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From Above…Ch.9
“Hey T, I need a drinkthere’s a coffee shop next doorI’ll wait for you in there okay?”
“Sure baby,” she says distractedly, “I wont be long”
Famous last words angel
I sit with my coffee by the window in the corner of the room so that I can see Tina walk in but she can’t see me. I pull the card out of my bag and rummage for a pen.
What am I doing? I’ve bought a cardI want it to be for Tinawhat do I write in it? Why have I bought it? Because you have stuff to say Porter and you’ve always been better with the written word rather than the spoken when it comes to matters of the heart
I begin.
Three quarters of an hour later we arrive at a small Mediterranean caf bar just of Upper Street.
“Mem and Lazfunny name for an eating place don’t you think?”
“The guide book says its really good and very intimatelets give it a shot babe, it’ll be nice for you to eat somewhere you haven’t tried before”
Tina had insisted that she find us somewhere to eatsomewhere I hadn’t already been and so this is where we had ended up.
We were shown to a cosy little table near the window in the tiny little caf. Inside, the place is lit with hundreds of Moroccan style lanternsall giving off a small amount of light each. The atmosphere it creates, coupled with the slowly setting sun is amazing and the light falls on Tina’s face and hair in such a way that it really does make her look like a vision from heaven.
“You are beautiful my angel,” I say throatily as the waiter leaves us the menu. She smiles back at me and communicates the same utterance to me without using words. I feel so loved
We order our food and a bottle of Sauvignon Blancso much for not drinking tonightand I ask Tina what she bought from the shop on the high street.
“Er, nothing much, just some costume jewelleryit was quite inexpensivewhat about you, I saw you at the till?”
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(42 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
This is getting better and better. I love this story SO much. Excellent
you can’t leave me hangin like that…….blow her mind–details please! lovin this story
fuck yeah that was mind blowing. but details help, ahahaha. this was great and please post soon. thanks.
Great, great, great! Thanks for the two posts! And if you get the urge to post again…give in! :)
This is wonderful.
Whoa! it’s really great Thanks for another posted I Love it Please continue post soon.
Zip-ity-doo-da!! I feel like I’ve got a bluebird on my shoulder! What the…! Where in the hell did THAT just come from! *blushing* I can’t help it, though, I just love your telling of this beautiful story–I like how sensitive and loving Bette is…it’s so romantic! Thank you lou!
This story is great. After reading this story, I assume that you are British. Please, while writing this story, I do hope that you will include many items about London. Would it be asking too much to have them go on a sightseeing trip to the Yorkshire area and Leeds? I’ve always wanted to visit England and have never had the opportunity. From reading Barbara Taylor Bradford’s books I’ve wanted to see Yorkshire, etc. If you could include this area of England I would be forever greatful. Thank you again. Your story is starting off beautifully and oh so loving.
Okay, how does Bette blow Tina’s mind??? We want details.
Excellent. they are so sweet. Love it
your wish is but my command ladies…next post i promise! x
Author’s Note – was going to be an NC-17 but i thought i’d leave it up to your imaginations ;)
Ohhhhhhh! Aren’t you the sly one Lou. R rating (I blow my angel’s mind.)…..
Yes, my mind went into overdrive……
I forgot to mention….when do we find out what the “little surprise” that Bette added to the basket is!? We know its not the card because that didnt come from Shh!!
LOVE THIS THANKS
bette is going to pop the question…. ok reading on
ok i just realized i am at the end… ok so i am waiting for your next post… but i bet i’m right…. wedding bells will be ringing
What a London dream… I’m melting !
Right now, I’d love to jump in the next plane to enjoy the same journey on the paths of our marvellous two… …Well, are you sure you don’t work for the Tourist Information Center there, getting a bonus for each new reader trapped and pretty ready to fly to Albion’s royal city ? (*big wink & smile*)
Bette is incredibly cute being so insecure and sensitive and she has definitly a gift for writing irresistible romantic words… Reading them over Tina’s shoulder, I was truly melting at the same time : simply beautiful ! Especially this poetic last line, a jewel…
Thank you so much for giving us such a loving story, surrounded by London’s magic charm ! ^_^
that was great! thanks again for this story and post
Thanks for 2 posts they were both great really enjoying your story!!!
Love, love, love your story!!Especially all the great parts bout London.I was there recently and fell in love with the city. Having them kiss on top of St Paul’s…sigh..that painted a marvellous pic for me..
Damn that was amazing and beautiful, love it. Oh and the blow her mind, I think its good if you show how Bette blow Tina’s mind. Post soon please, thnsk!