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Foresight – Chapter 2
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I needed to tell her what I had done, this new start was about us talking to each other, keeping the lines of communication open, no matter how difficult that would be at times, we had promised one another that we would be honest, I would be honest…
I stepped through the front door and saw her scared eyes searching for mine…, she had been worried…, she had been having thoughts that there was more to my sudden exit than going to buy her blueberries…
I passed her the bag with the fruit in and spoke to her, “you okay?”
She nodded at me and asked me too, “are you?”
I also nodded before wandering into the lounge, I felt her following me, she already knew, it was so plain to see on her face, she still knew me so well…, did she ever stop knowing me…, did we stop knowing one another or did we just stop bothering to look…
Whichever it was, we both knew that this time…, we were looking forward, looking to one another and moving forward together, learning from our mistakes and knowing hindsight had taught us a valuable lesson, one that I had learnt so much from.
“Bette…”
I turned as she said my name, god I loved her…, and now I knew that he would never hurt her again, there were only a few words that I needed to say to him, I think he could tell in the way I had looked at him that I meant every word…, I smiled at her as I remembered…, he never even had the opportunity to reply, just a nod and I had turned on my heel and left, and I felt so much better, but now…, I would feel a whole lot better if I told her what I had done…, “I uh…, I need to tell you something…”
“You went to him didn’t you…?”
I nodded, what was I doing, an impression of the ‘boring man’…
I saw her swallow…, she had known, was it at the moment I grabbed my keys from the counter or was it after, when I had been longer than I needed to be…, “and…”
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fantastic as always… i know it’s your story to tell but could you please continue with all the TiBette mushyness and fluff that we love so much? there’s already so many stories with so much angst and bitterness and it would be lovely just to have one story where our favorite couple is just loved-up all the time!! (sorry but i’m still trying to get over season 3 and what the show writers did to my Laurel!!) thanks and keep up the great work.x.x
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH -Tibette cocoon, I’m in heaven!! I’ve no fears about this – only for the finale tonight and S5, but my faith will never die….
Damn that was awesome and love it. The love they have is amazing and beautiful. Can’t wait to see more, thanks!
It was nice that they just cuddled throughout the night. It would have felt rushed if they had just jumped back into a sexual relationship. Their love and relationship goes beyond their sex life. Plus Tina just had her life turned upside down again this time for the good. They needed to take time to breath while sharing the same space and not worrying about whether one can take care of the other’s sexual needs. Because you know in the back of Bette’s mind she is going to wonder if she enough for Tina.
Amen.
welcome back i hope that you are feeling better, this is a lovely second part i like it so much,
Happily & Perfectly where they belong.
After just watching the season finale, it was so good coming to this story and reading how it should be…Thank you for unbreaking my TiBette heart yet again by IC
That was just lovely, pps.
Amem!
Glad you’re back. You have another great story going. Looking forward to more.
Welcome back!I’m hooked- this is a great story!I can’t get enough of these two! you write them so well too! keep it coming :)
Jobadge WELCOME back.. this is AWESOME…. PPS thank you!!
What they all said! At the same time (and this is the practical side of me talking), is it so realistic that they have come this far in essentially two days? I hate to bring that up with the beautiful tale you have woven for us, but that has just been nagging me. They definitely need more time to rebond, and I don’t just mean making sweet love. Bette was on a self-destructive journey and was hanging on to life by a slender thread. She couldn’t keep down food and all that. It just seems like the turnaround was too quick from that. I hope you continue and perhaps continue to address some of the insecurities both B & T are feeling at this reunion, since they had obviously drifted apart for different reasons.
Yep, right where they belong. Great chapter, Jo… I’ll likely be needing this to get me through the next episode. *sigh* Thanks, Jo.
having you back is a bit like bette and tina in this story — we still need some reassurance that you are not going away again and that you missed us like we missed you. still want to be wooed back ms badge — i think one of your nc17 would do nicely to allay our fears. hope you feel better –oh and thanks for telling a mutual friend that i am ” a tart ” — i will deal with you later. i have no thoughts about the finale except i fully expect pooh salad from our glorious leader – tell me the worst tomorrow mate xxxxxx
And yeah, Cerdi, you can totally get an amen from me.
Hey, even if they’re foregoing sex for the night, why the pjs when Angelica’s at Kit’s? Are you sure everything is OK between them? I have to agree with ally that an NC-17 would help to allay everbody’s fears. And she’s right about IC feeding us poo on a regular basis, perhaps she was responsible for the e coli outbreaks we had a while back.
Wow, Jo… another exquisite chapter from you… I still don’t know how you do it. You seem to be able to write in a way where every line is pure poetry… and at the same time many of your profound points seem to be written between the lines. It’s magical really… and I don’t want to know how you do it cause like with a magic trick, knowing the technicalities takes away from illusion of being a witness to something not of this earth. Did I see a quote from my last comment in there? I think I did LOL… damn, to know that you would take my words and make them your own – ahhhh, just pure bliss! Thanks, Jo.
amen from me…..and sigh: this was so good, so touching…i miss tibette
“Bette…” I laughed, “What…?” “You’re squeezing me…” LOL! Cute. So glad you’re back and writing again. =)
so nice!!!!! more!!!!!
Jobadge, I think you are right not to have good feelings for Season Fianle. After all, IC is having Bette chase Jodi to New York, to win her back, Who wants to watch that, I mean Tina helps her do it, I think IC is insulting our intelligence with this episode. Glad your back, You are top of the list for stories.
*sigh* Yes that is where they belong always. So so good. PPS
absolutely amazing writing…..i could feel the love between those 2……i loved this…..pps……..
JO, THE WAY YOU WRITE IS SO LOVING AND CUTE!! This story is just so wonderful. Thank you PPS
Amen to the other posters comments. Wonderful as usual. Remarkable actually. The finale will shatter my little TiBette heart so I’ll need to gird my loins.OT: Elton John is 60 years old. I can’t believe it.
Hi mate, I see things getting back to their places again. Great chapter. – My hope is now on season 5. I’m sure were gonna be frustrated tonight… xx
The way they were. If only. I love that Bette want Tina to be healthy before they make love. thanks
Another exquisite chapter! Thanks Jo.
TiBette-cocoon… OMG thats so sweet! I am amazed yet again, i dont know how you do that… But every time I don’t believe you can surprise me anymore, you do with such strenght that it knocks me off my feet! I love ho you described the way either of them felt abt the (non-)pregnancy… The honesty of the guilt that haunts thoughts of relieve.. Thank you Jo! PPS!
And feel better soon!
jo glad to see ur back!
Always so happy to be able to read your wonderful writing. Hope the following up goes fairly swift. Thanks.
Jo it is such a blessing to be able to read your writing. It’s so true what you say about foresight and hindsight…all we really need is sight, plain and simple – to be able to see what is right in front of us. Your writing is phenomenal Jo and I wish Showtime would contract you to write for the show. Your creations are so meaningful…what a dream come true that would be!