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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 52

    Story written on June 20, 2005 by OCD.
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    Coming Home

     

    Shane:  Bette, what happened?  Why did Tina leave?

     

    Bette handed Shane the letter and explained some of what happened last night. 

     

    Bette:  Shane we have to find her please.  She cant leave like this.  It wasnt her fault.  Shes blaming herself for what happened. 

     

    Shane:  Well find her Bette I promise.  Now try to calm down and think…  Where could Tina go? 

     

    Bette:  I dont know Shane.  She hasnt anyone but us.  She hasnt spoken to her family but a few times since, we were married.  I dont think she would go back to North Carolina. 

     

    Shane:  Airport!  Finish getting dressed and well go there first.  Ill call Alice and get her to check the bus station.  She must have called a cab since her car is still here.

     

    Bette:  God, I hadnt even notice it was still here.  I just lost it when I read the letter.

     

    Kit:  Bette…  Bette where is everyone? 

     

    Shane:  Shhh, the twins are still asleep.

     

    Kit:  Shane what is going on?  Bette called me so hysterical I couldnt understand her.  Where is Tina?

     

    Shane:  We dont know Kit.  She left leaving only a letter.  She left saying Bette deserved someone better.  Something about the rape made her think Bette would be better off without her Kit. 

     

    Kit:  You take care of Bette and go find Tina.  Ill take care of the twins.  Hurry up.  Get going Bette.  Go find your wife.  Ill stay here by the phone if she returns.  Ill call you.

     

    Bette and Shane took off in Shanes Jeep.  Bette was in no shape to drive.  Heading as fast as they could towards the airport.  Bette didnt know where to look.  It was just a feeling, a long shot that she might find Tina there.  Shane had called Whit to see if there was any way of checking to see if Tina had bought a ticket.  By the time Shane took the off ramp to the airport, Whit called back with ticket and gate information.  Tina was heading to North Carolina. 

     

    Shanes Jeep had barely pulled up to the entrance when Bette jumped out running for the door.  Bette scanned the board to see which way she needed to go.  Finally finding where the gate was located, Bette took off in that direction.  Bettes worst fear was getting through security.  How far ahead was Tina?  When did she leave the house?  Had she already been checked through security?

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    1. Oh my freaking God, Tk. That was freaking…ah…amazing. It was so entirely good I just don’t have to the words.

      I will say this…so not posting my chapter after this one, wow. *shakes head* Wow. Gotta love it.

    2. Another great chapter. Thanks. Gee, I missed that part of the news tonight. DRH is now my number one hospital to never enter as a patient. It used to be Wake Med! Oh well.. It doesn’t help that I work at *u*e and have seen how they handle things.

    3. OCD…you get two thumbs up! Truly amazing/fantastic/awesome/excellent. I bow before you ole great one. Please post again soon. Thanks for sharing your incredible writing talent with us.

    4. OMG…you’re truly an amazing writer. I was SO into the chapter…I want more! I’m addicted. I agree you deserve an award for your story. Thanks for writing — great job.

    5. Another really great chapter! I am so glad B was able to catch T before she boarded the plane. I am hoping things will get back to ‘normal’ soon though.

    6. Another wonderful chapter! You certainly know how to take your readers to the brink of a nervous breakdown just to pull us back in the nick of time!! Looking foward to your next chapter!

    7. TK…that was beautiful…loved it…and i am so glad you didn’t leave us hanging… also love how the gang all came to bette rescue….please comtinue…we need more

    8. OMG.You almost had me in tears.Great update.Sorry about all of your physical ailments.I fractured my foot and it sucks to be injured.Keep The Faith and Good Luck To You.

    10. OCD : As I said – you are the Queen of DRamA :D – I love your story every bit of it and you sure know how to drum up the suspense. At least your story had all the elements of pain, heartaches, laughter, sadness, fears and not just some story that goes on endlessly without ending that is always end up the same – YOURS IS DEFINITELY different!!! YOU DESERVE AN AWARD FOR THIS STORY!!!!

    13. Are you personally trying to kill me??? What have I ever done but read every chapter and thoroughly enjoyed it. Now, you want to scare the living day lights out of me by having Tina leave? Girl, if you weren’t already injured I’d surely put a beating on you! Just kidding. This should help TnB with their intimacy! Yay!

    17. Oh god you had me for a whiole there, i really thought she was going to go and never come back! Enough with the drama will ya, get them back home and get that bitch outta Tina’s head as much as someone who raped you can be!

    18. Thank god, you scare the shit of me, but glad Bette found Tina at the time Tina on the line go to the plane. Ok now let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks! Great chapter!

    19. I´m with kg on this one TK – you really deserve an award for this story. You have put us trough hell and back, but your stories are always wonderful and you are the DRAMA QUEEN. I think you have all of us by the end of a seat everytime we see an update from you and we expect a rollercoster ride everytime. You are truely an amazing writer TK. Thank you for this wonderful story of yours and do post soon. I know I have been absent from commenting but I have been away for about a weeks time, so I have to update my own story as well. Post soon TK – you know we love you

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