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Great Unexpectations Chapter 30
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"What do they want?", he yelled back. Richard and Bette, alone on the stoop looked to each other and traded rolling eyes for smirks while listening to the exchange.
"I don’t know what they want!! Get off your goddamn ass and find out for yourself!!"
Next to be heard was a cavalcade of stomping feet. He was clearly pissed off. He snapped the door open angrily and before he had a chance to mouth off whatever smartass thing was in his mind, Richard grabbed him by the scruff of the neck and dragged him outside. "Hey Jay man! How’s it going?", he said loud enough so that his mother, if she cared enough to listen, would simply think it was the greeting of two old friends. Bette stood back and watched silently.
"What the fuck, man?", Jason said, trying to conceal the pain he was feeling.
"Let’s go for a ride. Tell your mom we’ll be back in half an hour."
Jason looked into Richard’s dark eyes. He didn’t know who the hell this guy was, but he knew without a doubt that to do anything other than what he said would lead to certain pain.
He kept his stare on Richard and shouted to the door. "Hey ma!! I’m going out for a bit!! Be back in thirty!!"
"Bring me a pack of smokes!" she yelled back.
Jesus, he thought, I’m getting kidnapped here and all she cares about is her fucking cigarettes. He yelled back that he would and she was satisfied enough with that answer that she said nothing more.
he thought, He yelled back that he would and she was satisfied enough with that answer that she said nothing more.
Richard led him to the car and put him in the back seat. Bette followed and sat in the front seat, waiting to see how this would play out. Richard turned the key and pulled away from the curb. Jason, clearly scared out of his mind, practically jumped out of his skin when the automatic door locks slammed down. With the spunk that comes from only extreme stupidity Jason began to demand things. Namely, who the fuck they were and where the fuck they were taking him. "Shut up", Richard replied. And shut up he did. After five silent minutes of driving Richard pulled into the vacant parking lot of an old burned out warehouse building. He put the car in park and left the front seat to join Jason in the back seat. This is when the desire to void his bladder became almost unbearable. "Don’t do it", Richard warned. He’d seen that look many times before. "So help me God, if you piss your pants you’re walking home."
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Supercool to see you back in great form. I love your mix of suspense and B&T lovin’. Will there soon be a real proposal??
Glad to see your back. I am so loving this. PPS Thanks
Wow… this was some funny, intriguing, sexy and lovely gi-normus chapter!!! Angy was sooo sweet… she is like her momma B!! Mmm… Is T going to propose B someday?? Please don’t take so long to post, we miss you (and the story of course)!!! PPS!!
Bette falling asleep on Tina was adorable, but I’m glad they made up for missed opportunities the next day. It’s entirely plausible that a power-suited Bette might be mistaken for a tour guide and brilliantly rise to the occasion. What a terrific scene; I was mesmerized right along with Tina and the crowd. Can’t wait to see if Faye’s apparent breakthrough pans out. Thanks for posting!
great story loving it. are you from michigan if you are so i,m i flint
Well, well, well Red, welcome back and thanks for another great chapter. Md
Missed ya, Red! Bette falling asleep on Tina was funny, but it’s a good thing they were able to make up for it the next morning! PPS
Dang, hope that it is in the summer because the bay would be aweful cold in the winter. I love how much Bette and Tina love each other and are willing to show it. The day trip was funny with Bette garnering a fan following with her every move. I would have been front and center in that group and I would only be looking at her not the art work.
thx; come back soon.
Cagney and Lacey, huh? Which one of them got to play the “good” cop? Richard blew it… I thought Bette was supposed to be the scary one? And hell yeah for Bette in a power suit! That could never disappoint, nor can your writing. Great chapter, red. Thanks for the post.
And you were worried that no one would remember your story or read it?! LOL. Another great update – so many different moments/emotions, quite the fun ride I must say. I makes me want to go back and read this one from the beginning! Hope you’ll have time to keep on with your story, we’d all be devastated if you didn’t. PPS
Hey red, happy to see you back. Too funny with the museum scene. I can picture the crowd looking around for their guide after the intermission. Love the whispered nightly proposal also… just hope you allow Tina to vocalize it outside of Bette’s REM-cycle one time!! Anxious to see what lit Faye’s fire and what she finds in Traverse City. Love the story!
Great chapter. Love B&T’s love and they are sweet. Hope this is time to find Cora and ending the drama. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Red, Good to have you back and with this wonderful post you are most welcome. Life is on an even keel atm so I’ll PM you later with further details. As for this latest addition, it was heart-warming to see the gals ga-ga over Angelica and then reconnecting in the most primal of physical pleasures. I love the fact that Tina constantly falls for Bette and that this adoration is returned in full. They are each putting everything in to their relationship and being able to talk to each other is wonderful. This case of mistaken identity as a tour guide was LOL, Tina’s gentle amusement was sweet. Good to see Bette at her best even if she did fall asleep the previous night just as Tina was revealing her soul.I think that this run in with Faye is bringing out the best in Bette and Tina. As for their search for Cora, Richard was funny as he manhandled Jason. Intriguing stuff that I can wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Many, many thansk for returning and sharing this excellent adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL@Bette’s little fan club. XD And mmmmm for power suits!
Ahhhhhh……Bette in a power suit. Bette out of a power suit. Love them both! Hope this leed pans out. PPS!!