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“Wait a moment Jack” Tina says holding up her hand to
interrupt his barrage of words. “Bette
wasn’t with me when I went back and got the sperm for the insemination that
resulted in Anna.”
“Yeah Yeah but the two of you DID have discussions on the
qualities you wanted in a donor. You
identified one particular donor for a reason all those points Bette can talk
to. This donor you used Tina, you used
him because of these reasons, you knew he had qualities the two of you
wanted. I want to establish that point
for the record, that Bette’s opinion and her wishes were instrumental in the
child that resulted from the sperm you chose.
I want this in the record that we can later use in Bette’s adoption
hearing. Are you with me?” Jack asks
quickly.
Jack stopped talking, waiting for the two to catch up. After a moment of Bette starring at Jack with
her brow furrowed and her mouth slightly open, Tina is the first to talk. “Babe you can do it. Really you can do this. You’ll be great.” To reinforce her words Tina starts rubbing
her hand up and down Bette’s back to comfort and support her. Bette for her part had a million thoughts
running through her head. When she
seemed to process these thought and accept her new task she simply but decisively
nodded to Tina.
Jack caught the nod and since they were out of time “Great
now let’s get into court before they close the doors on us.” Pushing both of
them towards the courtroom door.
***
This was one of those days where
office, her article done ahead of schedule and just plop it on his desk. Life is so good.
“Here you are. It’s
done, complete and if I may say so myself exceptional. Read and weep cause you’re going to love this
one.”
says as she plops herself in the chair across from his desk and makes herself
comfortable by leaning back and putting her clasped hands behind her head.
she had completed the article before he had to scream for it wasn’t about to
let
his shock. “Well it better be as good as
you seem to think it is.” The only
retort he could think of. Dropping
everything else he was doing, he picked up
read.
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Haha Helena is going down and her big mama will pick her up and kick her back home. This is good for Bette and Tina and can’t wait to see what’s next, thanks!
The finish line is in sight, Jwet it has been an absolute pleasure to read your story, looking forward to reading the final chapters. Thank you.
I have thoroughly enjoyed and savored every chapter, especially towards the end. I post regularly just to let you know how consistently outstanding, satisfying and deliciously well planned this story has been. I look forward to reading whatever comes next and please take a well deserved bow.
As much as I dislike Helena, I’m glad you have Peggy caring enough to extract Helena from the mess. Of course, it could be to protect the Peabody Foundation, but at the same time, she is still her daughter and Peggy may consider it her fault that Helena is the way she is. Isn’t there a saying “do as I say, not as I do” but usually we mirror the doing and not doing the saying. Am I even making sense on this wonderful Saturday morning? Football coming up shortly. Horray! Thanks…can’t wait for Sunday….two post?!?
Wow the excitment is buildind so fast im reading it like it was an NC17..lol (i read those real fast lol)I loved that poor Peggy had to travel commuter class…welcome to our world Peg! well that was great and your wrapping it up so beautifully…so the moment of truth is coming with the photos and whos in em!!!lol love it… god help me i almost feel sorry for Helena i think id take my chances with the DA as opposed to Peggy…
Can’t wait to see what Peggy has to pull to get Helena out of the mess she’s created. A mother’s protective instinct is to of course to rescue the child. Will Peggy really extricate Helena from the DA’s vice or will Peggy serve Helena up to the DA in return for a lesser charge? Looking forward to tomorrow. Thanks, J.
Awesome twists and turns and I love the pace!
Love the way you’re folding up the story. Jwet, this has been so great, and with this story wrapping up, I do hope that you’re inspired soon to take us on another journey with Bette and Tina. For me personally, as long as there’s you, Skipton and Seahurst, tibetters the world over will thrive, despite what IC is rumoured to be doing to the characters.Thank you so much.
I love it, now for Bette’s testemony lol Great chapter, please post soon
Nah nah nah Helena yee ha. Now I have the fan fiction gun after shooting gracie from laurelite I am now aiming at your Helena. I know i say this all the time but fantastic chapter as always
gerrie7 says it so well…..I know it has to come to an end but it makes me sad. I do look forward to new story from you though….I am sure it will be just as amazing, my friend.
This is the coming of the storm.. GO PEGGY!!!! Awesome Jwet. I love this and have waited over 6 month for the hopes that Helen would get hers..
SHSL on the stand, would that be of a pedestal design? I thought so!! She’ll look soooo good – lets hope she says all she needs to say for her beloved to know how much she means to her! Oh and to whip the HELLamster’s fucking arse while she’s up there.
i’ve just read 2 chaps, as always with a great pleasure. of course I feel sad that tomorrow this story ends (btw, great timing with s3 start). on the other hand I can hardly wait for Bette’s testimony. I can be wrong but think that’s how T finally will hear about the delivery room.that’s the moment I’ve been waiting for a very long time.
Awesome!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
They say the best things in life are free. While I don’t have a beef with Peggy, I’m glad you had events move too quickly for her to use her wealth to pull strings and save Helena’s skanky ass from the fire.
This reads so realistically unlike other fanfic that can sometimes be cartoonish. The dialogue is spot on in tone and word for each character. It all speaks to your skill as a writer. gerrie7 is correct.
You’ve done such a great job weaving this story together. I do hope you decide to start on a new one once this wraps up…thanks for writing.
Exactly what I needed before heading to work today (I’ll probably be late now, but so worth it). I LOVE the heart you put into this story and wish it did not have to end!
the dragon is going down and i’m happy because in your story she’s is a toal snake…but i’m sad the story is almost over…i loved every bit of it
I will probably let slam dunked for saying this but, I almost feel sorry for Helena. She is such a tragic figure of a human being, one has to wonder just what kind of a mother Peggy was or is, that would affect her child is such a negative way. Whatever it was had to have been horrible to have a child want to bring you to your knees. Helena is much like a shoplifter, taking things she doesn’t need, or can’t afford, just to fulfill some deep emotional need.
It has been absolutely delicious to read. And, it has been so well thought out from the very first word, that it doesn’t surprise me at all that after posting over 150 chapters, you would time it to end on the premiere of Season 3. Take a bow, pat yourself on the back, because you totally deserve it! BTW, I actually feel sorry for Peggy…she always just wants to do right, by her community as well as by her daughter when she put her in charge of the foundation.
so you are saying all our worries are over Bette and Tina will triumph and there will be no more drama that causes trauma for these two?? OK I believe you because you have written such a dazzling story – what a journey. thanks.