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Finally, this was more the Bette that Tina had come to know
in the most recent months. The open and
forthright Bette, Tina in all her anger almost stormed out but she had finally
knocked Bettes mask off. Putting her hand
up to her forehead to calm herself down, Tina closed her eyes and took a couple
deep breaths. Pulling her hand away and
looking at Bette, Tina once again could see Bettes soul in her eyes. Right now that soul looked to be in an awful
lot of pain.
Trying to match Bettes calm tone Bette do you want to talk
about our past right now, if so I am so ready.
I hadnt brought it up as I thought that you would when you were ready.
Tina says as way of explaining the lack of conversation until now. I feel that I have been doing all the
pushing up until now and I was afraid to push too hard.
Bette could have cried as she heard Tinas explanation. All the time wasted. As Bette was trying to think what to say next
she reached down for the couch and backed her way into it. Tina why dont you sit down? Bette finally
says in a half whisper as this was all she could get out as so many thoughts
were crowding her mind. She needed time
to sort them out, Bette had never dreamed that this would be where their
conversation would take them. As Bette
asked Tina to sit she patted the couch next to her inviting Tina.
Tina could see that while Bette had directed the
conversation to this point she really wasnt prepared for what comes next. Sitting down slowly, Tina too was searching
for a way to begin this conversation.
Bette found her voice first.
Tina I have been trying to earn your trust. Bette says simply, looking
at Tina to see if she understands. Tina
nodded as way of telling Bette to go on.
Looking Tina straight in the eye.
I cant imagine what it would take to do that other than for me to
prove to you every day that I am what you see.
I have tried to be as open and honest with you in all our dealings since
we have begun talking again. Here Bette
pauses, swallowing hard as if what she is going to say next is bitter. But at the end of the day I dont know if
that is enough. As much as I have told
you there is still so much you dont know.
I dont know how I will ever be good enough for your trust.
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Jwet,
Glad to see that Tina is now a cheerleader for the best of the old Bette to come back.
We all know that Bette 1.0 would have kicked Helena’s ass right out of that reception, down the street and back to good ole Blighty.
Loved the way you have gotten the gals to stop walking and start talking. Communication is the key here. Yes, Bette must reveal all her secrets, especially the MYV Foundation. The tension here is tangible. As is Bette’s apprehension at telling Tina the truth. The truth will set them both free. I think that Tina will blow up at first and then realise the gift that Bette has given her.
The way you have written these scenes is effortless for the reader to follow. Your talent grabs then holds us for the duration of this tale. Fantastic and fabulous as always.
I know that you have many stories to share so thank you for trusting us all with them.
Points of emphasis today are:
Is Motif Yen Valor an anagram? Does Alice have a deerstalker and a pipe? Can Dana and Shane be the Hardy boys? Will the fire service be called with all that smoke in Alice’s apartment? Has she opened the fridge to see the ‘Eat Me’ or ‘Drink Me’ signs? Why no munchies or food raids? How did Tina get a JCB into Bette’s apartment? Haven’t the neighbors complained to the police yet? When will Helena’s ass be grass and Bette the lawn mower?
Why do you always stub a sore toe?
I am sure that some of the answers will be forthcoming in the following chapters.
Keeping it real,
Your loyal fan
Good, very good. Now let Bette tell her about the foundation…that same night. NO more delays please!!!
WOW..that was fucking amazing.. and now Bette has to do what she knows she need to do no more lies and Tina wants to see old and new Bette in one person determinate and strong one i know the next chapter probabily will be tough but with all the love they share they will get trought and be happy again all 3 of them and what do you mean about the story is almost over????? dont you dare stop write cuzz i will have a stroke and it will be all your fault…lol..amazing as always and i´m really nervous about tomorrow chapter ;-$
Hello, Jwet: I enjoyed this addition to this fabulous story:) I’ll just wait and let you bring the story to me, I’ll not speculate on how you’re going to go with your story. I’m just taking each chapter as they come and enjoying each immensely. Excellent Job.
Completely Awesome and Excellent chapter J. WTG. I hear a song in my head. “Burning down the house”. LOL Go alice
Time for Bette to come clean. Tina needs to hear it from Bette and no one else about the MYV Foundation. If Alice tells Tina, then the very underpinnings of her trust will be shattered. I like that Tina made Bette see that she has to want to fight. This story reminds me of the Beatles song The Long and Winding Road. I am hoping that Bette put in a few failsafes so that Alice will never really find anything out, or if she does it leaves her with egg on her face. Yes, Alice still annoys me. This is a great story and I like how you have brought them, their issues and insecurites to light with such realism.
Great chapter. Cant wait until you post again… Please let it be soon
$100 mill Whoa! Melvin was loaded. The time has come for Bette to come clean.
Oh Jwet I have my fingers cross but I know you will end this roller coaster ride with a thrill but please let Bette come clean. This is the best tyme. Please, please, please.
i’m fighting with this site to let my comment… great great great… sorry for the delay
Ahh working while stoned… Alice is gonna find out then totally forget lol. I dont want this story to end anytime soon!
Wow excellent chapter…. Please let them figure this out before Alice finds out and screws things up…Post soon.
Excellent chapter.Have Bette tell Tina everything before Alice does.Bette needs to fight for Tina.
Oh, you gotta love it. I totally do. Bette needs to lay all of her cards on the table while they are being open and honest, before Al goes and puts her two sense in. More!
Bette…clock’s ticking, or smoking up her apartment, or something.
K
Excellent and wonderful as always. I hope Bette is really honest with Tina before you know who screws things up. Love this.
Bette i think it’s time to lay all your cards on the table for Tina to see! she loves you and will understand that you did it for her. Let the cat out of the bag and tell her about your foundation!
Hey Jwet, 100 Million US$ how/where did Bette get this money to set up the MYV Foundation? Will Alice figure out the puzzle before she runs out of weed.
Bette and Tina finally talking… will Bette tell Tina everything and i mean the whole truth and nothing but the truth? This sound like the Spanish Inquisition…a most exellent chapter J.
Thank you.
Finally some questions are answered. We are making progress. Lay it all out on the table. Loving it!!
thank you! for my daily dose of this story. I think everything’ll be fine if Bette tells T about foundation now. I’d like to see Alice running to T with her revelations and T saying: I know that Alice, Bette told me.
I know this is just a story but my heart actually hurt for Bette. She is just struggling NOT to lose Tina and in turn, Anna.
Make her brave and have her tell Tina about the Foundation. Tina loves her so much; there’s so much love between them.
And my heart appreciates the laughter that is Alice!
btw: Is money easy to get in fanfic world? Seems like these girls just get tons of easy money!
FABULOUS CHAPTER..BETTE NEEDS TO TELL HER BEFORE BIG MOUTH ALICE FIGURES IT OUT..THANKS PLEASE POST SOON
Oh Jwet…this stroy is fabulous. What am I going to do when I can’t sit down in the morning with my cup of tea, and read a new chapter by you?
great chapter Jwet – now just make sure that Bette tells Tina about the Foundation before Alice does……….even if it’s only 5 seconds before ok???? lol
J this was a fucking awesome chapter!!! I loved when alice calls upon the powers of weed, sorry I am a weed smoker and love when people have any of the clan smoking in there stories. OH god damm it Bette open your mouth and tell tina!! J I have been patiently waiting and I think it’s about fucking time! ok other then that it was a great chapter.
really great chapt. i know drama is the spice of life here on fanfic. but sometimes can we see just a little peace. please let bette tell tina about the foundation before al finds out. these open lines of communication are so right. have hellno keep butting in or the cac or whatever but let her tell tina. please post soon.
Yeah fight for them Bette!
Jwet, I’ve been working really hard at catching up on your story before I comment and even though I’m only on Chapter 70 (wow, 70!!), I couldn’t resist after the last few chapters. I feel for both B&T. This story has really been an emotional rollercoaster. I just want to say thanks and I’m off to the next chapter.
Glad to see that I’m not the only “late” one, ut.