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Dont say that Bette, dont quit before we have even
tried. I have noticed your open
honesty. Why do you think I am still
here? At first I just felt a drive to
have you in Annas life but somewhere that changed to a drive to have you in my
life. I feel I can see your heart now,
that there are windows were walls were before.
You let me in. I feel that. Tina
says as she doesnt want Bette to give up.
Bette looks up as Tinas eager recognition of all that Bette
was trying to do. Bette just nods her
head as her tears are now clouding her vision of Tina and she once again needs
some time to catch her bearings. Tina
still doesnt know the biggest secret of all as Bette is struggling on whether
to bring it up or not.
Tina sees that Bette needs a moment and in the silence she
puts forth the question she has been wanting to ask since that night Bette
what happened, was it me was I not. I mean what didnt I have that you
needed? Tina asks in a quiet little voice as it is her heart that she is
exposing with that question.
Hearing this question and the way that Tina asked it, not wrapped
in anger and accusations, stabbed Bette in the heart making her cry out in
pain. Oh God NO Tina it wasnt you it
was me. Never think that you are missing
anything. How could you even know what I
needed I had kept so much from you that their was no way for you to even begin
to know what was going on with me. Bette just blurts out as she needed to
change Tinas perception as quickly as she could.
But Bette, I pushed you away. I was mad at you for not putting me and the
child we were trying to have first and then when we lost him I lost a little of
me . I just couldnt share with you. It
was like if I gave you anymore I wouldnt have anything of me left. It wasnt right but I couldnt change it
either. I dont know does that make any
sense? Tina confesses to Bette feeling that she now wanted to share everything
with Bette.
Bette was nodding her head as Tina talked now wanting to get
all her thoughts out as fast as she could Oh you dont know how much. I know that we were distant but I think that
a lot of that was because I was not being completely honest with you. I dont think I ever was. I dont mean that I deliberately set out to
lie to you thats not it. No I just
didnt always tell you what I was thinking or let you see the real me. As Bette was trying to go on she felt her
words failing her as she could get across the way it was.
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Jwet,
Glad to see that Tina is now a cheerleader for the best of the old Bette to come back.
We all know that Bette 1.0 would have kicked Helena’s ass right out of that reception, down the street and back to good ole Blighty.
Loved the way you have gotten the gals to stop walking and start talking. Communication is the key here. Yes, Bette must reveal all her secrets, especially the MYV Foundation. The tension here is tangible. As is Bette’s apprehension at telling Tina the truth. The truth will set them both free. I think that Tina will blow up at first and then realise the gift that Bette has given her.
The way you have written these scenes is effortless for the reader to follow. Your talent grabs then holds us for the duration of this tale. Fantastic and fabulous as always.
I know that you have many stories to share so thank you for trusting us all with them.
Points of emphasis today are:
Is Motif Yen Valor an anagram? Does Alice have a deerstalker and a pipe? Can Dana and Shane be the Hardy boys? Will the fire service be called with all that smoke in Alice’s apartment? Has she opened the fridge to see the ‘Eat Me’ or ‘Drink Me’ signs? Why no munchies or food raids? How did Tina get a JCB into Bette’s apartment? Haven’t the neighbors complained to the police yet? When will Helena’s ass be grass and Bette the lawn mower?
Why do you always stub a sore toe?
I am sure that some of the answers will be forthcoming in the following chapters.
Keeping it real,
Your loyal fan
Good, very good. Now let Bette tell her about the foundation…that same night. NO more delays please!!!
WOW..that was fucking amazing.. and now Bette has to do what she knows she need to do no more lies and Tina wants to see old and new Bette in one person determinate and strong one i know the next chapter probabily will be tough but with all the love they share they will get trought and be happy again all 3 of them and what do you mean about the story is almost over????? dont you dare stop write cuzz i will have a stroke and it will be all your fault…lol..amazing as always and i´m really nervous about tomorrow chapter ;-$
Hello, Jwet: I enjoyed this addition to this fabulous story:) I’ll just wait and let you bring the story to me, I’ll not speculate on how you’re going to go with your story. I’m just taking each chapter as they come and enjoying each immensely. Excellent Job.
Completely Awesome and Excellent chapter J. WTG. I hear a song in my head. “Burning down the house”. LOL Go alice
Time for Bette to come clean. Tina needs to hear it from Bette and no one else about the MYV Foundation. If Alice tells Tina, then the very underpinnings of her trust will be shattered. I like that Tina made Bette see that she has to want to fight. This story reminds me of the Beatles song The Long and Winding Road. I am hoping that Bette put in a few failsafes so that Alice will never really find anything out, or if she does it leaves her with egg on her face. Yes, Alice still annoys me. This is a great story and I like how you have brought them, their issues and insecurites to light with such realism.
Great chapter. Cant wait until you post again… Please let it be soon
$100 mill Whoa! Melvin was loaded. The time has come for Bette to come clean.
Oh Jwet I have my fingers cross but I know you will end this roller coaster ride with a thrill but please let Bette come clean. This is the best tyme. Please, please, please.
i’m fighting with this site to let my comment… great great great… sorry for the delay
Ahh working while stoned… Alice is gonna find out then totally forget lol. I dont want this story to end anytime soon!
Wow excellent chapter…. Please let them figure this out before Alice finds out and screws things up…Post soon.
Excellent chapter.Have Bette tell Tina everything before Alice does.Bette needs to fight for Tina.
Oh, you gotta love it. I totally do. Bette needs to lay all of her cards on the table while they are being open and honest, before Al goes and puts her two sense in. More!
Bette…clock’s ticking, or smoking up her apartment, or something.
K
Excellent and wonderful as always. I hope Bette is really honest with Tina before you know who screws things up. Love this.
Bette i think it’s time to lay all your cards on the table for Tina to see! she loves you and will understand that you did it for her. Let the cat out of the bag and tell her about your foundation!
Hey Jwet, 100 Million US$ how/where did Bette get this money to set up the MYV Foundation? Will Alice figure out the puzzle before she runs out of weed.
Bette and Tina finally talking… will Bette tell Tina everything and i mean the whole truth and nothing but the truth? This sound like the Spanish Inquisition…a most exellent chapter J.
Thank you.
Finally some questions are answered. We are making progress. Lay it all out on the table. Loving it!!
thank you! for my daily dose of this story. I think everything’ll be fine if Bette tells T about foundation now. I’d like to see Alice running to T with her revelations and T saying: I know that Alice, Bette told me.
I know this is just a story but my heart actually hurt for Bette. She is just struggling NOT to lose Tina and in turn, Anna.
Make her brave and have her tell Tina about the Foundation. Tina loves her so much; there’s so much love between them.
And my heart appreciates the laughter that is Alice!
btw: Is money easy to get in fanfic world? Seems like these girls just get tons of easy money!
FABULOUS CHAPTER..BETTE NEEDS TO TELL HER BEFORE BIG MOUTH ALICE FIGURES IT OUT..THANKS PLEASE POST SOON
Oh Jwet…this stroy is fabulous. What am I going to do when I can’t sit down in the morning with my cup of tea, and read a new chapter by you?
great chapter Jwet – now just make sure that Bette tells Tina about the Foundation before Alice does……….even if it’s only 5 seconds before ok???? lol
J this was a fucking awesome chapter!!! I loved when alice calls upon the powers of weed, sorry I am a weed smoker and love when people have any of the clan smoking in there stories. OH god damm it Bette open your mouth and tell tina!! J I have been patiently waiting and I think it’s about fucking time! ok other then that it was a great chapter.
really great chapt. i know drama is the spice of life here on fanfic. but sometimes can we see just a little peace. please let bette tell tina about the foundation before al finds out. these open lines of communication are so right. have hellno keep butting in or the cac or whatever but let her tell tina. please post soon.
Yeah fight for them Bette!
Jwet, I’ve been working really hard at catching up on your story before I comment and even though I’m only on Chapter 70 (wow, 70!!), I couldn’t resist after the last few chapters. I feel for both B&T. This story has really been an emotional rollercoaster. I just want to say thanks and I’m off to the next chapter.
Glad to see that I’m not the only “late” one, ut.