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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 58

    Story written on June 26, 2005 by OCD.
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    “Come on, baby. Please let me see those beautiful hazel eyes!”

     

    Stacey saw the fluttering of Whits lashes once more. It was just as subtle as always,  but she was determined to watch.  Staring as she did every visit.  There, in that, the longest 5 minutes of her natural born life, she waited, scared to move or even breathe or she would miss something.

     

    Whit never opened her eyes. In fact, Stacey felt the hand holding hers loosen until it fell limp against the hospital bed.

     

    “A muscle spasm.  I’m a damn doctor.  A brain surgeon no less.  I know exactly what it is.” Stacey whispered. She felt tears run down her cheek.  Anger, disappointment and pain, she released her wife hand. She pushed off the bed moving to stand at the window.  Slamming her fist against the wall. 

     

    “God Dammit, Whit!  You are such a tease, sometimes!”

     

    “Never bothered you before.”

     

    Stacey felt her knees weaken, her entire body then tense. She couldnt move.  Her body stood frozen facing the window.  She forced herself to look over her shoulder to her motionless wife. Whit hadn’t said that. Once again it was only wishful thinking.  Her mind clouding her judgment. 

     

    A Doctor.  What good am I?  I cant even help my own wife.  I cant give up Whit.  I cant.  I need you, Josh needs you

     

    She walked around to the other side of the bed crawling up beside Whit. Wrapping her arms around her, she kissed her neck, cheek and gently kissed her lips.

     

    “I love you, Whit. Do you hear me? I love you baby, I will love you forever and always.”

     

    She feel asleep snuggled against Whits chest.  When Stacey awoke she opened her eyes, she realized just where she was. The hospital, she groaned. She looked from the window to her wife beside her.  Hazel eyes were staring at her lovingly.

     

    “WHIT?!” Stacey said leaning up from beside her wife sitting next to her.  Blinking her eyes closed then open again.  Whit oh my god baby.

     

    “Shh,” Whit whispered. I’m here baby.  I’m here.

     

    Stacey fault so hard not to cry from sheer happiness.  She forced herself to remain calm; her trembling hands gave her away.

     

    “What is the last thing that you remember?”  Stacey asked through her tears she had tried to hold at bay. 

     

    The flashed fragmented memory of her body thrown backwards by the explosion, the blood and dead bodies caused Whit to flinch.  She shut her eyes hard and jerked her head to the side as if to shake the memory from her mind.  

     

    “It’s okay, baby,” Stacey promised. She kissed her wife softly. “You’re okay, now.  I’m her baby.  I never left you”

     

    Whit forced those dark memories away. “Thats not..  It’s not the . last thing that I remember though.”

     

    Stacey tried not to show her concern of what Whit might have remembered from the grenade going off.  Did she remember her partner?  “What do you remember, baby?”

     

    “You.  Whit struggled to get the words out.  “I could hear you.  You said you needed me.”

     

    Staceys blue eyes grew wide.  “It was you.  Oh my God Whit, I felt you!”

     

    Stacey pushed the nurses button franticly.  A voice came over the monitor.  Yes, my I help you?  The nurse said. 

     

    Please get the Doctor!  Shes awake!  Hurry!  Stacey said with tears streaming down her face. 

     

    Whit smiled before snuggling into her wifes breast waiting for the doctor came.

     

    Whit has a long road ahead of her, but Stacey would be there.  They had a lot to talk about.  Things Stacey prayed Whit wouldnt remember. 

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    14. I didn’t see that coming. frist you give us a loving scene with them. then you crush us. But then you brought us back to a happy place. GOOD POST!!!!!!!!!!!

    15. OMG… that was VERY intense…. great chapter as ALWAYS.. i have a confession to make…. besides bette and tina, stacey and whit are my next favorite couple!! hell.. i wish that IC would have hire you to be in the writing panel!

    16. I have just read from chapter 1 to this present chapter and have to say, this is an absolutly brilliant story!!!! Lots O drama ~ but thats what I like. Keep up the great work and Im looking foward to reading more!

    17. TK – I’m still reeling over chapter 47. That shit scared me out of my skin. I fell for that entire journey. Never have I’ve beeen so entralled and drawn to a storyline. And then the dream. SHIT. I fell of my couch reading. So much so that I re-read chapters 44 to 50 again just to make sure I read what I thought I read. DAM GOOD SHIT…More please. Thank you….

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