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From Above…Ch.9
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“This is amazing T, come here and let me love you forever”
She lowers her body on top of me so that just our neck and heads are above water. She kisses me passionately and I kiss her back in the same way. I suck on her bottom lip and she emits a soft moan as my hands caress her back under the water. She moves her kisses from my mouth to my ear, neck, biting me ever so softly. Her hands are all over my ***** and I gasp at the sensations I feel. She stops suddenly and turns her flushed pink face to mine and looks me in the eye.
“I love you so much Bette. Promise you love me as much as you say?”
“Baby, why would you doubt me?” I begin to panicI knew I hadn’t shown her enoughI haven’t given enough of myself to her and she’s given so much to me, what with that beautiful note and everything
“That’s not what I mean babyI don’t doubt you but I’ve just realised that there is no going back for me nowI don’t know how I would cope if I didn’t have your loveI’m totally lost in you”
That was the signal, the sign I needed and I jumped out of the bath
“What?!”
“Come on T, I need to show you something”
“But we ju”
I take her hand and help her out of the bath. I lead her into the bedroom and we sit on the bedour body’s still damp and steaming from the bath water.
“What’s going on Bette, I didn’t mean for you t.”
I silence her words with a kiss and hand her the envelope that contains the card I wrote earlier today.
She looks at me questioningly and slowly opens the envelope. Catching sight of the design on the front of the card she gasps.
“Bette, it’s beautif.”
“Open it angel”
She opens the card and begins to read my thoughts
T,
It’s amazing how one person can change your life, how a smile from you can erase everything bad, how life seems less scary when you’re holding my hand.
It’s phenomenal how fate brings two strangers together, how I survived before I knew you, how whenever I’m with you it’s like a great new adventure.
It’s beautiful how love can be so unconditional, how learning about you is like reading my favourite story, how loving you is easy.
And I’m so thankful that I’m able to know this amazing, phenomenal, beautiful personand because I love you.
Being with you T, and loving you is like feeling the sun on my face every day of my life.
Always,
Bette x
I realise that I haven’t moved a muscle or stopped staring at her face the whole time she was reading the card. And now she’s looking into my eyes and telling me over and over that she loves me, me and her forever, can’t live without me, never wants to be without meand I don’t know what to do or to say.
So I do the only thing that feels right to do at this moment
I blow my angel’s mind.
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This is getting better and better. I love this story SO much. Excellent
you can’t leave me hangin like that…….blow her mind–details please! lovin this story
fuck yeah that was mind blowing. but details help, ahahaha. this was great and please post soon. thanks.
Great, great, great! Thanks for the two posts! And if you get the urge to post again…give in! :)
This is wonderful.
Whoa! it’s really great Thanks for another posted I Love it Please continue post soon.
Zip-ity-doo-da!! I feel like I’ve got a bluebird on my shoulder! What the…! Where in the hell did THAT just come from! *blushing* I can’t help it, though, I just love your telling of this beautiful story–I like how sensitive and loving Bette is…it’s so romantic! Thank you lou!
This story is great. After reading this story, I assume that you are British. Please, while writing this story, I do hope that you will include many items about London. Would it be asking too much to have them go on a sightseeing trip to the Yorkshire area and Leeds? I’ve always wanted to visit England and have never had the opportunity. From reading Barbara Taylor Bradford’s books I’ve wanted to see Yorkshire, etc. If you could include this area of England I would be forever greatful. Thank you again. Your story is starting off beautifully and oh so loving.
Okay, how does Bette blow Tina’s mind??? We want details.
Excellent. they are so sweet. Love it
your wish is but my command ladies…next post i promise! x
Author’s Note – was going to be an NC-17 but i thought i’d leave it up to your imaginations ;)
Ohhhhhhh! Aren’t you the sly one Lou. R rating (I blow my angel’s mind.)…..
Yes, my mind went into overdrive……
I forgot to mention….when do we find out what the “little surprise” that Bette added to the basket is!? We know its not the card because that didnt come from Shh!!
LOVE THIS THANKS
bette is going to pop the question…. ok reading on
ok i just realized i am at the end… ok so i am waiting for your next post… but i bet i’m right…. wedding bells will be ringing
What a London dream… I’m melting !
Right now, I’d love to jump in the next plane to enjoy the same journey on the paths of our marvellous two… …Well, are you sure you don’t work for the Tourist Information Center there, getting a bonus for each new reader trapped and pretty ready to fly to Albion’s royal city ? (*big wink & smile*)
Bette is incredibly cute being so insecure and sensitive and she has definitly a gift for writing irresistible romantic words… Reading them over Tina’s shoulder, I was truly melting at the same time : simply beautiful ! Especially this poetic last line, a jewel…
Thank you so much for giving us such a loving story, surrounded by London’s magic charm ! ^_^
that was great! thanks again for this story and post
Thanks for 2 posts they were both great really enjoying your story!!!
Love, love, love your story!!Especially all the great parts bout London.I was there recently and fell in love with the city. Having them kiss on top of St Paul’s…sigh..that painted a marvellous pic for me..
Damn that was amazing and beautiful, love it. Oh and the blow her mind, I think its good if you show how Bette blow Tina’s mind. Post soon please, thnsk!