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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 27

    "Was it a mock-up?", Tina asked.

    "No. It was the real deal. So, somebody involved in that movie was either there, or close enough to pick up a paper."

    Tina patted Faye’s knee trying to comfort her. "Faye. This is good news. She’s still with us. Ok? We’re going to find her."

    Faye looked into Tina’s warm eyes and smiled, accepting her words. At that moment, Richard wished he’d had the physical ability to kick his own ass. In all his time in working with Faye, it had never occurred to him to comfort her emotionally in this way. He did manage tenderness with her when it was time to administer her pain medications. However, anytime new evidence came in, his work mentality took over. Analyzing data coldly. Laying out the blue prints of their next move. Not stopping to understand where Faye’s mind was. When they learned that Cora had been sleeping in a burned out crack den in Colorado five months ago, he was more concerned with it’s address and the names of the other frequenters. Hoping to find somebody to point them in the next direction. Faye, with a mother’s mind, could only picture her little girl huddled up in tattered blankets, fending off god knows who or what. Hungry. Cold. Scared.

    "Yes, Faye", he said. Stepping up to the plate he’d missed all this time. "I promise you, we will find her. Tina’s right. This is good news. She looked healthy. No scars. I really think she’s ok."

    Bette rubbed Faye’s back softly and looked up to Richard. "So, what do we do now?"

    "Well, what I usually do when a new tape or DVD comes in is to watch it to see if I can recognize any of the locations. Sometimes there’s a window that looks out onto the street and I’ll try to catch sight of street signs. Or a mountain. Or an advertising billboard. Anything to narrow down the location. The newspaper was a big find. That’s like Christmas. A big help. Not for location, but for timeline."

    "So, are we going to Phoenix?", Tina asked.

    "Probably not. They usually shoot these movies in about a week and then get the hell out of town. What we need to do is track down the other actors. Not all of them are runaways and hiding. Some of them are just…working. I always look at the credits and start the investigation there. I’ll find her co-stars and see what I can find out."

    Comments

    1. Tina did Cagney and Lacey proud with that bit of detective work. Now, to repeat the latter half of Bette’s earlier thought, Will they be stopping on their way back?

    2. I always loved Tina. Great body and also a great mind. Loved Bette’s body and mind as well. Hopefully that will break the case wide open and allow Faye to have some closure before her final breath. My Cubs did not even make it past 3 games but they are not alone.

    3. Great update Red! And some gratutitous sex tossed in as well!! I love it. But ABBA?? Had to you been to Ikea and were feeling the Swedish love? I must admit the meatballs there could turn anyone into lovong all things Nordic! LOL Loved Bette saying “She’s with me.” Very cute. Well done, hope you’re already working on the next update! PPS

    4. good this is heating up; altho if someone phoned me at 5 for an 11 mtg, i’d kill ’em. Luckily B and T found something more constructive to do. Lmao. pps

    5. Any time the phone rings after/before a certain hour, the immediate reaction is to worry, and worry hard. Really, Richard could have waited an hour or so. But then, yeah, as Bette said, that worked out OK. And Tina, of course, is brilliant. Her choice of partner is already evidence of that. And I swear, Alice is as cute as Angie is. Great update, red. Thanks (and I’m glad things worked out).

    6. You just get better and better, red. Such a great read! Yaaay Tina, sexy sleuth that she is, and I love Bette’s “she’s with me” declaration.

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