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takes another drag as she ponders Bette.
What could
say that would make her so skittish?
Didnt she realize that she can hurt her relationship with Tina more
than help it by running? I wonder if
Tina found her? Tomorrow Im going to
have to track Porter down and have a talk with her.
Taking another deep breath and holding it,
the last conversation between Grace and Jackie.
What did they mean by depending on how fast Tina came up to speed? It almost sounded as if Jackie was going
somewhere? I wonder where? Wow, I wonder if that means that Tina will
become the director. Oh my God, I wonder
if that is what they are talking about Tina being groomed for that job.
was putting these thoughts together. The
more she thought the more she smoked.
Soon her entire house was in a haze of smoke as
***
Bette was stunned by Tinas outburst. Bette had no intentions of ever hurting Tina
again. On the contrary Bette was trying
to let Tina be happy. Was Tina trying to
tell her that she wanted to be exclusive?
Bette turned to look at Tina as she was really mad now. Bette could see everything about Tina was
trembling from anger. Tina, are you
trying to tell me you want to be seeing only me? We have never talked in those terms and I
dont want to make the wrong assumptions here.
Are we there yet? Bette exclaims.
No, but that doesnt mean that Im seeing anyone else.
Tina spouts back.
I didnt know! I
didnt know if you are mine to fight for. Bette gets this out quickly as she
is trying to defuse some of Tinas anger before it turned to pain.
Tina took less than 15 seconds to respond YES if thats
what you need to hear then I am telling you right now I dont want to be seeing
anyone but you and you alone. Dont you
feel the same way?
This isnt how Bette wanted to be having the conversation
with Tina. Not this way shouting back
and forth. Trying to tone if down Bette
takes a moment and begins in a calmer voice.
You know Tina there is so much we havent said. There are things between us that are
there. Why havent you brought up my infidelity
with Candace? Why havent we talked
about that? I thought that as long as it
was there that you wanted your autonomy. Bette says quickly as a way of
explaining her behavior.
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Jwet,
Glad to see that Tina is now a cheerleader for the best of the old Bette to come back.
We all know that Bette 1.0 would have kicked Helena’s ass right out of that reception, down the street and back to good ole Blighty.
Loved the way you have gotten the gals to stop walking and start talking. Communication is the key here. Yes, Bette must reveal all her secrets, especially the MYV Foundation. The tension here is tangible. As is Bette’s apprehension at telling Tina the truth. The truth will set them both free. I think that Tina will blow up at first and then realise the gift that Bette has given her.
The way you have written these scenes is effortless for the reader to follow. Your talent grabs then holds us for the duration of this tale. Fantastic and fabulous as always.
I know that you have many stories to share so thank you for trusting us all with them.
Points of emphasis today are:
Is Motif Yen Valor an anagram? Does Alice have a deerstalker and a pipe? Can Dana and Shane be the Hardy boys? Will the fire service be called with all that smoke in Alice’s apartment? Has she opened the fridge to see the ‘Eat Me’ or ‘Drink Me’ signs? Why no munchies or food raids? How did Tina get a JCB into Bette’s apartment? Haven’t the neighbors complained to the police yet? When will Helena’s ass be grass and Bette the lawn mower?
Why do you always stub a sore toe?
I am sure that some of the answers will be forthcoming in the following chapters.
Keeping it real,
Your loyal fan
Good, very good. Now let Bette tell her about the foundation…that same night. NO more delays please!!!
WOW..that was fucking amazing.. and now Bette has to do what she knows she need to do no more lies and Tina wants to see old and new Bette in one person determinate and strong one i know the next chapter probabily will be tough but with all the love they share they will get trought and be happy again all 3 of them and what do you mean about the story is almost over????? dont you dare stop write cuzz i will have a stroke and it will be all your fault…lol..amazing as always and i´m really nervous about tomorrow chapter ;-$
Hello, Jwet: I enjoyed this addition to this fabulous story:) I’ll just wait and let you bring the story to me, I’ll not speculate on how you’re going to go with your story. I’m just taking each chapter as they come and enjoying each immensely. Excellent Job.
Completely Awesome and Excellent chapter J. WTG. I hear a song in my head. “Burning down the house”. LOL Go alice
Time for Bette to come clean. Tina needs to hear it from Bette and no one else about the MYV Foundation. If Alice tells Tina, then the very underpinnings of her trust will be shattered. I like that Tina made Bette see that she has to want to fight. This story reminds me of the Beatles song The Long and Winding Road. I am hoping that Bette put in a few failsafes so that Alice will never really find anything out, or if she does it leaves her with egg on her face. Yes, Alice still annoys me. This is a great story and I like how you have brought them, their issues and insecurites to light with such realism.
Great chapter. Cant wait until you post again… Please let it be soon
$100 mill Whoa! Melvin was loaded. The time has come for Bette to come clean.
Oh Jwet I have my fingers cross but I know you will end this roller coaster ride with a thrill but please let Bette come clean. This is the best tyme. Please, please, please.
i’m fighting with this site to let my comment… great great great… sorry for the delay
Ahh working while stoned… Alice is gonna find out then totally forget lol. I dont want this story to end anytime soon!
Wow excellent chapter…. Please let them figure this out before Alice finds out and screws things up…Post soon.
Excellent chapter.Have Bette tell Tina everything before Alice does.Bette needs to fight for Tina.
Oh, you gotta love it. I totally do. Bette needs to lay all of her cards on the table while they are being open and honest, before Al goes and puts her two sense in. More!
Bette…clock’s ticking, or smoking up her apartment, or something.
K
Excellent and wonderful as always. I hope Bette is really honest with Tina before you know who screws things up. Love this.
Bette i think it’s time to lay all your cards on the table for Tina to see! she loves you and will understand that you did it for her. Let the cat out of the bag and tell her about your foundation!
Hey Jwet, 100 Million US$ how/where did Bette get this money to set up the MYV Foundation? Will Alice figure out the puzzle before she runs out of weed.
Bette and Tina finally talking… will Bette tell Tina everything and i mean the whole truth and nothing but the truth? This sound like the Spanish Inquisition…a most exellent chapter J.
Thank you.
Finally some questions are answered. We are making progress. Lay it all out on the table. Loving it!!
thank you! for my daily dose of this story. I think everything’ll be fine if Bette tells T about foundation now. I’d like to see Alice running to T with her revelations and T saying: I know that Alice, Bette told me.
I know this is just a story but my heart actually hurt for Bette. She is just struggling NOT to lose Tina and in turn, Anna.
Make her brave and have her tell Tina about the Foundation. Tina loves her so much; there’s so much love between them.
And my heart appreciates the laughter that is Alice!
btw: Is money easy to get in fanfic world? Seems like these girls just get tons of easy money!
FABULOUS CHAPTER..BETTE NEEDS TO TELL HER BEFORE BIG MOUTH ALICE FIGURES IT OUT..THANKS PLEASE POST SOON
Oh Jwet…this stroy is fabulous. What am I going to do when I can’t sit down in the morning with my cup of tea, and read a new chapter by you?
great chapter Jwet – now just make sure that Bette tells Tina about the Foundation before Alice does……….even if it’s only 5 seconds before ok???? lol
J this was a fucking awesome chapter!!! I loved when alice calls upon the powers of weed, sorry I am a weed smoker and love when people have any of the clan smoking in there stories. OH god damm it Bette open your mouth and tell tina!! J I have been patiently waiting and I think it’s about fucking time! ok other then that it was a great chapter.
really great chapt. i know drama is the spice of life here on fanfic. but sometimes can we see just a little peace. please let bette tell tina about the foundation before al finds out. these open lines of communication are so right. have hellno keep butting in or the cac or whatever but let her tell tina. please post soon.
Yeah fight for them Bette!
Jwet, I’ve been working really hard at catching up on your story before I comment and even though I’m only on Chapter 70 (wow, 70!!), I couldn’t resist after the last few chapters. I feel for both B&T. This story has really been an emotional rollercoaster. I just want to say thanks and I’m off to the next chapter.
Glad to see that I’m not the only “late” one, ut.