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Turning they both started moving towards the house. “Well you know it’s just so sad that I
couldn’t help with all those boxes.” Kit jokes in a dead pan serious voice.
“Yeah especially since you’ve been so pushy about it.” Bette
laughs as she loves ribbing Kit.
“Hey” Kit says coming to a stop “Are you happy to be home?”
“Oh yeah” Bette says without hesitation.
“Then all this pushing was worth it. I guess in all fairness I should tell you
that Tina called to let me know that you guys were almost done and it was safe
to come over.” Kit now says trying desperately to maintain her straight face.
“You ” Bette says with a deep laugh.
“This Chili better be your absolute best.” Is Bette’s lame
comeback.
As Bette and Kit come in together, Tina spots them “Hey Kit,
Great you’re here. Great everyone’s
outside I was just getting Anna’s formula.
Kit if that’s your Chili take it out and I’ll join you guys in a
moment.” Tina says.
As Bette sets her stuff down “Do you need any help?”
“Nope go on out.
Everything’s out there already.” Tina says as she heads into Anna’s
room.
Out on the pool deck, Alice and Irene had set up all the
dishes and silverware out along with all the finger food in a buffet
style. This way all the girls could help
themselves. As Kit brought the chili out
and set it down, Tina already had all the fixings.
“Wow I see Tina has put her touches out.” Kit says as she
sets down her pot. “OK guys LET”S EAT.”
With that everyone but Tina gathered around and dished up
food and sit down to do other dishing.
It was fun and easy as these friends fall into old habits and easy
harassment.
As Tina comes out with Anna the whole gang was
complete. Once Tina sat down with her
own food, Dana elbowed
“Oh Yeah”
says and gets up and runs into the house coming out moments later with a manila
folder with a rubber band around it. As
hovering as she shifts from foot to foot in front of Bette. “Bette Tina Dana and I We want you to have this.” With that she
hands the file to Bette. “It’s just some
research I came across. Well we thought
you would know what to do with it between the two of you.”
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It seems that Bette did walk the fine line of stalker and loving regretful wife. I’m glad you are showing it (and Tina is seeing it) as the loving side. GREAT story!!
Sometimes I don’t know if I want to hit or hug Alice. But it’s painfully obvious that she has no boundaries. Also, she’s so caught up in how BnT relate to each other, she’s missing out on what she could have with Dana if she’d invest half of her ‘nosy’ energy into their relationship.
Am i the only one that wants Alice to open her big mouth and see where it gets her!lol ok i just love the drama! And as for Bette and all those photos just as well Tina sees that what Bette did was out of love and not stalking her lol joke!ok… love it as always
Alice really needs to learn to shut her big mouth!!! Thanks for another great chapter.
Hey Jwet, Dana question to Bette how to clean her laptop and Bette’s response…PRICELESS oh my lol…just like this story which is PRICELESS…i love how you have all the characters down to a T…it’s just like sitting at the edge looking in….absolutely love it.
Thanks for all the effort that goes into creating your story, i’m sure it must be taxing at times on the brain..
Thank you.
Damn Jwet GREAT CHAPTER….When will Alice get what is coming to her?Alice is just so out of control…please post soon…THANKS..
K
Wonderful chapter. So glad Tina didn’t get mad. Can’t wait for more.
Barrie nailed my sentiments. You write Alice so well. She is either side splitting funny or just under your skin annoying.
‘huh?’ was all i could say when I noticed it was te end of the chapter!!!
Jwet a tease!!!
and sorry for all the time you have with Helena but think that you learn somethings…. hehehehehehe
Great update Jwet.The other secret is close to coming out.Can’t wait.
This chapter was like a cool breeze welcomed on a warm summer day. Refreshing.
I now know why Alice is so thin…how can she eat when her foot spends so much time in her mouth? That girl is her own worst enemy. The visual of Alice sitting in the middle of all of those pictures…I’m guessing even Anna would know better than that.
Interested to see if the box in the garage is really an anvil or was that just a distraction so we wouldn’t figure out that Alice would get into the box in the house?
Happy to see that Alice redeemed herself by giving over the information on Hurricane Helena to Bette and Tina. Now, if Alice can only be solicited to assist without getting them all arrested.
great chapter..as always..keep ’em coming..: )
It’s good to have them together again the whole gang. And I’m still looking forward to Tina telling Alice “I know everything”
At first I was annoyed by Alice but then I decided that I am going to trust Tina to stick with her initial reaction and not let anything Alice or anyone else says .. with the exception of Bette .. change her mind. Another great chapter as expected. :-)
always wanted to be 1st for you. be right back.
thanks j. is this an anvil coming our way. please, no. love the family scenes. sure did miss those last year. cant wait to see what is done to hellno. yours was the 1st story i started reading in ff, it makes me giddy as a school boy to see that youve posted. thanks for all your time and effort. its appreciated. but you can post asap for me. be good.
Hell Fire, I wanted to be first too!! Another Great Chapter Jwet, Alice is so going to get it coming to her, she just doesn’t let up!!! I’m not sure she knows when she’s stepped over the mark!
Hello Jwet…Things are getting rather busy. I’m just one of many who are willing and waiting…..Excellent Job..I’ll be watching for the next one.
Did I ever tell you how much I love this family scene. It’s just so nice how the family laughing together (even at Alice’s expense) again; makes my heart warm.
Also, I like your vision of Alice and Dana more than the series.
Oh yeah, I think I commented many times about Tina not having a camera for those “kodak” moments. Thanks for having Bette capturing “kodak” moments! Will Tina and Bette share these pictures with the framily?
I hope you’ve recovered from the sickness that is Helena….
Absolutely love the story!! Can’t wait for more!!
great chapter! can’t wait for more. can we have onother before the weekend?
“Curiosity kills the cat,” so Alice better be carefully. All her snooping may one day lead to a revelation she will most definitely not be prepared for.
Hey Jwet thanks for the great read. I had to play catch up today but it’s always a pleasure knowing I have more than one of your chapters to read.
amazing as always J.i was wondering when Alice will open her big mouth and tell Tina about the meaning of the foundation..great chapter J post soon
I guess Alice just dosen’t get it..How much Bette did and what the reasons were. She is just looking for the negative.. I think it time for Bette and Tina to sit the gang down and explain it all. before it gets out of control or should I say Alice gets out of control..Love your writing post soon PLEASE!!!
Shut UP !!!!!!!!!!!!ALICE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome, J, I continue to appreciate every nuane you weave into your story. The reader can tell how much work goes into it – let me assure you it is very much appreciated. I look forward to every update of this wonderful story.
Hey Jwet Whoa! that was so Beautiful Awesome as Always Amazed ME Wonderful writing Jwet I LOVE IT Thanks Please continue.
Great chapter, Jwet! Your writing really allows the reader to really feel the deep connection between Bette and Tina, as well as the rest of the family. Your stories really make the wait for season three much more bearable for this hopeless ol’ romantic!
Good chapter. Alice is crazy!