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Foresight – Chapter 2
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“Still…, maybe you should lie down…, just for a while…”
“Bette…, really I’m fine…, if I feel any pain I will lie down…, I promise…”
“I just want…”
“I know…” she interrupted.
Did she know, did she know that all I wanted is for her to be okay, I wanted to do this right…, not like before…, this time was different…, “T…, I want to look after you…, I want to be there for you…”
Her hand touched my face, her smile was infectious, had the fog cleared for her too…, did she want and need things to be different…, it had only been two days since she came around here, had she changed that quickly or did that happen before and she didn’t do anything about it…, maybe that was something I would never know, maybe she would talk to me about it…, maybe I would ask her, when the time was right…, but for the moment, she needed to take it easy, and I wanted to look after her…
“Bette, this isn’t like when we lost him…?”
I gulped when she said that, it was still so raw sometimes, that memory of our son that never was…, her fingers entwined in mine, her other hand remained on my cheek…
“This…, this non pregnancy is different in so many ways Bette…, I never meant to get pregnant in the first place, it was an accident…, a stupid accident, but one nonetheless, but…, by some…, freak of nature…, there isn’t even a baby in there…, an empty sac is what Dr Wilson said…, it happens sometimes, and you know…, it’s possible that if I weren’t so…, regular…, I might not have even known, it could have just turned out to be a heavy period and I never would have known about it…”
“But…, don’t you feel…” I didn’t know how to explain it; how I knew she must have some emotions about it all…
“I feel fine, I think maybe my mind is telling me that I just got away with something that could potentially been a…, fucking…,” she looked around the room, seeming to find the appropriate words…
“I know…” I felt that too…, it could have been a massive thing for us to deal with and we now didn’t have to face that, in a way I felt guilty for being relieved…
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fantastic as always… i know it’s your story to tell but could you please continue with all the TiBette mushyness and fluff that we love so much? there’s already so many stories with so much angst and bitterness and it would be lovely just to have one story where our favorite couple is just loved-up all the time!! (sorry but i’m still trying to get over season 3 and what the show writers did to my Laurel!!) thanks and keep up the great work.x.x
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH -Tibette cocoon, I’m in heaven!! I’ve no fears about this – only for the finale tonight and S5, but my faith will never die….
Damn that was awesome and love it. The love they have is amazing and beautiful. Can’t wait to see more, thanks!
It was nice that they just cuddled throughout the night. It would have felt rushed if they had just jumped back into a sexual relationship. Their love and relationship goes beyond their sex life. Plus Tina just had her life turned upside down again this time for the good. They needed to take time to breath while sharing the same space and not worrying about whether one can take care of the other’s sexual needs. Because you know in the back of Bette’s mind she is going to wonder if she enough for Tina.
Amen.
welcome back i hope that you are feeling better, this is a lovely second part i like it so much,
Happily & Perfectly where they belong.
After just watching the season finale, it was so good coming to this story and reading how it should be…Thank you for unbreaking my TiBette heart yet again by IC
That was just lovely, pps.
Amem!
Glad you’re back. You have another great story going. Looking forward to more.
Welcome back!I’m hooked- this is a great story!I can’t get enough of these two! you write them so well too! keep it coming :)
Jobadge WELCOME back.. this is AWESOME…. PPS thank you!!
What they all said! At the same time (and this is the practical side of me talking), is it so realistic that they have come this far in essentially two days? I hate to bring that up with the beautiful tale you have woven for us, but that has just been nagging me. They definitely need more time to rebond, and I don’t just mean making sweet love. Bette was on a self-destructive journey and was hanging on to life by a slender thread. She couldn’t keep down food and all that. It just seems like the turnaround was too quick from that. I hope you continue and perhaps continue to address some of the insecurities both B & T are feeling at this reunion, since they had obviously drifted apart for different reasons.
Yep, right where they belong. Great chapter, Jo… I’ll likely be needing this to get me through the next episode. *sigh* Thanks, Jo.
having you back is a bit like bette and tina in this story — we still need some reassurance that you are not going away again and that you missed us like we missed you. still want to be wooed back ms badge — i think one of your nc17 would do nicely to allay our fears. hope you feel better –oh and thanks for telling a mutual friend that i am ” a tart ” — i will deal with you later. i have no thoughts about the finale except i fully expect pooh salad from our glorious leader – tell me the worst tomorrow mate xxxxxx
And yeah, Cerdi, you can totally get an amen from me.
Hey, even if they’re foregoing sex for the night, why the pjs when Angelica’s at Kit’s? Are you sure everything is OK between them? I have to agree with ally that an NC-17 would help to allay everbody’s fears. And she’s right about IC feeding us poo on a regular basis, perhaps she was responsible for the e coli outbreaks we had a while back.
Wow, Jo… another exquisite chapter from you… I still don’t know how you do it. You seem to be able to write in a way where every line is pure poetry… and at the same time many of your profound points seem to be written between the lines. It’s magical really… and I don’t want to know how you do it cause like with a magic trick, knowing the technicalities takes away from illusion of being a witness to something not of this earth. Did I see a quote from my last comment in there? I think I did LOL… damn, to know that you would take my words and make them your own – ahhhh, just pure bliss! Thanks, Jo.
amen from me…..and sigh: this was so good, so touching…i miss tibette
“Bette…” I laughed, “What…?” “You’re squeezing me…” LOL! Cute. So glad you’re back and writing again. =)
so nice!!!!! more!!!!!
Jobadge, I think you are right not to have good feelings for Season Fianle. After all, IC is having Bette chase Jodi to New York, to win her back, Who wants to watch that, I mean Tina helps her do it, I think IC is insulting our intelligence with this episode. Glad your back, You are top of the list for stories.
*sigh* Yes that is where they belong always. So so good. PPS
absolutely amazing writing…..i could feel the love between those 2……i loved this…..pps……..
JO, THE WAY YOU WRITE IS SO LOVING AND CUTE!! This story is just so wonderful. Thank you PPS
Amen to the other posters comments. Wonderful as usual. Remarkable actually. The finale will shatter my little TiBette heart so I’ll need to gird my loins.OT: Elton John is 60 years old. I can’t believe it.
Hi mate, I see things getting back to their places again. Great chapter. – My hope is now on season 5. I’m sure were gonna be frustrated tonight… xx
The way they were. If only. I love that Bette want Tina to be healthy before they make love. thanks
Another exquisite chapter! Thanks Jo.
TiBette-cocoon… OMG thats so sweet! I am amazed yet again, i dont know how you do that… But every time I don’t believe you can surprise me anymore, you do with such strenght that it knocks me off my feet! I love ho you described the way either of them felt abt the (non-)pregnancy… The honesty of the guilt that haunts thoughts of relieve.. Thank you Jo! PPS!
And feel better soon!
jo glad to see ur back!
Always so happy to be able to read your wonderful writing. Hope the following up goes fairly swift. Thanks.
Jo it is such a blessing to be able to read your writing. It’s so true what you say about foresight and hindsight…all we really need is sight, plain and simple – to be able to see what is right in front of us. Your writing is phenomenal Jo and I wish Showtime would contract you to write for the show. Your creations are so meaningful…what a dream come true that would be!