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From Afar
As Bette was cutting up the broccoli and cauliflower, Bette kept looking over to Anna. The little girl was just smiling and singing, well we would call it screeching but to Bette it sounded angelic. While sauting the shrimp in garlic and butter, the sauce is almost complete. Adding the finishing touches, Bette sets the table for Tina. Anna is now way bored with being in the highchair so Bette pulls her out and begins to dance around singing a little tune in Annas ear as they sway easily around the kitchen.
Picking up the wooden spoon to stir dinner and check to see if it was done, Bette is telling Anna about her lack of skill in the kitchen when she hears something. Looking up Bette sees Tina standing in the doorway to the kitchen. Bette immediately registers the look of surprise on Tinas face which changes to something that Bette hadnt seen in a long time, a warm and awe look that made Bette hesitate a moment before she tries to explain. I hope you dont mind. I just thought that with your first day of work and all that you might be tired tonight. Bette now is walking toward Tina, handing her Anna. Heres you beautiful little girl. She and I had quite a grand time this afternoon. Bette says all this while turning Tina around and leading her back to the living room. Why dont you and Anna take a seat and relax for a moment or so before your dinner is ready? Can I get you anything to drink or anything? Bette now asks as Tina sits down on the couch with Anna on her knee.
Tina hadnt said a word up to now. With Bette looking at her all she could think of was Wow this is so perfect but instead she said Yeah Ill have some water, Thanks.
With that Bette went back into the kitchen and pulled a bottle of water from the refrigerator and poured it into a glass and carried it into the living room for Tina. Hey Tina do you want to get changed and freshened up a little dinner will be ready in about 10 minutes.
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(69 votes, average: 4.28 out of 5)
*smiles* *smiles* *smiles*
What a twist; Bette cooking and Tina coming home from work. The twlight zone it is!
I like the comfort you created for our heros!
Thanks….I’m so happy about possibly getting more chapters!
Off to work I go.
Perfect as always.
Thank you…
P.S. Robbeedee Scotland is not always cold and rainy. Where i was today was absolutely
gorgeous, hopefully some of that weather will come your way.
Loved this chapter. It would be nice for Bette to step back and allow Tina to take on the dominant role while she “takes care” of Tina. It would be a refreshing change for their relationship if they switch roles for a while on the show to gain better perspective on their relationship.
Great Job,I love this story.PLEASE POST SOON
LoL…I agree with slacker…no hot monkey love?! Haha, I’m just kidding. I’m having a kick arse day Jwet (I cut all my classes of course;P), hope your day is going well too. Beautiful chapter, totally loved it. Please update soon!!
Did I mention that I love the pace you have set this story on. Awesome as usual.
wow this ch. warmed my heart. thanks jwet!
Bette is pulling out that Porter charm of hers. That was very sweet for her to do that. Loving it!
Thanks for this lovely chapter. You have made my day!!
WWwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I’m so happy with this chapter. I just watched the latest episode and im all smiles!!! So Bette did cook!!! Thank you thank you!
I love this chapter. It makes my heart flip-flop. I think It’s my personal favorite.
Very nice and perfect chaper, love it.
Perfect is right – for now anyway!
i’m looking forward the next chapter!
I love the way you write
I hope they move on to being more than just friends – I do love this story
love your stories, jwet,thanx
Perfect? Perfect? No…it’s ending before the hot monkey love. That’s the perfect part. Wait…I guess I’m getting ahead of myself.
Very nicely done. Thanks.
Great job..Nice start to a true partnership.. Please continue..i love it
Keep it coming! You’re doing well not to dissapoint! So glad Helena is out of the picture. Although I’m British, I had no love for her!
I’m with Slacker on the hot monkey love but I suppose we could wait. More please!
Jwet, you made me so happy when I saw your comment on my story. I am striving to make my stories as perfect as yours. You are truly one gifted writer. I enjoyed this chapter so much. You write from your heart and that is what is missing in some stories. Keep up the great work and I cannot wait for the next chapter.:-)
I like the pace of this story…I’m glad that B is willing to go slow, besides, I don’t want this story to end;)! You’re writing is lovely…Thanks.
Oh…never mind, I get it. She was tired!!! See, I should never read these stories when I am still half asleep!! Sorry!
“a little mad that her body was letting her down, as the evening had been perfect.” Ok…what does that mean?? Still loving each and every one of your chapters. Thank you.
Does Bette consider Anna her daughter? She hasn’t said so in words. I’m wondering when she will just embrace that role totally.
Thanks
LOL @ Seahurst first.
Jwet,
No sure what other plaudits I can extol on you. A truly wonderful, heartfelt story that just leaves me in awe of your talent. My highlight of the day is seeing another chapter posted. I know that each one gives such sweet satisfaction to the reader. An uplifting saga.
Ready for your next chapter.
Agree with everyone that Tina and Bette need to reconnect soon as all the pieces are falling into place though I am sure you will have a few surprises for us all.
An admiring fan.
PS – Was visiting my folks in a cold and rainy Scotland so No on all counts.
Happier Times. Good Job.
great chapter as always