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From Above…Ch.9
“Oh I saw a small print I liked and I was asking how much it wastoo much I found out” I lie.
Our dinner arrives and I get instant food envy when I look at Tina’s compared to mine
“What did you order again? That looks so good, you’ve done it again Kennard, I have massive food envy”
“It’s chicken breast with honey and mustard sauce on a bed of spinach and roasted root vegetablesmmm, and it’s good” she mumbles ***** she puts her first forkful in her mouth.
I look down at my mushroom risotto and wonder why I even considered it. The confusion doesn’t last long as I taste the first mouthful and realise how good it is.
“Mine’s better than yours” I tease.
“Whatever Porter, you’re not trying any of mine so quit with the reverse psych”
Well that shut you up Porter, she has you well and truly sussed now
We share gentle banter throughout the course of the evening, time slipping by so quickly because of how at ease we feel with each other. Before long, we find ourselves climbing out of the taxi and falling into our apartment, slightly inebriated again from the wine at dinner.
“Shall I run the bath *****?” Tina asks me suggestively and all I can do is nod stupidly.
She walks into the bathroom and I rush to light candles and attempt to sober up a little. After the second pint of water my head feels a little less fuzzy and I remember about the card.
*****, when is the best time to give it to herbefore the bath, during the bathno might go all curlyafter? Before *****? After *****? Oh god, when?!
I finish lighting the candles all around the apartment…only singeing my hair once or twice and lay the card on Tina’s pillow. I make my way into the bathroom, shedding my clothes as I go and find Tina sat on the edge of the bath, cloaked in steam and scent.
The bath is huge and we both slide in easily, the sensation of hot water on our skin neither pain but not quite pleasure.
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(42 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
This is getting better and better. I love this story SO much. Excellent
you can’t leave me hangin like that…….blow her mind–details please! lovin this story
fuck yeah that was mind blowing. but details help, ahahaha. this was great and please post soon. thanks.
Great, great, great! Thanks for the two posts! And if you get the urge to post again…give in! :)
This is wonderful.
Whoa! it’s really great Thanks for another posted I Love it Please continue post soon.
Zip-ity-doo-da!! I feel like I’ve got a bluebird on my shoulder! What the…! Where in the hell did THAT just come from! *blushing* I can’t help it, though, I just love your telling of this beautiful story–I like how sensitive and loving Bette is…it’s so romantic! Thank you lou!
This story is great. After reading this story, I assume that you are British. Please, while writing this story, I do hope that you will include many items about London. Would it be asking too much to have them go on a sightseeing trip to the Yorkshire area and Leeds? I’ve always wanted to visit England and have never had the opportunity. From reading Barbara Taylor Bradford’s books I’ve wanted to see Yorkshire, etc. If you could include this area of England I would be forever greatful. Thank you again. Your story is starting off beautifully and oh so loving.
Okay, how does Bette blow Tina’s mind??? We want details.
Excellent. they are so sweet. Love it
your wish is but my command ladies…next post i promise! x
Author’s Note – was going to be an NC-17 but i thought i’d leave it up to your imaginations ;)
Ohhhhhhh! Aren’t you the sly one Lou. R rating (I blow my angel’s mind.)…..
Yes, my mind went into overdrive……
I forgot to mention….when do we find out what the “little surprise” that Bette added to the basket is!? We know its not the card because that didnt come from Shh!!
LOVE THIS THANKS
bette is going to pop the question…. ok reading on
ok i just realized i am at the end… ok so i am waiting for your next post… but i bet i’m right…. wedding bells will be ringing
What a London dream… I’m melting !
Right now, I’d love to jump in the next plane to enjoy the same journey on the paths of our marvellous two… …Well, are you sure you don’t work for the Tourist Information Center there, getting a bonus for each new reader trapped and pretty ready to fly to Albion’s royal city ? (*big wink & smile*)
Bette is incredibly cute being so insecure and sensitive and she has definitly a gift for writing irresistible romantic words… Reading them over Tina’s shoulder, I was truly melting at the same time : simply beautiful ! Especially this poetic last line, a jewel…
Thank you so much for giving us such a loving story, surrounded by London’s magic charm ! ^_^
that was great! thanks again for this story and post
Thanks for 2 posts they were both great really enjoying your story!!!
Love, love, love your story!!Especially all the great parts bout London.I was there recently and fell in love with the city. Having them kiss on top of St Paul’s…sigh..that painted a marvellous pic for me..
Damn that was amazing and beautiful, love it. Oh and the blow her mind, I think its good if you show how Bette blow Tina’s mind. Post soon please, thnsk!