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Great Unexpectations Chapter 13
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Tina reminded Bette of the rules. "Ok, Bette. But that means as soon as she says it. No matter who’s here. In front of all of us."
"That goes for you too, Tina. If she hasn’t said it in her first hour here, then I win and you have to do it."
"Hour? Ha! Thirty minutes!!", Tina snarkily challenged.
Bette laughed at Tina’s confidence, misguided as she believed it was.
"Tina", she said with mock sympathy. " I’m afraid you’re going to regret your words."
"Ok", Kit interrupted. "What are you ladies getting yourselves in to?"
"Just a friendly bet, Kit. Don’t worry", Tina said, grinning as if she’d already won. "So. It’s on then? If you wanna back out, now’s the time, Bette."
"No such luck, T. It is so on. You scared?"
Tina inhaled deeply and smiled. "A little", she admitted with dancing eyes, inciting laughter from Bette. Kit, despite her confusion, joined the laughter.
Within minutes the doorbell rang. Bette and Tina were occupied sealing their deal with a kiss so Kit took it upon herself to answer the door and was happily rewarded when she found Angus standing before her. He was holding two arrangements of flowers and a bottle of sparkling grape juice. He was taken off guard at Kit being the one to open the door, and silently cursed himself for not having his words prepared ahead of time. He smiled nervously, and she responded in kind. Finding her presence of mind, she opened the door widely and allowed him inside. Her heart raced as she closed the door behind him. The smell of his cologne aroused her senses. He knew it was her favorite. "Angus. I’m…I’m glad you came."
His chest puffed with pride at her timid words. He clumsily extended the hand holding the flowers to her in offering. "Um, which ones?", she asked as she admired both the white roses and the white lilies. "Which ever ones you like best", he said. She met his gaze while sampling their aromas. She finally chose the roses, to his great delight. "This is for you too", he said as he handed the non-alcoholic drink to Kit. "We can kind of pretend it’s champagne or something", he said nervously. "If that’s ok. I don’t know. Should we not do that? Does that make it harder to…", he was babbling now and he knew it. Kit knew it too. She stopped him by lifting the bottle out of his hand and examining the label. "No. It’s ok. That would be nice", she said smiling. He released a sigh of relief. He did not want to undermine her sobriety, and had second guessed his purchase the entire ride over. He looked over Kit’s shoulder at Bette and Tina who were still making out, oblivious to the fact that there was anybody in the house with them. "So, I guess it’s official, huh?", he smiled.
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ha ha…i loved it, thoroughly…Bette worked it, honey…lol…pps
Love this story. That was pretty funny. Can’t wait to read what happens when Tina goes to Bette. Hot. I hope that this Faye drama isn’t some sad stuff for B and T because this story is so great when its happy..and them rediscovering their relationship. PPS.
Whew!! Well, that was a nice visual!! Cold shower anyone? Dip in the pool maybe?! LOL Thanks!
You’re such a tease, but don’t get me wrong, I loved every line of it.Too bad the sharpie notes were gone or Bette would have taken even more comments from Alice. Tina has grown quite a new personality, leaving their guests by the pool to join Bette, it’s very endearing, I really like this Tina, she knows what she wants. Great story.
wow!!!I love your story!!!! can’t wait for the next chapter :)
Are you sure those cheers weren’t hisses for you ending it THERE? What are you trying to do to me? Haha, thanks for the update. I always get excited when I see you’ve posted. Post soon, ADx
Wow! They play for high stakes. That’s pretty gutsy on Bette’s part even in front of friends. Of course, she has a slammin’ body so not too much embarassment there. PPS.
What a treasure trove of visual delights, from Tina’s sexy moves with the wine to Bette strutting her magnificent stuff. Framily scenes with Tibette at the center: what more could a reader want? You even manage to make Angus appealing, though it’s beyond me how he could resist sneaking a peak. Bette’s complex feelings toward Helena were beautifully conveyed in this chappy too.
That was a gem of a post….Now the question is, who is “in charge” in the bedroom this time around?
Great show….Mmmmm Ms Porter!!!!!!….no matter how many readers you don’t have, you have us loyal fans…bring it on….
That was fantastic and yes indeed it did backfire on Tina but she got the spoils of war in the end. Lovely. So happy to see this chpater. I read every chapter that you post but, sometimes I read at work and can not comment. When you don’t see a comment from me just know that I was at work reading and could not write anything. Rest assured I will be with you until the end and Yes, I most certainly want to know what the Buckley woman is up to. PPS
Love, love, love it!!!
Bette Porter walking & swimming naked for all to see? That is one HELL of a barbeque get together! LOL! Hell the only thing I see at our family barbeque is my Daigo uncle in his t-shirt and plaid shorts cooking burgers on the grill with his big gut hanging over his belt, Ughh ! ….I’m all for pool party at Porter’s. Who’s with me?? LOL! Ciao.
Hoo, damn. I’d dump everything and run after a sight like that too, houseful of guests or not. Good ol’ predictable Alice, gotta love ‘er. Seems like winner’s about to take all. Go T! Great post red, thanks.
I don’t think I would have taken that wager in a million years :). Loved Tina’s last two statements. It’s nice to see them in love and lust again. Thanks for the update–anxiously awaiting Monday :)
I totally love the way you write. It makes me fall in love the TLW all over again. It could almost give me the warm and fuzzies for IC. (well maybe not).
Ohhhh, that was perfect! Funny chapter. I loved Shane waving dollar bills. Bette’s got a lot of guts….Damn! Now, are we going to see what happens when Tina follows Bette into the house? Please! PPS!!
I haven’t gone anywhere, sorry I was so quiet. If I wasn’t already in love with Tibette, you would cause me to fall head over heels with them again.Perfect. Love the playfulness of all your characters, feels very much like all the good stuff from s1. I’ve heard a great story is in the details, but I think partly it is in the generosity of the writer to give attention to all characters. Really like all these people and that they all have their own existance other than a backdrop for Tibette. ..So..Tina seems to be 2 up on Bette, still hasn’t gotten her back for the sharpie….Looking forward to your next post.
Thanks for yet another superb chapter and story. Love this story.
OMG, that was tooo funny. Actually it was tooooo hot. If I only I could have been at that pool side to get a bird’s eye view. Then I would love to have followed Ms. Tina to continue with that bird’s eye view.
well, who knew bette had it in her LOL this is something i would wanna see…now, let’s see what tina is up to ;)
I’d say B&T both won that bet. I guess the family will have to entertain themselves while Bette gets “changed” with Tina’s help of course. PPS
Wow thats hot and funny of B&T game!