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Great Unexpectations Chapter 30
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Bette wasted no time getting out of bed and walking to the bathroom, removing her clothes on the way. The mirror was foggy with steam, as was the glass shower door. Tina shivered at the relatively cooler air that the opened bathroom door allowed in. She smiled knowing that Bette would be joining her and turned to greet her. Bette opened the shower door and stepped inside to Tina’s wet warm arms. Tina shared the hot water and admired the droplets running over her dark skin. The drops that dangled from her hardened nipples before plummeting helplessly to the shower floor.
Bette leaned in to kiss Tina who unexpectedly stepped back slightly with a devilish grin and teased, "Oh no you don’t. You had your chance, missie. You snooze, you lose."
A smile was visited upon Bette’s eyes. Ignoring Tina’s gentle refusal, she pulled her close and kissed her. Tina’s resistance, had there been any, was useless. Even though the hot water was pouring down on her, the shivers that Bette’s kiss inspired could not be quashed. Her arms soon wrapped around the back of Bette’s neck, pulling her even closer. Their tongues danced with each other, their breasts crushed against each other, and their loins grew a wetness that even the shower waters could not compete with. Tina gasped for just enough air to admit her defeat. "Oh ok", she said weekly before engaging the kiss once more.
An hour later they were lounging about in their bath robes fixing their, trying to decide what part of Chicago they would take on. With little argument on Tina’s end they quickly decided on the Art Institute. Tina emerged from the bathroom after perfecting her make up and was pleasantly surprised to see Bette standing before her in an original Bette Porter power suit. Crisp lines. Ivory collar and cuffs. Bette stood nervously. "I know it’s not very dressy. In fact it looks like I’m going to work. I could change-"
"Don’t you dare!!", Tina blurted out. She walked slowly to Bette, admiring her dark suit. "Don’t you dare", she repeated. Slower. Softer.
"You look…fantastic. Beautiful. God, you’re so beautiful. Why did I ever leave you?"
"Do you really want me to answer that?", Bette asked, with raised eyebrows.
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Supercool to see you back in great form. I love your mix of suspense and B&T lovin’. Will there soon be a real proposal??
Glad to see your back. I am so loving this. PPS Thanks
Wow… this was some funny, intriguing, sexy and lovely gi-normus chapter!!! Angy was sooo sweet… she is like her momma B!! Mmm… Is T going to propose B someday?? Please don’t take so long to post, we miss you (and the story of course)!!! PPS!!
Bette falling asleep on Tina was adorable, but I’m glad they made up for missed opportunities the next day. It’s entirely plausible that a power-suited Bette might be mistaken for a tour guide and brilliantly rise to the occasion. What a terrific scene; I was mesmerized right along with Tina and the crowd. Can’t wait to see if Faye’s apparent breakthrough pans out. Thanks for posting!
great story loving it. are you from michigan if you are so i,m i flint
Well, well, well Red, welcome back and thanks for another great chapter. Md
Missed ya, Red! Bette falling asleep on Tina was funny, but it’s a good thing they were able to make up for it the next morning! PPS
Dang, hope that it is in the summer because the bay would be aweful cold in the winter. I love how much Bette and Tina love each other and are willing to show it. The day trip was funny with Bette garnering a fan following with her every move. I would have been front and center in that group and I would only be looking at her not the art work.
thx; come back soon.
Cagney and Lacey, huh? Which one of them got to play the “good” cop? Richard blew it… I thought Bette was supposed to be the scary one? And hell yeah for Bette in a power suit! That could never disappoint, nor can your writing. Great chapter, red. Thanks for the post.
And you were worried that no one would remember your story or read it?! LOL. Another great update – so many different moments/emotions, quite the fun ride I must say. I makes me want to go back and read this one from the beginning! Hope you’ll have time to keep on with your story, we’d all be devastated if you didn’t. PPS
Hey red, happy to see you back. Too funny with the museum scene. I can picture the crowd looking around for their guide after the intermission. Love the whispered nightly proposal also… just hope you allow Tina to vocalize it outside of Bette’s REM-cycle one time!! Anxious to see what lit Faye’s fire and what she finds in Traverse City. Love the story!
Great chapter. Love B&T’s love and they are sweet. Hope this is time to find Cora and ending the drama. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Red, Good to have you back and with this wonderful post you are most welcome. Life is on an even keel atm so I’ll PM you later with further details. As for this latest addition, it was heart-warming to see the gals ga-ga over Angelica and then reconnecting in the most primal of physical pleasures. I love the fact that Tina constantly falls for Bette and that this adoration is returned in full. They are each putting everything in to their relationship and being able to talk to each other is wonderful. This case of mistaken identity as a tour guide was LOL, Tina’s gentle amusement was sweet. Good to see Bette at her best even if she did fall asleep the previous night just as Tina was revealing her soul.I think that this run in with Faye is bringing out the best in Bette and Tina. As for their search for Cora, Richard was funny as he manhandled Jason. Intriguing stuff that I can wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Many, many thansk for returning and sharing this excellent adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL@Bette’s little fan club. XD And mmmmm for power suits!
Ahhhhhh……Bette in a power suit. Bette out of a power suit. Love them both! Hope this leed pans out. PPS!!