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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 58
“Whit, I need you! I need to feel you to know that you are safe,” was all she had said over my cell phone. I found myself willing to move heaven and even, earth, itself, to get to her. I was so tired I have no idea how I arrived at our home. My desire to hold Stacey was so intense that I could not concentrate on anything else. It was almost, as though, my love for this woman had willed me home. Yes, I know. That sounds stupid especially coming from a hard ***** like me. But it’s how I felt as I entered our bedroom.
Looking around the darkened room, I could barely make out anything except for my crying angel. Her ivory skin stood out against the blue satin robe that she always loved to wear for me. Seeing the way it clung to her body, I could guess that she wore nothing underneath it. She sat with her knees tucked close to her body in what was my favorite chair. Delicate arms hugged her own slender body, trying to stop the shaking that she thought might never end. Golden strands of silky hair had been pulled off her neck but, there were the usual stray strands falling here and there. These things I always thought made my Stacey, just that, my Stacey. So why was my baby crying this way? I took a step forward watching as her entire body turned to stone.
“What’s wrong, baby?” I asked in the gentlest voice that I could muster.
With the sound of my voice, Stacey felt her sobs crushing her more than before. I fell to my knees at her feet pleading with her to look at me.
“What happened to us, Whit? “Stacey asked with so much pain through to her voice.
The shot that pierced my heart caused a saddened groan. I would have done anything to take away her worry, her tears, and her pain but, I didnt know how. It was my job. Its all that I know. Id die if I were not a cop.
“Stacey,” I started, weakly. “I know that I have been in some very dangerous situation. I know that you are afraid. Stacey, I love you. You have to know that.” I sighed. The sound of Stacey’s crying answered that question for me. “I can do better, Stacey. Just don’t give up on me! Please, stay with me.” The tears were stinging at my deep Hazel eyes as I said, “Please.”
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(35 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
Well, crap TK, whodothunkit!? That was incredibly…incredible! Woo. Way to go my twin, my love, heh. More!
Wow that was great! You really drew me in!
WOW…just WOW..great chapter…
rebakathy said it perfectly…incredibly…incredible!!!
Damn that was amazing and incredible, love it. Please post soon, thanks!
WOW…THATS ALL I CAN SAY….GREAT JOB
Wow just doesn’t cover it. Great chapter TK.
that was amazing i absolutely enjoy reading your stories. excellent
TK…wow what a chapter…you were right we had to read each and every word… loved it..glad whit woke up… please we need more
Damn! that was simply amazing TK ! Im glad Whit got awake…they will really have to talk things out. Great chapter! Post soon.
I love this story and the direction it is going THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! Post soon LONGER PLEASE
You are really the Q.O.D. :D
OMG…that was great. I was totally into the story.
I didn’t see that coming. frist you give us a loving scene with them. then you crush us. But then you brought us back to a happy place. GOOD POST!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG… that was VERY intense…. great chapter as ALWAYS.. i have a confession to make…. besides bette and tina, stacey and whit are my next favorite couple!! hell.. i wish that IC would have hire you to be in the writing panel!
I have just read from chapter 1 to this present chapter and have to say, this is an absolutly brilliant story!!!! Lots O drama ~ but thats what I like. Keep up the great work and Im looking foward to reading more!
TK – I’m still reeling over chapter 47. That shit scared me out of my skin. I fell for that entire journey. Never have I’ve beeen so entralled and drawn to a storyline. And then the dream. SHIT. I fell of my couch reading. So much so that I re-read chapters 44 to 50 again just to make sure I read what I thought I read. DAM GOOD SHIT…More please. Thank you….
Holy cow TK – that was awesome. Damn girl you are good at this.
Fuck TK, Well when I can open my mouth to talk I will say something but for now it’s closed
WONDERFUL