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    Gong Ho Mission – Chapter 4

    Come and get me, you ***** she muttered under her breath as her fingers tensed around the triggers. She was ready to fight and save the two precious crew members of the mission: the cooks. It was about time they got served some edible food in this out of nowhere place She was going to be damned if she was going to mess up their first and possibly last attempt at some decent grub

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    Dana was so mad at herself to have caused such pain to Shane.

    Im really sorry Shane, she said still holding Shane in her arms to comfort her, Thank you for trusting me enough to have told me. Shane wasnt used to being hugged this way. She was finding Danas tight embrace really comforting. She slowly pulled out of it and she looked Dana intensely in the eyes. She could get lost in those beautiful blue eyes and for a moment she was. When she finally broke her gaze and she said to Dana,

    Lets go. I still want to show you something. Shane reached for Danas hand and pulled her with her down the deserted corridor.

    After a few minutes, Dana realized they were walking toward the Hanger and asked Shane,

    You want to show me something in the hanger, with a quizzical look on the face. Shane smiled at her but didnt answer. When they arrived at the destination, Shane pointed at the far end to show Dana an old fighter. Dana turn at Shane with an inquisitive look.

    Its my father fighter, Shane said putting her hand on the frame as if she was caressing it. I came here with her and she got shot in a fight. They didnt want to repair her because shes too old. But I want to repair her one day. After the war. Dana moved beside Shane and looked at the fighter. It was an old model of the TW-10 series. At the time this fighter was the best you can find on the market.

    Wow It is very beautiful, she said her hand reaching out to teach the paint. I really hope you will be able to repair it one day, she said but in fact she had another idea in mind. Suddenly the alarm started buzzing and people started running everywhere. Shane and Dana look at each other knowing exactly what was happening.

    Comments

    1. yay you’re back. *does the dance of joy*. Hmm I wonder who the pilot is? If you said who it was then I missed it, but that’s what re-reading it is for right. :) can’t wait for the next part.

    2. well the pilot must be bette right? i am sooooo glad that you are continuing this story, i thought it was gone for good and was still in mourning. its the only sci fi kind of fic i have encountered and i love it!!!

    3. i hope that i don’t upset any readers by suggesting this (or you CFone), but i would like to see dana and alice together in this… and then maybe shane and lara… don’t get me wrong, you are writing the story exquisitly and i like the friendship/flirtation between shane and dana… i’m just am a lover dane and al thats all. no matter what you do though, you won’t lose me as a fan. i happily await the next instalment.

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