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Flowers
Tina: After you left this afternoon I thought about what you said, and youre right, this is just as much youre child as it is mine. As confusing as this situation is, and has hard as its going to be, she shouldnt be the one who is punished for our mistakes. And Bette the reason I didnt tell you in the beginning was because-
Bette hasnt been able to listen to anything Tina was saying because her mind was focused on the fact that Tina is saying her.
Bette: Its a girl.
Tina: Yes, its a girl.
Bette eyes begin to water Tina puts her hand on Bettes knee.
Tina: The reason I kept this from you in the beginning was because I didnt think you would be able to handle another miscarriage. I wanted to make sure it would take before I told you. I know that it wasnt the smartest thing to do, but”
Bette: You dont need to explain, I understand. I just cant ***** believe I didnt notice. I mean, you did a great job of hiding it. I just thought that”
Tina: .that I got fat.. go ahead you can say it.
Tina tries to lighten the mood as they share a laugh.
Bette: I never thought you were fat. I think Im a ***** who didnt see what was right in front of me.
Tina: Dont beat yourself up, Bette. I went to pretty great lengths to hide it from you. I should have told you sooner. Its just the night I was going to tell you was when-
Bette: I know, when I came home that night and bitched about Franklin and work and never once realizing that the glow I was seeing around you was the glow of a woman that is pregnant, god Im such a ***** idiot.
Tina: Youre not a ***** idiot, Bette. Youre human. I know youre trying to change, and Im glad, because things need to be different, not just with you, but with me too, this is the only way we will have a chance if we both try.
Bette: So youre going to give it a try?
Tina: Yes.
Bette: What aboutHelena?
Tina: What about her?
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Let me know what you guys think, this is my first time, I’m a fanfic virgin.
yes enjoyed very much please continue with hopefully Tina kicking that bitch Helena Ass into touch keep up the good work
Really enjoyed your story, please continue, but get Helena out the way, so we can have a bit more bonding between Bette and Tina.
Well twitty What do I think? Awesome my friend. I wish that is how the show went last night. It would have been beautiful. Thanks for taking the time, and writing a cheer up story to us all
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I love the dialogue, thank you for making them talk about what the TPTB won’t. I really enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to write it :)
i love it really love it looking forward to next chapter soon thanks
Thank you Twitty; congratulations on losing your fanfic viginity – we’ll be gentle with you! A lovely and satisfying read – I love these type of “what if” and “missing scene” type pieces. Thanks again.
WHY DIDN’T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW! AHHHHH! Thanks for writing this, maybe someday the’ll be together again. I hate Helena. . .
You certainly did yourself proud. Great take on what might have been. Hope you continue.
I wish this happened on the show! Grr! This is wonderful please continue!
EXCELLENT
I loved your story ! I mean every single word. I wish last night’s episode was like your story. So full of love and wanting. Please write more !
Just lovely. Thank you.
You have done an excellent job for your first time! I love this point of view and wish so very much that this is what we all SHOULD have seen on Sundays show. Thank you for taking the time to share your creative writing with us. 5 bright stars to you!
Nicely written. I thought Tina was giving in a little quickly at the start, and I was glad to see that she didn’t. Also, from my point of view, I don’t think Helena gets embarassed.
great start..really great..please post soon i loved your story
That was great. Love your writing.
I loved this. Hopefully, the show will take a hint from you. Please continue.
This is beautiful. Please continue
At first I was scared when I realized Tina was home, but after the whole pool thing had already happened. It was a great turn of events. Thanks for making us feel better after last night! please continue
that was awesome
well, if you’re a fanfic virgin then I suggest you get in on regularly on this site!! that was stellar! I think the last paragraph clinched it for me, the flower metaphor is so so right, I hope you continue with this. It’s amazing!
Loved this story, especially the last line…how very sweet. Looking forward to reading more from you.
If only you had been writing for the show. OMG that was wonderful. They have certainly ruined the show for me. But reading this give my heart hope. Thank you for writing this.
This story was wonderful!!! Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
Wow!! 1st fic. I think u did great. I could actually see that scene playing out in my head. I hope u write more soon.
excellent job!
I think Ilene Chaiken should hire you to write for the show as I like your version much better!
This was so good. You write like a pro.
Wow good start, I really like it. This is interesting and awesome, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Beautifully written.. i just had 5 mionutes on the computer so it was kinda hard which fanfic to read and i chose to read this fanfic since i just saw the episode.. (boy am i glad i chose this!) God yea i wish it turned out like this! Brilliant!
Welcome, twitty10!! Glad the show leaves such holes and incompleteness, it allows fanfic writers like you to make us feel good from the altered world of B&T!! Keep your imagination flowing . . .
Loved it- wish this had happened last night!
Bette should walk away and let Tina have Helena I mean she already slept with her and never should Bette be the woman on the side no matter how much it hurts to be without her.