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From Above…Ch.5
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I throw the note pad onto the table as if it was yesterday’s paper and look out of the window, already thinking about what I’m going to write next. Soon I hear the skid of the pad landing back on the table and I grab it eagerly.
That was pathetic Porter, try thisafter we’ve undressed each other I plan on sucking and caressing your ***** until you screamwhen you can’t take anymore of that I’m going to ravish your body with passionate kisses and small bites, making you so wet you’ll feel (in the words of Paula Cole) ‘like the Amazon is running between your thighs’you like? Continue along this line of thinking or else I’m not playing anymore. T x
I can’t believe it! Tina is bullying me! I like this strong side of herI never thought she could be so dominatingI feel the blood rushing to my groin and how wet I am gettingBetter make it good then Porter if you want this to continue
So sorry that my last note wasn’t adequate TI hope this is better.
Whilst you are covering my body with your kisses, I’ll be grinding my wetness into your thigh, wanting you to get down there and ***** me with your fingers, tonguebothI want to feel you inside of me as I thrust against you as you bring me to orgasmI want you to lick me inside and out and then suck on my ***** until I explodeall yours baby, B x
That more like it Bette, we both know you’re not as shy and retiring as you were trying to make out in your first note and since your second note pleases me…I’ve decided to stay and play with youthe thought of ***** you and licking you has got me all wet so I want you to move down your reclined seat a bit and let me kneel over your face whilst you lick me and push your tongue inside of megod it felt so good when you did that to me last night, I want you to do it againI want to ride your face and look into your beautiful eyes when you make me come.
The next sentence was totally scribbled out and I try my hardest to see what she had written but it’s no good.
What did the last sentence say? Why did you scribble it out? Too dirty..?
I pass the notepad back to her eagerly and wait with nervous anticipationwhy the nerves Bette, it was probably just more *****!
Because…it’s a secret.T x
Are we going to keep secrets from each other T? B x
I try to keep it as light hearted as possible but the curiosity is just too muchwhat does she not want me to knowI would tell her everythingwell almost everything
NoI’ll do a deal with youyou tell me a big secret and I might tell you mineno secret no deal PorterT x
*****, she’s got mewhat do I do? Does she know how I feel? She must dobut maybe notwhat if I’ve got it all wrong and I tell he and it freaks her out?
I begin to write something completely untrue when something inside of me snapsFor once in your life Porter be honest with yourself and with Tina and tell her how you feelthis girl jumped at the chance to be you date, your girlfriend and then spend two weeks with you in Londonshe’s thrilled at the fact that it’s a romantic city and that you want it to be your special placetell her, tell her, tell her!
I cross out my lies and beginbut I can’t find the right words and I’m almost in tears with the frustration of having it all in my head but not being able to get it out. Keep it simple Portershe’ll only remember the important bit
Tina…I love you, I can’t say it out loud yet but I do.
B x
I practically throw the note pad at her and turn my body away from her in embarrassment as I whisper
“Please tell me that was what you were going to write, T?”
There is an awkward silence before she finds the words to say quietly
“No Bette, not exactly”
What have I done?
TBC
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Ah, Lou2282, I was so lucky to discover your story today, you simply cannot have an idea how much ! At least just let me say now that I’m slowly recovering from a very painful time, having been unable to read and comment all my usual favorite stories here, and that I currently try my best to make up for lost time (…so, to all my favorite authors who could read me now, please forgive me, I’ll be back as soon as possible !).
And then, just at the better moment possible, here I found this story of yours and let it comfort me and melt me a LOT… how magic !
Many, many thanks for such a reading’s joy. God knows how much I needed it again.
You know, I’m such an incurable romantic and the way you choiced to give us a new B&T beginning (… my biggest weakness !) from Bette’s so touching point of view brang a laaaarge sunny smile on my face and a delicious warmth in my heart !
I simply adore all these inweard thoughts that captured so marvelously our dear so-called Alpha-in-control’s fragility, her hidden insecurities and shyness. Her amazed discovery of this totally unknown land called Love is quite moving, I must say. According to what I always thought, of both of them Tina really is the strongest and the rock to which Bette had to anchor herself to feel secure. One mustn’t mistake appearances for reality – never ! Very often the strongest isn’t the one we thought to be.
Now I cannot help but sharing my thoughts about the emotional cliffhanger here – something I rarely did, being so naturally respectful of author’s secrets.
For me, there’s a winked intention in Tina’s answer – a way to tease our so cute shy Bette. Because if our awkward brunette was so hardly able to write the Big L word and pretty unable to say it “out loud” yet, it’s obvious (well, for me – too bad if I’m wrong !) that what Tina choiced to scribble out had to be the same word – simply because she’s much more the kind of person who prefers to directly express feelings, and so to say them instead of writing them. This way, I understand her answer as “no, that wasn’t exactly what I was going to WRITE… simply because I finally preferred to SAY it “out loud” to you.”
… of course I’ll be fully happy to be right – but if I’m not, well, put the blame on my incorrigible romantic point of view on things !
Thanks again a LOT for your lovely, sensitive, intelligent and very well written story. From now I’ll have the pleasure to be your faithful reader ! ^_^
What did she want her to write? You have join the club, Big tease club.
Aaaaaaaaaaggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Why you do this to me?????? What was she going to say dammmyt???????????
Lou post NOW….shit!!!
*mumblin* damn Fanfic writers
hahahahaha, sorry no time to write…i’m hoovering ;) x
can’t possibly still be hoovering, it’s 4pm uk time as i write……so what does she plan on saying?
God how can you stop there???
That is so cruel!!!!!!
SNQQPY – pm me girl. we chase each other all over the board. i have to know my evil twin.
LOU it goes double for me. post now that was just cruel. poor bette is dying.
OMG!!!! You can’t just end it there….post soon.
All i know is that you better post very sonn. Great chapter
you are sooooooooo cruel…..argh…please post soon!
Damn this is so much fun and let see what’s Tina write to Bette, post soon.