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Gods Gift- Pt 8
***Tina***
Melissas parents called. Over the years we grew close. Melissa and Angelica met the first day of preschool and were inseparable ever since. I guess through our children, we gained new friends in Melissas parents. I got really bad news, and now I dont know how I will tell Angelica about Melissa. Bette was by my side in a matter of moments. I was already crying and I couldnt control myself. From the look on Angelicas face I know I was scaring her.
Babe? What is it? Whats wrong? What did John say to you?
Ummm. I looked for Angelica. Wheres Annie?
T, talk to me.
Melissa, she uh Melanie Saying this was really hard. I see that Bette is getting impatient so I try this again. A guy broke a red light and crashed into Melanie.
What?
Mom? I took my baby in my arms. I held her as I cried. I know she has no idea why, well exactly why and I am not sure how I am going to tell her. I took her to the living room. Bette close behind. Although I didnt tell her I know she figured it out. It was written all over her face and in her eyes as the tears began to fall. Mom, why are you crying? I heard you say Melissa? Did something happen to Melissa?
Sweetie. Melissa was in an accident. I feel Angelica tense up in my arms, and pulled away. She was facing me. Her eyes met mine and now that made it harder for me to continue. Bette couldnt fall in for me because I never got to finish tell her what exactly happened, so it was all up to me. Umm A guy broke a red light and ran into Melanie. She was shaking her head, she jumped from the couch, I tried to grab her, but she pushed my hand away.
No, no, no, no.
Im so sorry, Im so sorry. The car was hit on her side, she was kille I didnt get any more out.
No! dont say that. She cant be dead! She cant be dead! She cant be dead! I took her in my arms, and Bette wrapped her arms around the two of us. Aiden looked on. He didnt quite understand what was going on, but when Angelica broke down with Bette and I comforting her he came and held Angelica.
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WOW talk about a turn in the story. Can’t wait to see where you take this. I’m sitting here crying you have no idea how this hit home for me.
Wow that was sad. Only a few stories here have made me cry and this is one of them. Poor Angelica!
OMG IM CRYING. That was just…just.. absolutely heart breaking. Im speechless. You wrote it beautifully, I feel like I was there. WOW.
That made me teary eyed. Very good detail. Good Job.
wow…i am sitting her crying… this is so sad…
I’ve got the ugly sob going on.
Great chapter! It got me crying thinking about my friend who died when a train hit his car! I was feeling just like Angelica, and I didn’t sleep for two weeks! but great story, hope you continue soon!
Talk about a twist in your story here. But that was really sad and heart breaking. But it was beautiful written. Post soon
sad… but thx for the update!
K
Wow, as I am sitting here crying I am reminded of one of my best friends who died when we were 15. You really captured the emotions. Great chapter.
that is so sad.u got me crying.