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From Above…Ch.5
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“*****, T the cab is here!”
Oh well, at least she’s finding out how neurotic I am before spending a whole two weeks with me. It was four days since we had our second date, first made love and I asked Tina to come with me on a (sort of) business trip to London. It had only just been over two weeks since we had first met. Usually, if things had been moving this fast with anyone elsewell, they just wouldn’t have been. I felt so complete with Tina and wanted to spend all my time with her. I knew I owed Arnold Oliver big time for suggesting I bring Tina with me on this trip and was determined to get his friends struggling gallery back on its feet.
“I’m coming honeyI can’t find my other sandalwhere did you throw it last night?!”
I thought back to last night, becoming instantly aroused by the passionate love making which had occurredmy angel got me in such a way that no one else had ever and I felt as though I was rediscovering myself and my sexuality every time Tina and I got intimate.
“Never mind, I got it!” Tina came hobbling into the living room, sandal in hand, looking a vision in khaki cropped trousers and a pale yellow vest.
“Come on, sandal on foot now Kennard!” I say playfully, unable to get annoyed at this beauty that was making us late for the airport.
I carry our bags out to the cab and Tina runs out after me. I can see from her face how excited she is about this trip and although I may not be giving out the same signals, I feel exactly the same. We climb in the cab and thus begins Tina’s non-stop chatter all the way to the airport.
“Bette! I’m so excited! This is so fantastic, I can’t believe I’m going to London with youthank you so much for asking me babe, I can’t wait to see more of the citythe other time I went I just did all the touristy bits and I feel this time I’ll get to see some of the real London!”
Even though we had had this conversation the morning after I had asked her to come with me, and the next day and the day after the that, I still indulged her and truth be known, got all caught up in the moment once again.
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Ah, Lou2282, I was so lucky to discover your story today, you simply cannot have an idea how much ! At least just let me say now that I’m slowly recovering from a very painful time, having been unable to read and comment all my usual favorite stories here, and that I currently try my best to make up for lost time (…so, to all my favorite authors who could read me now, please forgive me, I’ll be back as soon as possible !).
And then, just at the better moment possible, here I found this story of yours and let it comfort me and melt me a LOT… how magic !
Many, many thanks for such a reading’s joy. God knows how much I needed it again.
You know, I’m such an incurable romantic and the way you choiced to give us a new B&T beginning (… my biggest weakness !) from Bette’s so touching point of view brang a laaaarge sunny smile on my face and a delicious warmth in my heart !
I simply adore all these inweard thoughts that captured so marvelously our dear so-called Alpha-in-control’s fragility, her hidden insecurities and shyness. Her amazed discovery of this totally unknown land called Love is quite moving, I must say. According to what I always thought, of both of them Tina really is the strongest and the rock to which Bette had to anchor herself to feel secure. One mustn’t mistake appearances for reality – never ! Very often the strongest isn’t the one we thought to be.
Now I cannot help but sharing my thoughts about the emotional cliffhanger here – something I rarely did, being so naturally respectful of author’s secrets.
For me, there’s a winked intention in Tina’s answer – a way to tease our so cute shy Bette. Because if our awkward brunette was so hardly able to write the Big L word and pretty unable to say it “out loud” yet, it’s obvious (well, for me – too bad if I’m wrong !) that what Tina choiced to scribble out had to be the same word – simply because she’s much more the kind of person who prefers to directly express feelings, and so to say them instead of writing them. This way, I understand her answer as “no, that wasn’t exactly what I was going to WRITE… simply because I finally preferred to SAY it “out loud” to you.”
… of course I’ll be fully happy to be right – but if I’m not, well, put the blame on my incorrigible romantic point of view on things !
Thanks again a LOT for your lovely, sensitive, intelligent and very well written story. From now I’ll have the pleasure to be your faithful reader ! ^_^
What did she want her to write? You have join the club, Big tease club.
Aaaaaaaaaaggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Why you do this to me?????? What was she going to say dammmyt???????????
Lou post NOW….shit!!!
*mumblin* damn Fanfic writers
hahahahaha, sorry no time to write…i’m hoovering ;) x
can’t possibly still be hoovering, it’s 4pm uk time as i write……so what does she plan on saying?
God how can you stop there???
That is so cruel!!!!!!
SNQQPY – pm me girl. we chase each other all over the board. i have to know my evil twin.
LOU it goes double for me. post now that was just cruel. poor bette is dying.
OMG!!!! You can’t just end it there….post soon.
All i know is that you better post very sonn. Great chapter
you are sooooooooo cruel…..argh…please post soon!
Damn this is so much fun and let see what’s Tina write to Bette, post soon.