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Great Unexpectations Chapter 13
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Previously…
"Is she ok, Bette." Bette nodded and smiled. "She is for now. But Kit, did that man give you his card?" Kit smiled, nodded and reached into her back pocket. "Right here, baby sis", she said as she handed it to her. "What do you want me to do with the check?"
"Take it to the bank. Cash it. Replace what you lost in the fight, and then donate the rest to charity. Any charity you want. But bring me the receipt, ok? I’m gonna put an end to this."
Chapter 13.
Bette and Kit exchanged hushing glances as a calmer Tina came back inside. "Sorry, Kit. I didn’t mean to snap at you."
"No, honey. It was my fault. I shouldn’t have sprung that check on you like that. I’ve had a few days to deal with it, but I had kind of the same reaction when I first saw it."
"Ok, let’s change the subject, shall we?", Bette interceded. "This is supposed to be a fun day. We’re gonna have a house full of people that we love, and that love us", she said as she slipped an arm around Tina’s waist and kissed her temple.
Tina’s eyes betrayed the warmth she was feeling from this simple gesture. Trying to maintain her composure in front of her sister-in-law, she quickly took Bette’s suggestion and changed the subject.
"Yeah," she said. "I can already hear Alice now with the Rocky jokes."
"Oh, I don’t know, T. I bet Alice can come up with something a little more original than that."
"You bet, huh? How much?", Tina goaded with a slight grin.
Bette looked at Tina, surprised that her simple statement would be taken literally, and enjoying the idea of a friendly wager. Her eyes sparkled as she offered, "The usual?"
"The usual? Really? We haven’t done that in a long time", Tina replied, thoroughly enjoying the idea of their standard ante.
"There are a lot of things we haven’t done in a long time, T. Doesn’t mean we shouldn’t do them", Bette said raising her eyebrows and biting her bottom lip in an attempt to conceal her smile.
Kit crimsoned as she realized the conversation was taking a turn the two lovers had probably not intended. Not in the presence of others anyway.
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ha ha…i loved it, thoroughly…Bette worked it, honey…lol…pps
Love this story. That was pretty funny. Can’t wait to read what happens when Tina goes to Bette. Hot. I hope that this Faye drama isn’t some sad stuff for B and T because this story is so great when its happy..and them rediscovering their relationship. PPS.
Whew!! Well, that was a nice visual!! Cold shower anyone? Dip in the pool maybe?! LOL Thanks!
You’re such a tease, but don’t get me wrong, I loved every line of it.Too bad the sharpie notes were gone or Bette would have taken even more comments from Alice. Tina has grown quite a new personality, leaving their guests by the pool to join Bette, it’s very endearing, I really like this Tina, she knows what she wants. Great story.
wow!!!I love your story!!!! can’t wait for the next chapter :)
Are you sure those cheers weren’t hisses for you ending it THERE? What are you trying to do to me? Haha, thanks for the update. I always get excited when I see you’ve posted. Post soon, ADx
Wow! They play for high stakes. That’s pretty gutsy on Bette’s part even in front of friends. Of course, she has a slammin’ body so not too much embarassment there. PPS.
What a treasure trove of visual delights, from Tina’s sexy moves with the wine to Bette strutting her magnificent stuff. Framily scenes with Tibette at the center: what more could a reader want? You even manage to make Angus appealing, though it’s beyond me how he could resist sneaking a peak. Bette’s complex feelings toward Helena were beautifully conveyed in this chappy too.
That was a gem of a post….Now the question is, who is “in charge” in the bedroom this time around?
Great show….Mmmmm Ms Porter!!!!!!….no matter how many readers you don’t have, you have us loyal fans…bring it on….
That was fantastic and yes indeed it did backfire on Tina but she got the spoils of war in the end. Lovely. So happy to see this chpater. I read every chapter that you post but, sometimes I read at work and can not comment. When you don’t see a comment from me just know that I was at work reading and could not write anything. Rest assured I will be with you until the end and Yes, I most certainly want to know what the Buckley woman is up to. PPS
Love, love, love it!!!
Bette Porter walking & swimming naked for all to see? That is one HELL of a barbeque get together! LOL! Hell the only thing I see at our family barbeque is my Daigo uncle in his t-shirt and plaid shorts cooking burgers on the grill with his big gut hanging over his belt, Ughh ! ….I’m all for pool party at Porter’s. Who’s with me?? LOL! Ciao.
Hoo, damn. I’d dump everything and run after a sight like that too, houseful of guests or not. Good ol’ predictable Alice, gotta love ‘er. Seems like winner’s about to take all. Go T! Great post red, thanks.
I don’t think I would have taken that wager in a million years :). Loved Tina’s last two statements. It’s nice to see them in love and lust again. Thanks for the update–anxiously awaiting Monday :)
I totally love the way you write. It makes me fall in love the TLW all over again. It could almost give me the warm and fuzzies for IC. (well maybe not).
Ohhhh, that was perfect! Funny chapter. I loved Shane waving dollar bills. Bette’s got a lot of guts….Damn! Now, are we going to see what happens when Tina follows Bette into the house? Please! PPS!!
I haven’t gone anywhere, sorry I was so quiet. If I wasn’t already in love with Tibette, you would cause me to fall head over heels with them again.Perfect. Love the playfulness of all your characters, feels very much like all the good stuff from s1. I’ve heard a great story is in the details, but I think partly it is in the generosity of the writer to give attention to all characters. Really like all these people and that they all have their own existance other than a backdrop for Tibette. ..So..Tina seems to be 2 up on Bette, still hasn’t gotten her back for the sharpie….Looking forward to your next post.
Thanks for yet another superb chapter and story. Love this story.
OMG, that was tooo funny. Actually it was tooooo hot. If I only I could have been at that pool side to get a bird’s eye view. Then I would love to have followed Ms. Tina to continue with that bird’s eye view.
well, who knew bette had it in her LOL this is something i would wanna see…now, let’s see what tina is up to ;)
I’d say B&T both won that bet. I guess the family will have to entertain themselves while Bette gets “changed” with Tina’s help of course. PPS
Wow thats hot and funny of B&T game!