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Great Unexpectations Chapter 30
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While speaking, Bette casually leaned over to whisper into Tina’s ear and found herself dangerously close to a complete stranger. The unknown woman looked into Bette’s eyes and smiled. Bette, surprised to find this woman in Tina’s place, blushed and apologized. Her embarrassment was quickly replace by worry and she craned her neck seeking out her lover. Standing back, in the shadows of Bette’s impromptu fan club, Tina smiled and waved to Bette. When their eyes met, Bette exhaled a sigh of relief. She cast a glance that seemed to plead, ‘help’. Tina’s glance, amused and unsympathetic, answered back, ‘you’re on your own’.
The crowd, obviously mistaking Bette for a tour guide, and a well dressed one at that, began to grow anxious, waiting for the show to go on. Bette sensing the unease raised her eyebrows and shrugged her shoulders. She gave in to their unspoken demand and began to speak again. Tina chuckled to herself and sat on a bench, watching Bette hold sway over the ever growing crowd. Studying her form, and admiring the way she moved it, Tina began to foster an increasing sense of guilt over the damage that was sure to befall that power suit later that night.
Feeling her passions rise, and knowing there was nothing to be done about them at that moment, Tina removed herself from temptation. She wandered off into a different gallery leaving Bette, happily in her element, to fend for herself. It was twenty minutes before Bette found her standing before a rather large photograph. Very large. At least six feet on all sides. A size that Alice would refer to as "gi-normous".
"Jeff Wall", Bette whispered, standing directly behind Tina.
Tina shuddered. Startled and aroused. She closed her eyes and took in the scent of Bette’s hair. She leaned back into Bette’s protective arms. "He’s amazing", Tina said, still looking forward at the elaborately staged photograph. She could feel Bette’s smile against her cheek. "How’d you get away from your fans?", Tina teased.
"I told them that there would be a thirty minute intermission after which they could join me for a discussion in the Arms and Armor gallery."
Tina laughed. "What do you know about Arms and Armor?"
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Supercool to see you back in great form. I love your mix of suspense and B&T lovin’. Will there soon be a real proposal??
Glad to see your back. I am so loving this. PPS Thanks
Wow… this was some funny, intriguing, sexy and lovely gi-normus chapter!!! Angy was sooo sweet… she is like her momma B!! Mmm… Is T going to propose B someday?? Please don’t take so long to post, we miss you (and the story of course)!!! PPS!!
Bette falling asleep on Tina was adorable, but I’m glad they made up for missed opportunities the next day. It’s entirely plausible that a power-suited Bette might be mistaken for a tour guide and brilliantly rise to the occasion. What a terrific scene; I was mesmerized right along with Tina and the crowd. Can’t wait to see if Faye’s apparent breakthrough pans out. Thanks for posting!
great story loving it. are you from michigan if you are so i,m i flint
Well, well, well Red, welcome back and thanks for another great chapter. Md
Missed ya, Red! Bette falling asleep on Tina was funny, but it’s a good thing they were able to make up for it the next morning! PPS
Dang, hope that it is in the summer because the bay would be aweful cold in the winter. I love how much Bette and Tina love each other and are willing to show it. The day trip was funny with Bette garnering a fan following with her every move. I would have been front and center in that group and I would only be looking at her not the art work.
thx; come back soon.
Cagney and Lacey, huh? Which one of them got to play the “good” cop? Richard blew it… I thought Bette was supposed to be the scary one? And hell yeah for Bette in a power suit! That could never disappoint, nor can your writing. Great chapter, red. Thanks for the post.
And you were worried that no one would remember your story or read it?! LOL. Another great update – so many different moments/emotions, quite the fun ride I must say. I makes me want to go back and read this one from the beginning! Hope you’ll have time to keep on with your story, we’d all be devastated if you didn’t. PPS
Hey red, happy to see you back. Too funny with the museum scene. I can picture the crowd looking around for their guide after the intermission. Love the whispered nightly proposal also… just hope you allow Tina to vocalize it outside of Bette’s REM-cycle one time!! Anxious to see what lit Faye’s fire and what she finds in Traverse City. Love the story!
Great chapter. Love B&T’s love and they are sweet. Hope this is time to find Cora and ending the drama. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Red, Good to have you back and with this wonderful post you are most welcome. Life is on an even keel atm so I’ll PM you later with further details. As for this latest addition, it was heart-warming to see the gals ga-ga over Angelica and then reconnecting in the most primal of physical pleasures. I love the fact that Tina constantly falls for Bette and that this adoration is returned in full. They are each putting everything in to their relationship and being able to talk to each other is wonderful. This case of mistaken identity as a tour guide was LOL, Tina’s gentle amusement was sweet. Good to see Bette at her best even if she did fall asleep the previous night just as Tina was revealing her soul.I think that this run in with Faye is bringing out the best in Bette and Tina. As for their search for Cora, Richard was funny as he manhandled Jason. Intriguing stuff that I can wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Many, many thansk for returning and sharing this excellent adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL@Bette’s little fan club. XD And mmmmm for power suits!
Ahhhhhh……Bette in a power suit. Bette out of a power suit. Love them both! Hope this leed pans out. PPS!!