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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 27

    Alice caught Bette’s glance and had a thought of her own. Uh huh. I knew it. Going to see Faye, my ass!

    Tina caught both glances and changed the subject. "Thanks again, Al. We really appreciate it." And then quickly to Bette, "Are you ready babe?"

    Bette could not take her eyes off Tina’s soft hips. "More than you know", she said, raising her eyebrows flirtatiously.

    "Oh brother. Just go you two", Alice said, rolling her eyes.

    They grabbed their purses and were quickly on their way out the door.

    Alice waited all of ten seconds before running to Angie’s room to check on her, hoping that she’d ‘accidentally’ wake her up. No such luck. Angie slept like her Mama B. Loudly and serenely. Alice wandered back to the living room and sprawled out on the sofa. She tipped the baseball cap down to shade her face and rested her eyes. She knew that sleep would be hard to come by. The combination of Angie-duty and caffeine was not conducive to sleep, but she enjoyed the warm sun coming in from the windows as she relaxed.

    —

    Bette hummed to her ABBA as the Saab made it’s way, yet again, to Faye’s house. "So what exactly did Richard say again, babe?"

    "Just that they’d just received some new information and they needed a little time to go over it and to be there around noon."

    "Hmm", Tina thought. "Kind of funny that they didn’t want us there right away, don’t you think? Faye seems to want us involved in every step."

    "Mmhmm", Bette nodded in agreement.

    "Don’t get me wrong. I’m glad we didn’t have to get out of bed right away", she grinned.

    "Mmhmm", Bette nodded again, matching Tina’s grin.

    —

    Alice grew weary of sitting around and picked up the baby monitor before walking outside. She looked into Shane’s yard and seeing movement in the window began to wave vehemently, trying to gain her friend’s attention. Success finally favored her and Shane stepped outside. "Hey, Al. Whatcha doing?"

    "I’m watching Angie, but she’s sleeping. Come on over. I’m bored."

    "Where are Bette and Tina?"

    "Who knows. They said they were going to Faye’s but I’d bet ten bucks they’re in room twenty-seven at the Dew Drop Inn."

    Comments

    1. Tina did Cagney and Lacey proud with that bit of detective work. Now, to repeat the latter half of Bette’s earlier thought, Will they be stopping on their way back?

    2. I always loved Tina. Great body and also a great mind. Loved Bette’s body and mind as well. Hopefully that will break the case wide open and allow Faye to have some closure before her final breath. My Cubs did not even make it past 3 games but they are not alone.

    3. Great update Red! And some gratutitous sex tossed in as well!! I love it. But ABBA?? Had to you been to Ikea and were feeling the Swedish love? I must admit the meatballs there could turn anyone into lovong all things Nordic! LOL Loved Bette saying “She’s with me.” Very cute. Well done, hope you’re already working on the next update! PPS

    4. good this is heating up; altho if someone phoned me at 5 for an 11 mtg, i’d kill ’em. Luckily B and T found something more constructive to do. Lmao. pps

    5. Any time the phone rings after/before a certain hour, the immediate reaction is to worry, and worry hard. Really, Richard could have waited an hour or so. But then, yeah, as Bette said, that worked out OK. And Tina, of course, is brilliant. Her choice of partner is already evidence of that. And I swear, Alice is as cute as Angie is. Great update, red. Thanks (and I’m glad things worked out).

    6. You just get better and better, red. Such a great read! Yaaay Tina, sexy sleuth that she is, and I love Bette’s “she’s with me” declaration.

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