-
Tina stops her from saying another word.
Tina: Helena, I cant do this right now. Ill see you tomorrow, Okay?
Helena is taken back a bit, until the door swings further open to reveal Bette sitting on the couch, simmering.
Helena: Well, I see you have company. Ill be on my way then, Ill see you tomorrow, darling. Ill pick you up around seven.
Helena again goes to kiss Tina. Tina however pulls back. Helena who is now feeling embarrassed and defeated backs away from the door.
Tina: Goodnight, Helena.
Helena slyly smiles as Tina shuts the door.
Tina turns to see a pissed off Bette.
Tina: Look, I know what youre thinking.
Bette: You did it didnt you, you fucked her? God, Tina.
Tina doesnt respond, she just turns her head away.
Bette: Is this how you are figuring things out, with the help of Helena ***** Peabody?
Tina: Maybe I dont know. I can see other people you know Bette, I have that right now.
Bette: But with her? With that ***** monster, she isnt going to help matters, Tina; she will only ***** them up even more. Cant you see what shes doing; the woman gets some sick pleasure out of this. This is just a game to her.
Tina: What are you implying? That she couldnt possibly be attracted to me? That shes just ***** me for the sport of it?
Bette: Of course shes attracted to you, but shes more attracted to the circumstances.
Bette takes a moment and gets up to walk closer to Tina, who is still standing up by the door.
Bette: God, why wouldnt she be attracted to you, just look at you. You are beautiful. I still cant believe how amazingly beautiful you are right now, its breathe -taking.
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Let me know what you guys think, this is my first time, I’m a fanfic virgin.
yes enjoyed very much please continue with hopefully Tina kicking that bitch Helena Ass into touch keep up the good work
Really enjoyed your story, please continue, but get Helena out the way, so we can have a bit more bonding between Bette and Tina.
Well twitty What do I think? Awesome my friend. I wish that is how the show went last night. It would have been beautiful. Thanks for taking the time, and writing a cheer up story to us all
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I love the dialogue, thank you for making them talk about what the TPTB won’t. I really enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to write it :)
i love it really love it looking forward to next chapter soon thanks
Thank you Twitty; congratulations on losing your fanfic viginity – we’ll be gentle with you! A lovely and satisfying read – I love these type of “what if” and “missing scene” type pieces. Thanks again.
WHY DIDN’T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW! AHHHHH! Thanks for writing this, maybe someday the’ll be together again. I hate Helena. . .
You certainly did yourself proud. Great take on what might have been. Hope you continue.
I wish this happened on the show! Grr! This is wonderful please continue!
EXCELLENT
I loved your story ! I mean every single word. I wish last night’s episode was like your story. So full of love and wanting. Please write more !
Just lovely. Thank you.
You have done an excellent job for your first time! I love this point of view and wish so very much that this is what we all SHOULD have seen on Sundays show. Thank you for taking the time to share your creative writing with us. 5 bright stars to you!
Nicely written. I thought Tina was giving in a little quickly at the start, and I was glad to see that she didn’t. Also, from my point of view, I don’t think Helena gets embarassed.
great start..really great..please post soon i loved your story
That was great. Love your writing.
I loved this. Hopefully, the show will take a hint from you. Please continue.
This is beautiful. Please continue
At first I was scared when I realized Tina was home, but after the whole pool thing had already happened. It was a great turn of events. Thanks for making us feel better after last night! please continue
that was awesome
well, if you’re a fanfic virgin then I suggest you get in on regularly on this site!! that was stellar! I think the last paragraph clinched it for me, the flower metaphor is so so right, I hope you continue with this. It’s amazing!
Loved this story, especially the last line…how very sweet. Looking forward to reading more from you.
If only you had been writing for the show. OMG that was wonderful. They have certainly ruined the show for me. But reading this give my heart hope. Thank you for writing this.
This story was wonderful!!! Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
Wow!! 1st fic. I think u did great. I could actually see that scene playing out in my head. I hope u write more soon.
excellent job!
I think Ilene Chaiken should hire you to write for the show as I like your version much better!
This was so good. You write like a pro.
Wow good start, I really like it. This is interesting and awesome, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Beautifully written.. i just had 5 mionutes on the computer so it was kinda hard which fanfic to read and i chose to read this fanfic since i just saw the episode.. (boy am i glad i chose this!) God yea i wish it turned out like this! Brilliant!
Welcome, twitty10!! Glad the show leaves such holes and incompleteness, it allows fanfic writers like you to make us feel good from the altered world of B&T!! Keep your imagination flowing . . .
Loved it- wish this had happened last night!
Bette should walk away and let Tina have Helena I mean she already slept with her and never should Bette be the woman on the side no matter how much it hurts to be without her.