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From Above…Ch.5
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“It’ll be so great T, I know quite a lot of the city and where we are staying is very ‘hip’ at the moment, not touristy at alland you know the best bit about it all?
“What’s that then?” she replied with a twinkle in her eye and a shy smileshe knew what was coming.
“That I’m there for the first time with my beautiful girlfriendit will be our special place…”
We had established, or rather Tina had, the morning after our second date that we were now an item.
“Are you sure this is what you want T? You don’t mind me calling you T do you?” I had asked, my heart beating faster at the thought of Tina wanting what I did and possibly feeling the same about me as I did about her
“Bette, it’s what I’ve wanted from the moment I said yes to dating youyou’ve changed my life so much and if feels so natural to be with youof course I want to be your girlfriendoh and the ‘T’ thing
“Yeah.” I said in anticipation
“I love it baby, lets just say it will always remind me of last night” she winked at me and I set about reminding her all about last night again, safe in the knowledge that my angel wasn’t going anywhere.
Back in the cab, Tina’s voice broke into my thoughts
“I love the thought of London being our special place, it is such a romantic city” Tina’s eyes grew dreamy and I squeeze her hand, the only way I can communicate my unbelievable love for herI wish you knew my angel
Tina’s chatter had died down since we had arrived at the airport and as we board the plane she could almost be described as subdued.
“Are you okay T?” please don’t say you’re having doubts now the time has actually come
“Yeah baby I’m fine, just a little nervous about the flightit’s such a long time in such a small space”
I had failed to tell her that we were flying business class courtesy of Arnold Oliver, I wanted it to be a surprise, but I knew now was the time to enlighten her
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Ah, Lou2282, I was so lucky to discover your story today, you simply cannot have an idea how much ! At least just let me say now that I’m slowly recovering from a very painful time, having been unable to read and comment all my usual favorite stories here, and that I currently try my best to make up for lost time (…so, to all my favorite authors who could read me now, please forgive me, I’ll be back as soon as possible !).
And then, just at the better moment possible, here I found this story of yours and let it comfort me and melt me a LOT… how magic !
Many, many thanks for such a reading’s joy. God knows how much I needed it again.
You know, I’m such an incurable romantic and the way you choiced to give us a new B&T beginning (… my biggest weakness !) from Bette’s so touching point of view brang a laaaarge sunny smile on my face and a delicious warmth in my heart !
I simply adore all these inweard thoughts that captured so marvelously our dear so-called Alpha-in-control’s fragility, her hidden insecurities and shyness. Her amazed discovery of this totally unknown land called Love is quite moving, I must say. According to what I always thought, of both of them Tina really is the strongest and the rock to which Bette had to anchor herself to feel secure. One mustn’t mistake appearances for reality – never ! Very often the strongest isn’t the one we thought to be.
Now I cannot help but sharing my thoughts about the emotional cliffhanger here – something I rarely did, being so naturally respectful of author’s secrets.
For me, there’s a winked intention in Tina’s answer – a way to tease our so cute shy Bette. Because if our awkward brunette was so hardly able to write the Big L word and pretty unable to say it “out loud” yet, it’s obvious (well, for me – too bad if I’m wrong !) that what Tina choiced to scribble out had to be the same word – simply because she’s much more the kind of person who prefers to directly express feelings, and so to say them instead of writing them. This way, I understand her answer as “no, that wasn’t exactly what I was going to WRITE… simply because I finally preferred to SAY it “out loud” to you.”
… of course I’ll be fully happy to be right – but if I’m not, well, put the blame on my incorrigible romantic point of view on things !
Thanks again a LOT for your lovely, sensitive, intelligent and very well written story. From now I’ll have the pleasure to be your faithful reader ! ^_^
What did she want her to write? You have join the club, Big tease club.
Aaaaaaaaaaggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Why you do this to me?????? What was she going to say dammmyt???????????
Lou post NOW….shit!!!
*mumblin* damn Fanfic writers
hahahahaha, sorry no time to write…i’m hoovering ;) x
can’t possibly still be hoovering, it’s 4pm uk time as i write……so what does she plan on saying?
God how can you stop there???
That is so cruel!!!!!!
SNQQPY – pm me girl. we chase each other all over the board. i have to know my evil twin.
LOU it goes double for me. post now that was just cruel. poor bette is dying.
OMG!!!! You can’t just end it there….post soon.
All i know is that you better post very sonn. Great chapter
you are sooooooooo cruel…..argh…please post soon!
Damn this is so much fun and let see what’s Tina write to Bette, post soon.