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Great Unexpectations Chapter 19
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Alice yawned and shook her head. "Only animal crackers. Why does she like the giraffes so much?"
"Who knows."
Alice, now more awake, finally took a good look at Bette. "What happened to you? You look like a drowned rat."
Bette’s lips stretched wide as she tried to suppress her grin. "Long story, Al. A good one, though. Maybe if you’re lucky I’ll tell it to you some day. Maybe. So, how was Angie? Did she give you any trouble."
"Oh please. That little Angel? We had a blast. We played with her blocks. I read to her. We went for a quick swim. Had some margaritas and then settled down for some ‘Nemo’."
"We’re trying to keep her down to one drink a night, Al. She’s a bear when she’s hung over", Bette quipped, to Alice’s great amusement.
"That was a good one, B. I’m impressed."
Tina returned to the living room with a towel for Bette. "Here, babe", she said. Alice saw that Tina was also damp and her curiosity grew tremendously. "What were you two up to? Did you go skinny dipping or something?"
"Another day, Alice", Tina said smiling at Bette. Bette, who was toweling off, smiled back at Tina suggestively. Alice caught the looks and took the hint. "Ok, ladies. I should get going", she said as she rose from the sofa.
"Thanks again, Al. Drive safe."
Alice nodded as she slipped on her sandals and grabbed her keys from the table. "Night", she waved, opening the door.
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Settled into their bed, Bette and Tina held each other in their nakedness. Their minds were checking off the events of the night, though each women’s list was slightly different.
"That was an interesting visit, wouldn’t you say, Bette? And I don’t just mean the sprinklers. Although that was kind of fun."
"I know what you mean, T. Faye has really come a long way. I would have never guessed in a million years that I’d ever be in her house, drinking wine and laughing with her. It was a little surreal."
"Are you sure you’re ok?", Tina asked with no small amount of concern. ‘You didn’t seem right when you came back from the bathroom, and then you wanted to leave right away."
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Hey everybody. I don’t know why this is 8 pages. it should have only been about 3 or 4. I think the site is skimping on words per page or something. I’m sorry if you saw the 8 and were mislead to think it would be a longer read. out of my hands. -Red.
red….This chapter was wonderful. Betet better talk fast to Tina. PPS.
Redhorse, can I just say that you are one of the cruelest people I’ve ever met(?)!! Here I was thinking I would finally have the answer to what Faye really wanted and no longer am I searching for closure on that one. I am also now searching for closure on Bette withholding her thoughts/fears from Tina! JK. I love this story, PPS!
Oh that’s ok Red, I loved the idea of getting 8 pages of this story. What the hell does the fawn mean. Have I missed something or am I just too tired to think. At any rate, Bette is in a hell of a lot of trouble with Tina and she had better explain quickly. With flowers, candyb and champagne. Tina is pissed and been crying to boot. PPS
Red, you’ve got me so intrigued. I must say that Bette’s dream sucked, but Bette should have just told Tina everything. Tina would be relieved to hear what is actually wrong, because I’m sure that what Tina’s imagination has come up with is much worse. Here’s a big thank you that is owed to S! and another thank you to you red! Can’t wait for more!
What an excellent chapter! Thank you. By the way, I thump using my middle finger and thumb. Have I been doing it wrong my whole life? I think I have alot more power that way.
Aww. This chapter was sad. Still so much work to do on their relationship. PPS.
Great chapter. Buckley has awaken a lot of fears in Bette. Hope she shares with Tina.
Just loved the sprinkler scene… too funny. I’m no closer to figuring Faye out and must say that this peeping-Tom act she’s got going on is a bit creepy. What’s with her watching B&T?? Guess I’ll have to wait for the reveal… Love your story Red.
it was wonderful; so loving their interactions…hate faye with a vengeance for ruining their good tomes 2gether…and so soon…
shez!!! i meant ‘good times’ 2gether.
OK great chapter, but Bette better get it together quickly and let Tina in on whatever it is before the drama starts for them again. We really need to know what FB is up to so please don’t make us wait to long.
I’m anxious! What’s with this print? And Bette’s “breakfast” was Tina’s way of telling her she’s in the dog house.
Way to go Shane!! Bette needed that. She better find out her info & then get down on her knees and beg forgiveness. Quick!! PPS!!
I see those two going through a rough time soon unless the waves can be smoothed out. I can understand Bette’s dilemma but she somehow needs to say something to Tina. Bette’s dream really was weird and scary.
Hope drama not coming, let Bette talk to Tina!
Bette had better get Faye figured out… else Shane’s going to have to do a lot of ass-smacking. And LOL @ the “emergency bagel”… I have a freezer full of “emergency food”. Loved the chapter, red. Thanks
excellent chapter. bagels with freezer burns. painful. the dream was too. so far, bette has been able to overcome her various mind hurdles, so she should be able to deal with this one as well. or fear more freezer burns and shane’s boot. thanks!
Your stories are just so much fun….Spinklers, flicking Alice in the head, frozen bagels, and smacked in the a** to mention a few of the key moments. I have no idea where the Faye thing is going but am enjoying the ride to find out…of course, this is only because I have faith in the APW. (She will help Bette fix it, before she screws up. Right?)
LMAO@Shane! XD
Bette needs to get to her woman real fast and tell her what’s going on. I so love Shane. Thanks Great Chapter PPS
Poor Bette. She’s terrified of disappointing Tina, but she’s doing just that by not communicating. The sprinkler scene was a hoot! Can’t wait for the big reveal.