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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 53

    Story written on June 22, 2005 by OCD.
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    Searching for my way home.

    Joe:  How did you know.  I mean who had feelings for who first with you two?

     

    Bette and Tina told Joe a short version of how they met and feel in love.  By the time they were down Joe had both a grin on his face and tears in his eyes. 

     

    Joe:  That is just so (Sniffle)  Just so awesome.  Like a fairy tale come true.  No wonder you two look so right together.  Love at first sight.  I dont think I ever believed in that until now. 

     

    Tina:  Thank you Joe.  Thats very sweet of you. 

     

    Joe:  So what are you guys up to?  I mean I was I guess sorta feeling sorry for myself and I wanted to come over and play with the twins.  You know, it just makes me feel happy.  Could I take them out to play.

     

    Tina:  Absolutely Joe.  Actually I would really appreciate it a lot.  Bette and I were just about to take a hot bath.  So that would be a great help. 

     

    Joe:  OK well be outside then. 

     

    Bette turned looking at Tina with a confused look on her face.  Until she saw the look in Tinas eyes.  This sudden feeling of bathing with Tina sent a jolt to her center.  Being in close proximity with Tinas naked body had Bettes senses soar into overload.  Ill go get our bath ready.  Tina said as she winked and headed towards the bathroom.

     

    Bettes feet felt like they were nailed to the floor.  As strongly as her body felt the excitement of bathing with Tina.  Her emotions held her still.  Ok, I just have to make Tina feel safe.  I have to show her how much I want her.  Then if shes ok with all of that I am going to blow her mind.  Bette said convincing herself this had to work.

     

    In the bathroom, Tina had closed the shades to darken the room.  She filled the Jacuzzi style tub and lit candles all around.  She snuck into the kitchen and grabbed a bottle of wine and two glasses then headed back as she heard Bette locking the front door.  Removing her clothes she climbed into the tub now filled with bubbles.  Bette.  Baby, come here.  Tina said as she poured them both a glass of wine. 

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    2. Gah! Woman that was completely amazing. Totally loved it. You used the magic words, heh. I love how Bette was so conscious of how Tina felt and that Tina knew this and felt more loved. More, later twin!

    14. good chapter – i think now may be a good time to get Tina to get pass her trauma and bring perhaps a closure to the rape thing – how long can both T&B be tortured and not to make the story too draggy – tks

    15. As always, great chapter. You are actually showing true love at its finest & what happens with communication & love. Keep up the good work, just keep the love flowing. Oh, and much – much more pertaining to the twins please — THANKS!

    17. Good chapter. Yes Bette’s eyes is have alot of love and safe. Now Tina need to see Bette’s eyes and she will find love and safe and like home again. Post soon, thanks!

    18. OMFG – I died and came back to life between this chapter and the last. This is so excellent. I can’t get enough. Please becareful with the arm and continue to write “softly”.

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