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Great Unexpectations Chapter 19
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Bette broke the kiss with a happy sigh, keeping her proximity. Standing there in the dark, she looked first to her right and then to her left. Any neighbors that Faye might have seemed to be blocked from seeing into the yard by a combination of tall fences and hedges. She stopped looking around when she spotted what seemed to be a somewhat secluded nook on Faye’s lawn. Bette looked at Tina with a grin, kissed her lightly on the tip of her nose and said, "Come on."
They ran while taking off their blouses, trying to conceal their giggles. They dropped their shirts and pulled each other down to the ground. The grass was pleasingly soft and cool to the touch. The tiny blades gently poked the skin on Tina’s back as Bette began to ravage her with kisses that drifted from neck to breast in rapid succession. They attempted to muffle their moans as they gave their hands free rein over each other’s bodies. Tina ran her hands quickly across Bette’s back and unfastened her bra. She slipped it’s straps from Bette’s mocha arms and threw it to the side. The bare heaving breasts pressed
against Tina as Bette continued her assault. Bette reached down to unfasten her own pants as Tina’s hand eagerly awaited the let.
They excitement of the moment was such that they were not aware of the lawn sprinkler heads that popped up out of the ground. The activated timer set off showers that covered the entire lawn. Being only three feet away from one of the sprinkler heads Bette and Tina were directly in the line of fire and were immediately drenched in cold water. "Shit!!" Bette screamed as she abruptly got off of Tina. "Shh", Tina giggled as they scrambled for cover, grabbing their clothing on the way. They fought off high pitched squeals as they ran haphazardly through the yard trying to avoid the heaviest streams of water.
They made it to the safety of Bette’s car and shut themselves inside. Looking at each other drenched from head to toe, they burst into full body hysterics. "That was interesting", Bette laughed as she attempted to put on her soaked shirt. "Great idea, T." Tina could not respond for her uncontrollable laughter.
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Hey everybody. I don’t know why this is 8 pages. it should have only been about 3 or 4. I think the site is skimping on words per page or something. I’m sorry if you saw the 8 and were mislead to think it would be a longer read. out of my hands. -Red.
red….This chapter was wonderful. Betet better talk fast to Tina. PPS.
Redhorse, can I just say that you are one of the cruelest people I’ve ever met(?)!! Here I was thinking I would finally have the answer to what Faye really wanted and no longer am I searching for closure on that one. I am also now searching for closure on Bette withholding her thoughts/fears from Tina! JK. I love this story, PPS!
Oh that’s ok Red, I loved the idea of getting 8 pages of this story. What the hell does the fawn mean. Have I missed something or am I just too tired to think. At any rate, Bette is in a hell of a lot of trouble with Tina and she had better explain quickly. With flowers, candyb and champagne. Tina is pissed and been crying to boot. PPS
Red, you’ve got me so intrigued. I must say that Bette’s dream sucked, but Bette should have just told Tina everything. Tina would be relieved to hear what is actually wrong, because I’m sure that what Tina’s imagination has come up with is much worse. Here’s a big thank you that is owed to S! and another thank you to you red! Can’t wait for more!
What an excellent chapter! Thank you. By the way, I thump using my middle finger and thumb. Have I been doing it wrong my whole life? I think I have alot more power that way.
Aww. This chapter was sad. Still so much work to do on their relationship. PPS.
Great chapter. Buckley has awaken a lot of fears in Bette. Hope she shares with Tina.
Just loved the sprinkler scene… too funny. I’m no closer to figuring Faye out and must say that this peeping-Tom act she’s got going on is a bit creepy. What’s with her watching B&T?? Guess I’ll have to wait for the reveal… Love your story Red.
it was wonderful; so loving their interactions…hate faye with a vengeance for ruining their good tomes 2gether…and so soon…
shez!!! i meant ‘good times’ 2gether.
OK great chapter, but Bette better get it together quickly and let Tina in on whatever it is before the drama starts for them again. We really need to know what FB is up to so please don’t make us wait to long.
I’m anxious! What’s with this print? And Bette’s “breakfast” was Tina’s way of telling her she’s in the dog house.
Way to go Shane!! Bette needed that. She better find out her info & then get down on her knees and beg forgiveness. Quick!! PPS!!
I see those two going through a rough time soon unless the waves can be smoothed out. I can understand Bette’s dilemma but she somehow needs to say something to Tina. Bette’s dream really was weird and scary.
Hope drama not coming, let Bette talk to Tina!
Bette had better get Faye figured out… else Shane’s going to have to do a lot of ass-smacking. And LOL @ the “emergency bagel”… I have a freezer full of “emergency food”. Loved the chapter, red. Thanks
excellent chapter. bagels with freezer burns. painful. the dream was too. so far, bette has been able to overcome her various mind hurdles, so she should be able to deal with this one as well. or fear more freezer burns and shane’s boot. thanks!
Your stories are just so much fun….Spinklers, flicking Alice in the head, frozen bagels, and smacked in the a** to mention a few of the key moments. I have no idea where the Faye thing is going but am enjoying the ride to find out…of course, this is only because I have faith in the APW. (She will help Bette fix it, before she screws up. Right?)
LMAO@Shane! XD
Bette needs to get to her woman real fast and tell her what’s going on. I so love Shane. Thanks Great Chapter PPS
Poor Bette. She’s terrified of disappointing Tina, but she’s doing just that by not communicating. The sprinkler scene was a hoot! Can’t wait for the big reveal.