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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 52

    Story written on June 20, 2005 by OCD.
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    Coming Home

     

    Ssshh baby, Ive got you.  Just hold on baby.  I wont let go.  I promise.  I love you baby, I swear I do with all of my heart.  Its ok, really it is.  Everythings going to be ok Tina.  You just need more time baby.  Thats all.  Just a little bit more time.  Bette said holding Tina tightly in her arms as her own tears began to fall. 

     

    Bette held Tina in her arms through out the night.  Never once letting go.  She awoke the next morning feeling cold and the bed was empty.  Bette sat up and looked around for Tina.  She got up and went into the twins room, and then she looked into the bathroom for Tina.  Bette checked every where.  Tina was no where to be found.  Bette finally noticed a note by the phone in the kitchen.

     

    Dear Bette,

     

    I have loved you since the moment I saw you.  I have loved you more than I have ever thought possible.  I love our children more than life itself.  However, I dont love me any more and I dont know how to fix this.  You deserve so much more than something so broken as I am right now.    I cannot be the wife that you deserve.  I dont know if I ever will be again.  I just know that I love you so much that I can not allow you to suffer any more because of me.  Please know that I will always love you and cherish you and our babies.  Please forgive me Bette.  I never wanted her to take what was so completely yours.  I will call you when I am settled to let you know that I am safe.  Please dont look for me Bette.  I love you forever and always this I promise to you.

     

    Love Tina

     

    The tears were falling so hard down Bettes face she could hardly read the end of the letter.  She grabbed the phone and called Kit to come over.  Then she called Alice, Whit and then Shane.  Please help me.  Tina has left and I need to find her. Bette begged her friends desperately.  They were on their way.  Shane jumped the fence and was inside looking for Bette first thing.  She found Bette in the bedroom trying to dress her self.  She was crying so hard it was all she could do to button her shirt.

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    1. Oh my freaking God, Tk. That was freaking…ah…amazing. It was so entirely good I just don’t have to the words.

      I will say this…so not posting my chapter after this one, wow. *shakes head* Wow. Gotta love it.

    2. Another great chapter. Thanks. Gee, I missed that part of the news tonight. DRH is now my number one hospital to never enter as a patient. It used to be Wake Med! Oh well.. It doesn’t help that I work at *u*e and have seen how they handle things.

    3. OCD…you get two thumbs up! Truly amazing/fantastic/awesome/excellent. I bow before you ole great one. Please post again soon. Thanks for sharing your incredible writing talent with us.

    4. OMG…you’re truly an amazing writer. I was SO into the chapter…I want more! I’m addicted. I agree you deserve an award for your story. Thanks for writing — great job.

    5. Another really great chapter! I am so glad B was able to catch T before she boarded the plane. I am hoping things will get back to ‘normal’ soon though.

    6. Another wonderful chapter! You certainly know how to take your readers to the brink of a nervous breakdown just to pull us back in the nick of time!! Looking foward to your next chapter!

    7. TK…that was beautiful…loved it…and i am so glad you didn’t leave us hanging… also love how the gang all came to bette rescue….please comtinue…we need more

    8. OMG.You almost had me in tears.Great update.Sorry about all of your physical ailments.I fractured my foot and it sucks to be injured.Keep The Faith and Good Luck To You.

    10. OCD : As I said – you are the Queen of DRamA :D – I love your story every bit of it and you sure know how to drum up the suspense. At least your story had all the elements of pain, heartaches, laughter, sadness, fears and not just some story that goes on endlessly without ending that is always end up the same – YOURS IS DEFINITELY different!!! YOU DESERVE AN AWARD FOR THIS STORY!!!!

    13. Are you personally trying to kill me??? What have I ever done but read every chapter and thoroughly enjoyed it. Now, you want to scare the living day lights out of me by having Tina leave? Girl, if you weren’t already injured I’d surely put a beating on you! Just kidding. This should help TnB with their intimacy! Yay!

    17. Oh god you had me for a whiole there, i really thought she was going to go and never come back! Enough with the drama will ya, get them back home and get that bitch outta Tina’s head as much as someone who raped you can be!

    18. Thank god, you scare the shit of me, but glad Bette found Tina at the time Tina on the line go to the plane. Ok now let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks! Great chapter!

    19. I´m with kg on this one TK – you really deserve an award for this story. You have put us trough hell and back, but your stories are always wonderful and you are the DRAMA QUEEN. I think you have all of us by the end of a seat everytime we see an update from you and we expect a rollercoster ride everytime. You are truely an amazing writer TK. Thank you for this wonderful story of yours and do post soon. I know I have been absent from commenting but I have been away for about a weeks time, so I have to update my own story as well. Post soon TK – you know we love you

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