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Frozen Beginnings – chapter Nine
Tonight she was going to enjoy herself.
She had spent some time shopping for her night out to her father’s greatest delight who had started to worry about the fact that his daughter had turned into a workaholic.
“I never thought I’d see the day when I would have to urge you to go out and have fun with your friends, darling! I believe you are going to meet a couple of young men?” John Kennard had remarked as he caught up with his daughter on the way out.
“Three boys for three girls! Who knows, daddy? Maybe the man of my dreams is amongst them.”
Tina forced herself to smile as she replied to her father. The man of her life was more likely the woman of her life and right now, she was on the other side of the world, no doubt having the time of her life.
“Or..” Her father continued not sure he could quite believe his daughter shaky reply. “Maybe not!”
Tina looked at him before kissing his cheek goodbye.
“Fear not daddy, no more Erics for me!”
That last remark earned Tina a smile from her father who before she stepped out of their lavish home, made one last gentlemanly remark on how elegant she looked.
The young woman had already indulged in the guilty pleasure of admiring her reflection in the mirror earlier on when she had got herself ready for the evening. The little black dress was short but not on the side of indecent, it was subtly accented by a pair of Louboutin stiletto heel, the tell-tale flash of red in the sole always sure to make a sexy and beautiful statement. She had kept her jewellery to a minimum, preferring a silver bracelet and a fine necklace adorned with a pale aquamarine tear drop stone which rested delicately in the hollow of her neck. Finally a delicate wrap, was draped over her lower back and hung loosely over her forearms.
When she got to the theatre she was delighted when she was introduced to her ‘date’.
Henry was nothing at all like Eric. He was tall with brown hair, softly spoken with a genuine smile and was by his own admission a self-confessed IT geek. He also seemed rather enchanted by his first meeting with Tina.
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Now that was a interesting chapter…first when i saw Henry name i screamed nooooooo but he actually turned out ok in this one…then came Helena with Bette and i screamed again nooo…sigh got me for a minute there…anyways wow Tina a little harsh but totally understandable, Bette should try in be a little more sincere and less cocky…sigh these two…yes another chapter so soon, gotta love this month
LOL … Yes!! Agree on that “nooooooo…!” Also! ????
Thanks for posting, you made my day :) Interesting turn of events, Tina starts to voice what she wants. Good for her! And good for Bette that Tina shows at least a little self-confidence and puts a stop to Bette overpowering her like a foal that needs to follow her rules. Bette should start to treat Tina as an adult, maybe she’ll find that Tina will drop the teenage behaviour she sometimes shows. She could try asking her for a date if she’s seriously interested in Tina.
Anyway I can’t wait to see what you have in mind for the next parts. And, hey, get well soon :)
Well, that went by a little too quickly. (By the way, I keep meaning to say, welcome back!)
Sorry you’re on crutches but pleased to have a post :) Not long enough, of course :)
Hope you’re OK look forward to the next post :)
Hello! Sorry to hear that you are down for a bit but its good also cause we got an update. Thanks by the way! This was interesting! Grow up Tina! PPS
PPS
Reading kins makes me feel like I’m on fanfic diet…I never get enough of this story! Your writing is simply exquisite! Pls pls pls post soon, takes too long between each time (you have a life?! How dare you;)
Bette needs to realize what she has done to Tina, truly apologize and start respecting her as an equal. She is very cocky and needs to get more in touch with her feelings towards T not just her sexual attraction which evidently is there and at some point must be acted on. Hopefully they will embark on a true relationship at the end.
Good luck with your crutches. Isn’t funny.
Jeez, those two are stubborn people. Marriage, I see that for the future but Bette that is not the way to catch Tina.
Great update.
beautiful, loved it.
i think they need to spend more toime together without sex, juust be with each other. i can understand tina wish to wait
yo bette u can take me instead hahaha
i totally felt tina jealousy, arrrr
Their lips met…it was a blur of soft sighs and simmering moans,soft gentle swirls of tongue.It was slow it was measured,it was methodical and calm.
What lovely words to describe a kiss..Can’t wait for, I hope them to completely give themselves to one another and your description of it.
A great chapter my dear friend.Looking forward to the next one..PPS..xx
So sorry you are on crutches…. not fun. Thanks for the update, enjoyed it.
Great chapter. Hope you are feeling better very soon and off those devilish crutches. Hope these girls can get their act together, leave all the bickering behind and settle into a relationship that is equal for all and no more surprises. Thanks for posting.
Geez Kins! Please take care! ???? not feel that lucky to hear that you are in crutches! Though frankly I was so excited to see your update! ????
Hope you will get well soon AND still grant us the continuation of this story and share more of your masterpiece ???? cheers!! ????
I loved this chapter.
Bette has to learn to give
affection and respect for Tina.
All Stars.
After that kiss? That’s all she gonna say? Grated Bette is a little forward..But, something happened to the both of
them. Tina can’t deny that, she can feel that from Bette’s kisses. And the fact remain that Bette is up front of what she feels towards her. Doesn’t that count that she’s not playing with her?
What noooooo only 1 page oh nooooooo. This is so good, please let them talk and work thing out, sad to see them like this. Please post more thanks
it’s more n more interesting,can’t stop reading it
OMG! Kins, please don’t keep them apart for long. You know what it does to my little heart.
Love it, btw!!! Awesome as usual…