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Great Unexpectations Chapter 33
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"Jesus,T", she jumped, holding her chest. "You fucking scared the hell out of me."
"Oh really? I scared you ? Gee. I’m sorry Bette."
It wasn’t the tone of the sarcasm that worried Bette, but the imminent feeling that it would be followed by more angry Tina words. And the knowledge that the anger was well deserved. "Tina. Hold on. Let me explain."
"You’re damn right you’re gonna explain! What the hell Bette? Do you know how scared I was when I woke up alone? I tried to call you." She held up Bette’s cell phone. The display showed "Missed Call. Tina." "Thanks for leaving your phone behind. Not only did you go out alone, but you didn’t even take your cell phone. How fucking stupid is that?"
"Tina. I’m sorry. I wasn’t thinking."
"No shit!"
"Tina. I’m sorry I snuck out. I just didn’t want you to worry about me."
Tina got out of bed and put on her robe. She looked at Bette, so angry that she was unable to find words, and left the bedroom.
"Fuck", Bette whispered to herself. "That can’t be good." She scolded herself and ran after Tina. She found Tina in the kitchen, standing at the sink filling her water glass. "Tina-" Bette started.
"You just don’t get it, do you Bette?" Tina’s voice was now calmer. This, more than anything, scared Bette beyond the telling of it.
"Yes. I get it, Tina. I do."
"Oh really? Tell me. What do you get?"
Bette closed her eyes. She hated this part. Admitting her failures in their relationship. Admitting any failures. "We’re supposed to be a team."
"Yes." Tina set her water glass down on the nearby counter.
"And if I’m hurting, you want to know about it."
"Yes." Tina walked two steps closer to Bette.
"Even if you can’t do anything about it", Bette continued.
"But I’ll try", Tina said.
"You’ll try", Bette echoed.
"And I can’t keep… shutting you out", Bette cried.
Tina neared Bette and wiped her tears. "Then why do you?"
The touch of Tina broke all of Bette’s strength. She broke down and fell into Tina’s arms. "I don’t know Tina. I don’t know", she sobbed. "I’m sorry."
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Woah. Now what? Loved the Intimate Bette and Tina stuff.. even the breakdown was good.
Yes!! To the nolten hotness at the beginning of the chapter, to the surprise ending, (and also cos you’ve posted again), that was one of those triumphant-fist-in-the-air moments. It’s weird, but I think Faye’s death is making Bette and Tina stronger in a way. And now they’ve found Cora! I hope they can keep her safe. And I hope their efforts to keep Cora from the Black Hats and that jerk Mr Buckley doesn’t involve anything that lands Richard in jail… I’m still wondering: what was the favor Tina wanted from Kit? I’m stoked you’ve posted again, red. Ace chapter, thanks!
Erm… molten. (See? It was that hot I can’t type for my own brain mushiness.)
Yeh!! They found Cora, or Cora found them. It’s all good. Glad Tina was able to forgive Bette so quick. PPS!!
Awesome cliffhanger! I love the Tibette bonding too. Every time their relationship starts to go off track, they have the good sense to talk things out.
Great chapter! I especially loved the scene where Tina gets Bette to admit that her “sneaking out at night” wasn’t the smartest thing to do. But I can truly see Bette doing anything to avoid failure. Good thing Tina is there to support her. PPS.
Finally, they get a break. Thanks to Bette’s sneaking out and Tina getting mad at her and unable to sleep. If Tina had not decided to run and meet up with Richard they would have never come across Cora.
Thanks god finally Cora is here and now take her home and tell her everything. Glad B&T are ok. Please post more, thanks!
jp22, I can tell you what Tina wanted Kit to do, “bring Angelica to Michigan.” So happy to see this post tonight. And equally happy that Cora bumped into them, now hopefully they can get her back to California w/o her father knowing where she is and keep him from her. And maybe Richard can see that the bstard is arrested. Thaks for posting. PPS
Woohoo, they found her! Now comes the difficult part of convincing her to stay and listen. Great update. Please don’t scare us by telling us you are done with NC-17–you write them so well :)
Hey RE, I am totally GOB-SMACKED! After everythign that the gals and Richard have been through it is awesome that they have forund Cora. I reallly can’t wait to see how this all plays out. I really am hopeful of a happy ending as Tina just asked Bette to marry her. That would be the most magnificent finale after everything that they have been through. The beginning of this chapter demonstrated yet again why Bette and Tina have to end up together. Even when Bette resorted to old behaviors and tried to protect Tina, Tina calls her out and get Bette to admit her failing. This is Tina’s true power; getting to Bette’s heart and soul and making her face everythign that she is. Truly awesome. Can’t wait to read more of this fabulous Fan Fiction. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
What a chapter, red! Not to put myself in the horndog catagory, but glad you continued where the last post left off. So,so sexy and loved Tina continuing to ask her nightly question. I almost hate that they found Cora knowing that it signals the impending end to your fabulous story. Thanks for such a wonderful read!
well red, you’ve out done yourself again. the natives don’t seem as riled by this cliffhanger, maybe because it din’t end with Tina’s hands in bette’s pants! Excellent twist with the running into Cora, literally. it’s funny cause that’s what happens when i lose something – i look and look and can’t find it and then when i least expect it, voila, there it is right in front of my face. can’t wait to see what happens next but it better not be a month before i do! PPS!!!!!!
u sure worked that chapter. Great stuff.
This was a great chapter from beginning to end. Can’t wait for your next post. Thanks.
WOW!!!! Page 1 was so HOT!!!!! I am glad they found Cora. Thanks PPS
I love that Tina forced Bette’s hand and broke down that wall. I can’t wait for Tina’s surprise, I am assuming Kit is bringing Angelica to them. But most of all, WHOO-HOO, Cora has been found. A new round of drama is about to begin I am sure.