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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 53
Bette was standing looking out the back admiring the sight of her two wonderful children and their good friend Joe. You could really see how much he loved the twins. So kind and gentle for someone his size. Bette was shaken from her amusement when she heard her name and those sweet loving words. Baby come here. A huge grin formed on her face as she turned walking into the bathroom.
Tina leaned up exposing her breast to hand Bette her glass of wine. Bette felt frozen as only her hand could move to accept the glass. Her eyes mesmerized by the beauty of her wifes body.
Tina: Babe, I think you might be a bit over dressed.
Bette: Huh what?
Tina: Your clothes Bette. Lose the clothes.
Bette: Oh right yes. Clothes. Losing. Now
Bette got so nervous she was trying to get her shirt off while still holding the glass of wine. She finally figured it out that she needed to set it down in order to remove the sleeve. Switching the glass to the other just wasnt getting it done. Tina looked up at Bette and giggled as she took the glass from her.
With her clothes removed Bette reached for Tinas hand that gently guided Bette into the tub. Bette sat down facing Tina as she took her wine glass back. They both leaned in as their lips met for a kiss. Bette whispered thank you. Moving closer wrapping her legs around Bettes waist Tina whispered Your welcome. Is this ok? Bette asked, her voice just above a whisper. Tina felt her body becoming aroused from the soft spoken words from Bette. Something about her voice, her whisper that had always had this effect on Tina. Tina let her fingers gently caress the side of Bettes face as she whispered back. Yes.
Baby let me bathe you. Ive missed you so much I just want to feel every part of your body. Tina said as she set her wine glass down. Still facing Bette, Tina reached for the washcloth and soaped it. With her right hand Tina began to wash Bettes chest, then her neck. Tina moved the clothe over Bettes left arm across the front of her shoulders and then down Bettes right arm. Tina moved closer reaching around and washed Bettes back as she felt their very harden nipples touch. Tina let out a moan into Bettes ear. Better wrapped her arms around Tinas body and held her there for just a moment longer. Then Bette remembered something and released Tina, her fear of Tina feeling restrained caused her to sit back.
Looking into Bettes eyes Tina could see that Bette was thinking very hard about something. Then Tina remembered what the book said about embracing your lover so as not to make them feel restrained. Tina knew this must be what Bette is thinking. So she leaned forwards and pulled Bette back into their embrace and held her tightly. Softly Tina whispered, This is ok. This is what I want. There is one thing I need to ask of you. What baby? Please, you can ask anything of thing of me. Bette said almost begging. Tina could see the concern in Bettes eyes and knew that she needed to get this out fast to relax Bette from her feelings that something was wrong.
Bette, I need I need for you to look at me. I need to see your eyes.. I want I want you to make love to me. Tina felt Bettes body tremble against her own as she whispered this into Bettes ear. Bette, I need to see your eyes as your hands caress me. I need to see your eyes as your fingers enter me. I need to look into your eyes as you make love to me, Bette. As I feel my body respond to you and only you, I need to see your eyes. When I feel my ***** building as you bring me there baby. I need to see your eyes. And when you do my love, I need to see only your eyes to know that I am home.
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(57 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
really good chapter
Gah! Woman that was completely amazing. Totally loved it. You used the magic words, heh. I love how Bette was so conscious of how Tina felt and that Tina knew this and felt more loved. More, later twin!
beautiful…Tina really see trust in Bettes eyes…great chapter and i ready to next bring it on nc 17 FIRE..lol..
A wonderful chapter. And yes, if Tina see Bette’s eyes, she’ll be safe for love making.
Great chapter. Its great that you are easing them into this.I have come to enjoy the drama and the comedic parts as well.Keep it up.
K
Wonderful chapter as always. Very sweet. Can’t wait for more.
Just beautiful TK – really a very nice chapter for Bette to gain Tina´s trust back. Post soon
Very touching.
WOW! Truly an amazing chapter.
WOW…simply amazing!.
Really GREAT chapter. Tina voicing what she needs — looking into Bette’s eyes…amazing. Very well written.
I literally forgot to breath during that bathtub scene. If it had been any longer, I might have passed out!!
great chapter. please post soon. please.
good chapter – i think now may be a good time to get Tina to get pass her trauma and bring perhaps a closure to the rape thing – how long can both T&B be tortured and not to make the story too draggy – tks
As always, great chapter. You are actually showing true love at its finest & what happens with communication & love. Keep up the good work, just keep the love flowing. Oh, and much – much more pertaining to the twins please — THANKS!
Good Post. Its all in the eyes.
Good chapter. Yes Bette’s eyes is have alot of love and safe. Now Tina need to see Bette’s eyes and she will find love and safe and like home again. Post soon, thanks!
OMFG – I died and came back to life between this chapter and the last. This is so excellent. I can’t get enough. Please becareful with the arm and continue to write “softly”.