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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 53

     

    Tina:  I’m sorry babe; I didnt notice he had a handful. 

     

    Bette:  Its ok.  I didnt either till you pulled him away and my head went with him.  (laughing)

     

    Tina:  What do you want for dinner?

     

    Bette:  What ever you want is fine.  I’m easy to please.

     

    Bette noticed Tina look away with tears forming in her eyes. 

     

    Bette:  Hey..  Hey look at me baby.  Whats wrong? 

     

    Tina:  Nothing its just  Today was very hard and all.  Talking about the  I’m just still a little bit emotional is all.

     

    Bette:  Hey, why dont we put the twins in their playpen for a while.  Then let me fix you a hot bath.  While you do that Ill fix dinner.  Hows that sound?

     

    Tina:  sounds great. 

     

    Bette and Tina were heading for the playpen when Joe knocked on the patio door.  Bette waved him in. 

     

    Bette:  Hey Joe how are things? 

     

    Joe:  Work is fine, everyones good I guess.

     

    Tina:  You guess.  UT OH..  Boy trouble

     

    Joe:  How did you know?  Did Shane tell you??

     

    Bette:  No, its written all over your face.  Whats wrong kiddo? 

     

    Tina:  Yea, who is it that has your panties in a wad?

     

    Joe:  No one.  Panties? 

     

    Tina:  Its an expression Joe.  I was just kiddin.  Believe me weve seen what you wear.  (laughing)

     

    Joe:  Oh uh its ah.  I cant help it.  Its driving me crazy.  Ive felt this way for so long but I dont know what to do about it.  What if he doesnt feel the same?  What if I make a fool of my self?  I..  Just. Dont ..

     

    Bette and Tina said in unison.  CHARLES!

     

    Joe:  But how  How did you know??

     

    Bette:  Joe we saw it the first time we met you both.  The way you look at him.  Please 

     

    Joe:  Yea well thats my feelings but hes straight. 

     

    Tina:  So was I when I met and fell in love with Bette.  You wont know unless you tell Charles how you feel about him. 

     

    Bette:  Thats right. 

     

    Comments

    1. Gah! Woman that was completely amazing. Totally loved it. You used the magic words, heh. I love how Bette was so conscious of how Tina felt and that Tina knew this and felt more loved. More, later twin!

    2. good chapter – i think now may be a good time to get Tina to get pass her trauma and bring perhaps a closure to the rape thing – how long can both T&B be tortured and not to make the story too draggy – tks

    3. As always, great chapter. You are actually showing true love at its finest & what happens with communication & love. Keep up the good work, just keep the love flowing. Oh, and much – much more pertaining to the twins please — THANKS!

    4. Good chapter. Yes Bette’s eyes is have alot of love and safe. Now Tina need to see Bette’s eyes and she will find love and safe and like home again. Post soon, thanks!

    5. OMFG – I died and came back to life between this chapter and the last. This is so excellent. I can’t get enough. Please becareful with the arm and continue to write “softly”.

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