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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 13

    Story written on August 10, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish. Scenes from a barbeque, Part 2.

    Kit nodded, "And about damn time, if you ask me", she said.

    "Hi ladies", Angus called out. Not breaking the embrace, Bette raised her hand to wave as Tina clutched at it, bringing it back to her waist.

    Kit and Angus giggled to themselves. "We may as well not even exist", Kit cracked.

    "I think it’s nice. I hope they can learn from the mistakes they’ve made", he said with halting words, gazing into her eyes.

    "Learning is good", Kit said softly.

    "And maybe they will really be able to forgive each other for the pain they’ve caused each other."

    Kit’s eyes welled slightly, knowing this conversation wasn’t just about Bette and Tina. She bowed her head quickly to avert his pleading eyes.

    Sniffing, she lifted her head. "Forgiveness is good, too."

    He smiled as he studied her expression. With a full heart and glassy eyes he decided to leave well enough alone for the night.

    "Hey, Angus. When did you get here?", Tina joked as she walked over.

    "About an hour ago", he shot back. "These are for you and Bette", he said, handing her the lilies. Tina took in their aroma and closed her eyes. "Lovely, Angus. Thank you. Uh, why don’t you guys come out to the pool. Bette’s gonna start grilling the meat. We can all talk out there." Tina grabbed the baby monitor as they headed outside to enjoy the sunshine and the gentle breeze.

    ——

    Shane was the next to arrive. Poking her head around the fence from her yard, she smiled as her eyes hid behind her sunglasses. "Hey guys", she said as she lifted the two twelve-packs of beer she was carrying.

    "Shane!!", everybody called out at once. Shane laughed, recalling that old television show about the bar in Boston. She felt like the character who’s name was called out by the whole bar whenever he entered. At this moment she was wishing for one of his snappy one-liners, but came up empty.

    "Where do you want these, Tina?", Shane asked as she neared her friends.

    "Right here, kiddo." Tina took one of the twelve packs and led Shane to the large cooler half stocked with slightly watered down ice. They began at once working on freeing the bottles from their cardboard containers and plunging them into the icy water. "Thanks, Shane. You know you didn’t have to bring anything, though. We have plenty."

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    2. Love this story. That was pretty funny. Can’t wait to read what happens when Tina goes to Bette. Hot. I hope that this Faye drama isn’t some sad stuff for B and T because this story is so great when its happy..and them rediscovering their relationship. PPS.

    4. You’re such a tease, but don’t get me wrong, I loved every line of it.Too bad the sharpie notes were gone or Bette would have taken even more comments from Alice. Tina has grown quite a new personality, leaving their guests by the pool to join Bette, it’s very endearing, I really like this Tina, she knows what she wants. Great story.

    6. Are you sure those cheers weren’t hisses for you ending it THERE? What are you trying to do to me? Haha, thanks for the update. I always get excited when I see you’ve posted. Post soon, ADx

    7. Wow! They play for high stakes. That’s pretty gutsy on Bette’s part even in front of friends. Of course, she has a slammin’ body so not too much embarassment there. PPS.

    8. What a treasure trove of visual delights, from Tina’s sexy moves with the wine to Bette strutting her magnificent stuff. Framily scenes with Tibette at the center: what more could a reader want? You even manage to make Angus appealing, though it’s beyond me how he could resist sneaking a peak. Bette’s complex feelings toward Helena were beautifully conveyed in this chappy too.

    11. That was fantastic and yes indeed it did backfire on Tina but she got the spoils of war in the end. Lovely. So happy to see this chpater. I read every chapter that you post but, sometimes I read at work and can not comment. When you don’t see a comment from me just know that I was at work reading and could not write anything. Rest assured I will be with you until the end and Yes, I most certainly want to know what the Buckley woman is up to. PPS

    13. Bette Porter walking & swimming naked for all to see? That is one HELL of a barbeque get together! LOL! Hell the only thing I see at our family barbeque is my Daigo uncle in his t-shirt and plaid shorts cooking burgers on the grill with his big gut hanging over his belt, Ughh ! ….I’m all for pool party at Porter’s. Who’s with me?? LOL! Ciao.

    14. Hoo, damn. I’d dump everything and run after a sight like that too, houseful of guests or not. Good ol’ predictable Alice, gotta love ‘er. Seems like winner’s about to take all. Go T! Great post red, thanks.

    15. I don’t think I would have taken that wager in a million years :). Loved Tina’s last two statements. It’s nice to see them in love and lust again. Thanks for the update–anxiously awaiting Monday :)

    16. I totally love the way you write. It makes me fall in love the TLW all over again. It could almost give me the warm and fuzzies for IC. (well maybe not).

    17. Ohhhh, that was perfect! Funny chapter. I loved Shane waving dollar bills. Bette’s got a lot of guts….Damn! Now, are we going to see what happens when Tina follows Bette into the house? Please! PPS!!

    18. I haven’t gone anywhere, sorry I was so quiet. If I wasn’t already in love with Tibette, you would cause me to fall head over heels with them again.Perfect. Love the playfulness of all your characters, feels very much like all the good stuff from s1. I’ve heard a great story is in the details, but I think partly it is in the generosity of the writer to give attention to all characters. Really like all these people and that they all have their own existance other than a backdrop for Tibette. ..So..Tina seems to be 2 up on Bette, still hasn’t gotten her back for the sharpie….Looking forward to your next post.

    20. OMG, that was tooo funny. Actually it was tooooo hot. If I only I could have been at that pool side to get a bird’s eye view. Then I would love to have followed Ms. Tina to continue with that bird’s eye view.

    22. I’d say B&T both won that bet. I guess the family will have to entertain themselves while Bette gets “changed” with Tina’s help of course. PPS

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