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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 57
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BREAKING NEWS
Police have surrounded a home on
The scene turned deadly for Police Officers responding to the call when they were met with gunshots from inside the home. Shots were exchanged between the Officers and suspect leaving one officer dead and the other wounded. The wounded Officer was able to crawl away after the suspect reentered his home.
The suspect is believed to be the husband and is now holding his wife and 2 children hostage. No names have been released at this time.
After SWAT Officers arrived at the scene a sudden exchange of gunfire shattered the standoff between police, SWAT and the suspect, leaving another officer dead and two more officers wounded.
The suspect is a gun shop owner and it is believed that he may have an arsenal of weapons in the home.
Stay tuned to your local news channel. We will be bringing you updates as this story continues to unfold.
Whit left sudden when her SWAT pager went off. But that was hours ago. Stacey is sitting there glued to the TV holding Josh sleeping in her arms. There has been no word of the slain officers yet. All she can do is wait. Wait for a knock at the door or for Whit to call telling her everything is ok. Stacey desperately needs to hear the sound of Whits voice right now.
Tina got Shane to come over and look after the twins so they could go be with Stacey. Bette dialed their home number waiting for Stacey to answer.
Stacey, its Bette. We just heard the news. Stacey we are a few blocks away. I just didnt want to frighten you knocking on the door ok. Bette said.
Stacey answered the door with Josh in her arms. Tina quickly reached for him when she saw that Staceys knees were giving way. Bette helped Stacey back over to the couch where she joined her. Tina sat in the chair holding Josh.
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This was heartbreaking. Wonderful…tense…makes me want to run over to my best friends house (who is a police officer) and hug her like crazy!! Thank you for this.
It’s time for Whit to be the stay at home mom. Stacey can go back to being a brain surgeon.
Stacey?..me either…OMG..i´m about to be in a cold sweat..woman..amzing chapter
Wow! Talk about intense. Don’t know if I could handle being in Stacey’s shoes. Glad Whit wasn’t hurt to bad.
That was a great chapter, please post soon
K
WOnderful two chapters. Just love your story.
Intense and heartbreaking. I like Whit and Stacey. Thanks…great as always.
i know what stacy means.. whit it time to retire to a desk job…love this story..
wow great chapter TK !! you da best! Please write more about Stacy and Whit…maybe Stacy talking more about her fears to Whit and what Whit feels about all this situation..it would be interesting. Post soon!.
I sense this may just be the beginning of the drama.
Hey It’s me again I just really wrong name sorry OCD.
Hey ODC I’m been reading your Story I love it Whoa! and your really good writer Thank you your Awesome Writer and really good Whoa! this is my first comment your Amazing Writer Please post soon.
That was intense TK – wonderful job, it was like being there myself. Thanks for that one. Post soon
Damn this is scare the hell out of me, and glad that Whit ok, and now we know Whit and Stacy will have problem coming and hope they will talk about it. Post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Thank you!!!! I love this story I think that she is a interesting charcter and deserved her own story with stacy . Fantasic keep it going POST SOON!!!!
Good Chp. I feel bad for Stacey it must be hard to go through that every not knowing if it day might be the last day with Whit. But i have a feeling that Whit can’t just give it up it is part of who she is. How many other kids dose Whit have? And were do they live. I don’t comment often but i think your story is great.
Hey OCD, I had to do quite a bit of reading today to catch up (though I still didn’t finish). I love your stories, this new twist with Stacey and Whit is great. It adds dimension to the story (something to prolong the story until TLW returns.) Hey I’m a bit confuse, didn’t u call Whit “Uncle Whit” on xmas and I thought Whit got custody of his 2 kids he had with Jennifer. Help me out here?