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Gong Ho Mission – Chapter 4
You still havent told me why you joined the piloting academy, Dana said when she finally felt the laughter subside. Shane looked at her pensively and said,
Come with me I want to show you something. She stood up and extended her hand to Dana. Dana got up feeling a little woozy and she held on to the bar stool to regain her balance. She took Shanes hand and said a little nervously,
Ok. Where are we going? Shane started to laugh seeing the worried look on Dana face.
Not to my bedroom anyway, she said reassuringly looking carefully at Danas face as she searched for some sign that that might be exactly where Dana wanted to go. Dana blushed at her comment and answered in her most convincing voice,
I wasnt thinking about that.
Come on, well talk about it on our way, Shane added. And with that Dana followed Shane out the bar their fingers interlaced.
While they were walking to the secret destination, Shane answered Danas question.
You wanted to know why I decided to attend piloting school. Usually I dont want to talk about it because of a lot of painful memories. Dana looked at Shane and noticed that she had become thoughtful.
Hey, its ok if you dont want to talk about it. You dont have to tell me, she quickly said. Shane looked Dana deep in the eyes as if she was trying to see if she could trust her or not. And then she continued,
Went I was 4 years old I got adopted by a very nice couple. My adoptive father was a spaceship pilot. And I was always asking him to tell me stories about the mission he was in. He was telling the stories with so much passion that you could see that he really loved his job. One day he went on a mission and never came back. Shane paused blinking back a tear at the memory of the man who had been a father to her more than anyone.
We never know what happened to him. I was 13 at the time. Five years later my adoptive mother died of cancer. So as soon as I turned 18 I signed myself up and went to piloting school. My father gave me his passion for piloting just by telling me stories. And now, here I am about to pilot a top secret mission. When she had finished she was trying hard to hold back her tears. She turned to look at Dana and saw tears rolling down her cheeks. Shane raised her hand to Danas cheek and wiped the tears with her thumb and said softly,
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(21 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
yay you’re back. *does the dance of joy*. Hmm I wonder who the pilot is? If you said who it was then I missed it, but that’s what re-reading it is for right. :) can’t wait for the next part.
Your editor thinks your story rocks!!! Keep ’em coming!!!
Thank the god in heaven your back!!
And I thought you gave up. That was great, Im so glad ur back.
well the pilot must be bette right? i am sooooo glad that you are continuing this story, i thought it was gone for good and was still in mourning. its the only sci fi kind of fic i have encountered and i love it!!!
i hope that i don’t upset any readers by suggesting this (or you CFone), but i would like to see dana and alice together in this… and then maybe shane and lara… don’t get me wrong, you are writing the story exquisitly and i like the friendship/flirtation between shane and dana… i’m just am a lover dane and al thats all. no matter what you do though, you won’t lose me as a fan. i happily await the next instalment.
I like this as it is new and different.please post soon