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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 16

    Story written on August 17, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Morning after the BBQ. Shane’s revelation. (don’t be scared).
    Some B&T goodness.

    His eyes smiled back at her and he leaned in for another kiss. This one slightly south of forehead. Smelling the food, Kit looked at the tray.

    "What did you do?", she asked in amazement as she viewed the assortment of toast, juice, coffee, waffles, fruit, and a single white rose he’d smuggled from Kit’s bouquet.

    "I wasn’t sure what you’d be in the mood for. Hope you don’t mind. The waffles were frozen."

    Loving his attention she smiled and simply said, "I’ll let it go… this time."

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    Bette was having no luck in rousing Tina with her gentle methods. She elevated the game by sliding closer to Tina. She was so close she was almost on top of her now. Bette squeezed the ass harder now as she kissed and gently bit Tina’s shoulder. Amazingly enough this only produced louder snores. A slow grin came to Bette’s face and she playfully shoved Tina’s body. "You are such a faker", she chuckled.

    A soft, muffled laugh came from Tina and she turned her head to reveal her bright smile. "Sorry babe. I just wanted to see how far you were gonna go."

    "You were about to get seriously accosted."

    Tina turned onto her side to face Bette completely and pulled her into a close embrace. "Do you mean like this?", Tina asked as she glorified Bette’s breasts first with gentle cupping and squeezing. Bette shook her head slowly, though she was betrayed by the quick response of her hardening nipples and shallowing breath. "How about like this?", Tina continued as she dropped her mouth to Bette’s bosom, leaving warm wet trails with her tongue. Bette’s mouth dropped slightly at the divine sensations that were quietly on the verge of eruption. Still she shook her head. "How about this?", Tina asked again before letting her warm breath waft over the wet trails. This time Bette’s hips shifted subtly as the sensual quivering began to spread throughout her body. This time Bette nodded and moaned. Tina, seeing the full body arousal drew back and smiled. She laid her head back on her pillow and looked at Bette’s closed eyes. "That’s too bad. I would’ve liked that." Bette opened her eyes and playfully groused, "You’re a tease." At those words Tina reached out for Bette and held her closely, taking her in a full kiss. Bette forgave her for being a tease. Their meshed bodies began to disturb the clean lines of the sheets as birds sang outside of the window.

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    3. Yet another chapter jam-packed with funny and psychologically acute moments. Bette covering Boo’s ears because she was afraid that Henry’s name would provoke a smile really got to me. And the Sharpie returns!

    4. Loved this chapter Red. They way you showed them all getting their days started was really cool. Great conversation with Alice and Shane regarding Dana getting the last laugh – that was ingeniously funny…and kind of sad at the same time. It’s good that Tina is helping Bette face her demons. Bette is learning that even though she and T may have some trepidations, they will be alright as long as they keep communicating and working through them together. I’m glad Tina wasn’t upset that Bette was late…I hope Bette’s car doesn’t get towed with her being double parked! Thanks Red! This story is just awesome!

    6. This was such great chapter, from Bette and Tina, to the interspersed scenes with their extended family, to the end. What’s one night and the risk of aticket or a towing when you have forever to look forward to? Thanks for the post, red, hope the next is soon.

    8. thanks! you’ve outdone yourself again! all of the little snippets were fantastic. hadn’t thought of the coin as a seed, must say. and i’m sitting here hoping bette remembers having double parked. i somehow doubt it … eagerly await your next update! thanks again!

    10. I loved both Bette and Tina in this chapter. Bette able to express her fears and Tina not letting her get away with hiding them :). Great update–can’t wait for more.

    12. Have I mentioned I love your writing? Bette trying to wake T was just fun.The Dana – Alice coin thing was a perfect. Glad she has the last laugh. So does it say “Bullshit”? or something else, was a bit confused? Thanks for finding the time to post.

    14. Nice…everything abouyt it…how everybody woke up, how Dana was a prankster, how Bette was unsure of sleeping in Tina’s bed (i’d totally be the same way)…pps

    15. Great update Red! How great was that, Dana’s taking the coin? So funny. And loved Alice’s reaction to it – “That little bitch.” So funny. And B&T were very sweet. I’ve had that panic when I’ve overslept for something, you captured it perfectly! Thanks for taking the time to update, I know things area little hectic right now, what with all the crying you must be doing over last night’s game! LOL. Okay, sorry, just had to squeeze one trash talking moment in, I feel deprived since I haven’t been able to watch the games! PPS!!!

    17. Ahhh…The return of the mischievous sharpie… hilarious, loved that scene! Brilliant chapter. Happy to see Dana get the last laugh on Alice… sweet. Just love your writing.

    18. I loved this chapter. Having Bette work through her fear of the “bed” brought fourth how much each is willing to do to get back together. Good riddence to both henry and jodi. Can someone please give back ic’s brain so that she can fix Tibette?

    21. God I felt Bette’s heart racing and feeling what she must have been thinking ” omfg I have screwed up” but glad to read your ending it was greatpps

    24. Liked Tina calling Bette out on the bed double standard. Love that they are ready to U-Haul but I hope it isn’t too soon. I read for the B and T stuff but surprisingly really liked the idea of Dana getting the last laugh about the coin. PPS.

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