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Great Unexpectations Chapter 33
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Tina held Bette in her arms and let her cry. She knew it was the exhaustion that was primarily fueling the emotional outburst. "Sweetie. You’re exhausted. Come on. Let’s go to bed." She kissed her forehead.
Bette nodded. "I’m sorry Tina. Please forgive me. I don’t think I can do this without you. I just want you and Angie. That’s what’s most important to me. You and Angie."
"You don’t have to babe. Don’t worry. I’m still here. We’re ok." Tina led her to bed and tucked her in. "Stay here sweetie. I’ll be right back." Tina went back to the kitchen to turn off the lights but ended up standing there for a full minute trying not to cry for all of her worry. Without even thinking of it she took her cell phone off the charger and dialed. It wasn’t quite three a.m. in California, but fuck it.
"Hey Kit. It’s Tina. Sorry to call you so early…No. No we’re not ok. Listen up. I need a favor."
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Tina joined Bette in bed and snuggled into her snoring lover. She kissed her cheek and tried to sleep. It came fitfully and eventually not at all. By seven thirty a.m. she gave up on sleep and prepared for her shower, Bette still slept soundly.
Tina dressed and went to the kitchen to turn on the coffee maker. She sat outside in the brisk morning air trying to unwind from the drama of the last few hours. Thinking over her phone call to Kit. Smiling. Knowing that it would be the cure-all for anything that ailed Mama B. She closed her eyes and enjoyed the aroma of the brewing coffee.
She wandered down to the water and walked back and forth on the beach in front of her property. She stepped onto the dock and walked out over the water for about two hundred feet. She sat on the dock and watched the tiny minnows skirt the shadows of her dangling feet. The morning air invigorated her and she was filled with the desire to run. Not jog. Run. An all out run.
She ran on the sandy beach as far as she could at a break-neck speed.
Turns out that as far as she could run at that pace in the sand was five houses. To Richard’s house. He was outside enjoying his own morning drink, disguised as coffee. "Hey", he called out. "Whatcha doin’?" Tina, bent over and holding her waist, looked up and waved. "Hi", she called back and walked up the beach, up the yard, and to his back porch. "Hi," she said again trying to catch her breath. "I think I’m getting old", she laughed.
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Woah. Now what? Loved the Intimate Bette and Tina stuff.. even the breakdown was good.
Yes!! To the nolten hotness at the beginning of the chapter, to the surprise ending, (and also cos you’ve posted again), that was one of those triumphant-fist-in-the-air moments. It’s weird, but I think Faye’s death is making Bette and Tina stronger in a way. And now they’ve found Cora! I hope they can keep her safe. And I hope their efforts to keep Cora from the Black Hats and that jerk Mr Buckley doesn’t involve anything that lands Richard in jail… I’m still wondering: what was the favor Tina wanted from Kit? I’m stoked you’ve posted again, red. Ace chapter, thanks!
Erm… molten. (See? It was that hot I can’t type for my own brain mushiness.)
Yeh!! They found Cora, or Cora found them. It’s all good. Glad Tina was able to forgive Bette so quick. PPS!!
Awesome cliffhanger! I love the Tibette bonding too. Every time their relationship starts to go off track, they have the good sense to talk things out.
Great chapter! I especially loved the scene where Tina gets Bette to admit that her “sneaking out at night” wasn’t the smartest thing to do. But I can truly see Bette doing anything to avoid failure. Good thing Tina is there to support her. PPS.
Finally, they get a break. Thanks to Bette’s sneaking out and Tina getting mad at her and unable to sleep. If Tina had not decided to run and meet up with Richard they would have never come across Cora.
Thanks god finally Cora is here and now take her home and tell her everything. Glad B&T are ok. Please post more, thanks!
jp22, I can tell you what Tina wanted Kit to do, “bring Angelica to Michigan.” So happy to see this post tonight. And equally happy that Cora bumped into them, now hopefully they can get her back to California w/o her father knowing where she is and keep him from her. And maybe Richard can see that the bstard is arrested. Thaks for posting. PPS
Woohoo, they found her! Now comes the difficult part of convincing her to stay and listen. Great update. Please don’t scare us by telling us you are done with NC-17–you write them so well :)
Hey RE, I am totally GOB-SMACKED! After everythign that the gals and Richard have been through it is awesome that they have forund Cora. I reallly can’t wait to see how this all plays out. I really am hopeful of a happy ending as Tina just asked Bette to marry her. That would be the most magnificent finale after everything that they have been through. The beginning of this chapter demonstrated yet again why Bette and Tina have to end up together. Even when Bette resorted to old behaviors and tried to protect Tina, Tina calls her out and get Bette to admit her failing. This is Tina’s true power; getting to Bette’s heart and soul and making her face everythign that she is. Truly awesome. Can’t wait to read more of this fabulous Fan Fiction. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
What a chapter, red! Not to put myself in the horndog catagory, but glad you continued where the last post left off. So,so sexy and loved Tina continuing to ask her nightly question. I almost hate that they found Cora knowing that it signals the impending end to your fabulous story. Thanks for such a wonderful read!
well red, you’ve out done yourself again. the natives don’t seem as riled by this cliffhanger, maybe because it din’t end with Tina’s hands in bette’s pants! Excellent twist with the running into Cora, literally. it’s funny cause that’s what happens when i lose something – i look and look and can’t find it and then when i least expect it, voila, there it is right in front of my face. can’t wait to see what happens next but it better not be a month before i do! PPS!!!!!!
u sure worked that chapter. Great stuff.
This was a great chapter from beginning to end. Can’t wait for your next post. Thanks.
WOW!!!! Page 1 was so HOT!!!!! I am glad they found Cora. Thanks PPS
I love that Tina forced Bette’s hand and broke down that wall. I can’t wait for Tina’s surprise, I am assuming Kit is bringing Angelica to them. But most of all, WHOO-HOO, Cora has been found. A new round of drama is about to begin I am sure.