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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 52

    Story written on June 20, 2005 by OCD.
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    Coming Home

     

    Just as Bette approached the security line, she saw Tina.  Rushing over to her, Bette gently took Tinas arm and pulled her out of the line. 

     

    Bette:  Tina for god sake, why are you leaving us? 

     

    Tina:  Please Bette let me go.  I cant stay with you.  I cant do this to you any more. 

     

    Bette:  NO!  You cant leave me Tina.  After all we have been through.  After all we have survived.  You will not leave us now.  Not now Tina. 

     

    Bette was crying holding Tinas hands in her own.  She couldnt see that Tina was crying just as hard.

     

    Bette:  Please Tina.  Dont go.  I need you.  We need you.  Why?  Why would you leave me, leave our babies, Tina?  Why?

     

    Tina:  I cant stay Bette.  I lost everything.  She took everything that meant anything to me and destroyed it Bette. 

     

    Bette:  NO!  Tina she didnt.  I’m still here and I still love you more than life itself. 

     

    Tina:  Bette I cant look at you.  When I do, I see her.  You, we cant live like this. 

     

    Bette:  No Tina youre wrong.  She may have looked like me.  Everything about her may have been so similar.  Tina there is one thing she didnt have.  Tina, look at me.  Please baby, look at me. 

     

    Tina:  No Bette I cant.

     

    Bette:  Yes, you can baby.  Look into my eyes.  Tina look at me now!!!  Do you see it baby, its in my eyes?  Do you see my deepest love and affection for only you?  Tina she didnt have that.  She couldnt take that away from you or me.  Look at me Tina.  You have to see it.  Its there.  Every single part of me that has always loved you, needed you and cant live without you.  I cant lose you, Tina.  God I’m begging you please.  Cant you see it?  Please I’m begging you.  You have to see it.  You just have to.  It would kill me if you went away.  I know you just have to see it in my eyes.  (Bette fell to her knees)

     

    Tina knelt down to Bette crying holding her, looking into Bettes eyes.  The more she looked she saw Bette.  She saw the love that no one had ever given her before Bette.  Tina saw the deepest brown eyes that she had always loved.  Jennifers eyes had been mean and dark.  Tina looked harder.  She saw all the years of love theyd shared.  The warmth, the laughter, the tears.  Tina saw Amy Jo in Bettes eyes.  Her precious daughter that looked so much like Bette.  All this love Tina saw in Bettes eyes.  This was Tinas home.  Staring in Bettes eyes, she saw it all.  Everything that had ever meant anything to Tina.  It was there in the most beautiful eyes she had even known.  Eyes like no others.

     

    Tina:  Bette, please baby.  I see it.  I see it in your eyes.  I love you so much baby.  Please Bette.  Please, please take me home.

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    1. Oh my freaking God, Tk. That was freaking…ah…amazing. It was so entirely good I just don’t have to the words.

      I will say this…so not posting my chapter after this one, wow. *shakes head* Wow. Gotta love it.

    2. Another great chapter. Thanks. Gee, I missed that part of the news tonight. DRH is now my number one hospital to never enter as a patient. It used to be Wake Med! Oh well.. It doesn’t help that I work at *u*e and have seen how they handle things.

    3. OCD…you get two thumbs up! Truly amazing/fantastic/awesome/excellent. I bow before you ole great one. Please post again soon. Thanks for sharing your incredible writing talent with us.

    4. OMG…you’re truly an amazing writer. I was SO into the chapter…I want more! I’m addicted. I agree you deserve an award for your story. Thanks for writing — great job.

    5. Another really great chapter! I am so glad B was able to catch T before she boarded the plane. I am hoping things will get back to ‘normal’ soon though.

    6. Another wonderful chapter! You certainly know how to take your readers to the brink of a nervous breakdown just to pull us back in the nick of time!! Looking foward to your next chapter!

    7. TK…that was beautiful…loved it…and i am so glad you didn’t leave us hanging… also love how the gang all came to bette rescue….please comtinue…we need more

    8. OMG.You almost had me in tears.Great update.Sorry about all of your physical ailments.I fractured my foot and it sucks to be injured.Keep The Faith and Good Luck To You.

    10. OCD : As I said – you are the Queen of DRamA :D – I love your story every bit of it and you sure know how to drum up the suspense. At least your story had all the elements of pain, heartaches, laughter, sadness, fears and not just some story that goes on endlessly without ending that is always end up the same – YOURS IS DEFINITELY different!!! YOU DESERVE AN AWARD FOR THIS STORY!!!!

    13. Are you personally trying to kill me??? What have I ever done but read every chapter and thoroughly enjoyed it. Now, you want to scare the living day lights out of me by having Tina leave? Girl, if you weren’t already injured I’d surely put a beating on you! Just kidding. This should help TnB with their intimacy! Yay!

    17. Oh god you had me for a whiole there, i really thought she was going to go and never come back! Enough with the drama will ya, get them back home and get that bitch outta Tina’s head as much as someone who raped you can be!

    18. Thank god, you scare the shit of me, but glad Bette found Tina at the time Tina on the line go to the plane. Ok now let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks! Great chapter!

    19. I´m with kg on this one TK – you really deserve an award for this story. You have put us trough hell and back, but your stories are always wonderful and you are the DRAMA QUEEN. I think you have all of us by the end of a seat everytime we see an update from you and we expect a rollercoster ride everytime. You are truely an amazing writer TK. Thank you for this wonderful story of yours and do post soon. I know I have been absent from commenting but I have been away for about a weeks time, so I have to update my own story as well. Post soon TK – you know we love you

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